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  1. Toast

    Chapter 1

    Where is chapter two ?
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    Made Up Rules

    I loved this chapter and the humor.
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    Chapter 3

    This is fun to read.
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    Chapter 2

    I like Laura.
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    Chapter 1

    Guess what ? I have started another of your stories. Funny, I like it warts and all.
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    Chapter 1

    I enjoyed your story very much.
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    Story

    Nicely written, very charming, I have big smile.
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    Two Rebels

    Too short, need longer chapters.
  9. Enjoyed the start.
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    Part 20

    So Sonic stirs with the best of them.
  11. Happy ! Birthday ! Mattie ! ♥ !
  12. How Clean is your house ? Star Maids. They know how to clean it all.
  13. I liked the pizza/chapter title graphic. . You got some swell characters and a lot of humor and the story charms the reader.
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    Chapter 38

    Thanks for a good time reading.
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    Chapter 25

    Some times I think this is Huckleberry Finn and you are Mark Twain.
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    Chapter 24

    I usually wanted to kill my teachers.
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    Chapter 22

    Peter was right in his comments about blushing.
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    Chapter 19

    Really good chapter and an important one for the story.
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    Chapter 18

    Infectious and funny.
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    Chapter 17

    LOL, team mascot !
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    Chapter 13

    It was interesting to find out more about Phillips.
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    Chapter 12

    I like the shopping.
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    Chapter 11

    I think I smiled all the way thru this chapter.
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    Chapter 8

    I love the beach. Another fun time.
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