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  1. Toast

    Chapter 17

    A good chapter, thanks.
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    Chapter 16

    I really liked this chapter... The car and the accident... very poignant... and very much like real life.
  3. Good chapter, thanks.
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    Chapter 6

    This is wonderful, I really like how this ties into Attunga.
  5. HAPPY BIRTHDAY! KYLE ! ♥
  6. I like it, great start.
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    Chapter 15

    I remember... Kharmann Ghia, cool.
  8. 12.25.14 by Foster About half my measure, in years ago I planted a hemlock in the corner Of my wood It was just my size Not anymore I struggle to stand my same height While it towers below the giant oaks of old So I have a fondness On a day in winter When the sky is clearly blue And the hardwoods are gray And the chocolate leaves are ankle deep That here is a green so green Lit with the sunlight An evergreen tree It’s wondrous To see flocks of bluebirds Land among bowed limbs Even the l
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    Poem One, 12.25.14

    12.25.14 by Foster It’s a lie Down with the murky truth The obvious cover For the obvious… misunderstanding When it all stops inside When senses cease pretense I’m reconciled But hidden again Among All The dead and regrettable Lost of beauty Not ugliness… just the reality All alone with the light into the night Bothered with the lack Of dreams again I stiffen Often A posture of false Challenge Don’t come around anymore Don’t show your face 12.25.14 Christmas Day
  10. Congratulations!
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    Chapter 5

    Thanks, another wonderful chapter.
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    The world gone by

    Thank you for updating your story. I have missed it. Great new chapter.
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    Christmas in Zonei

    Enjoying your story, thanks.
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    Chapter 4

    I enjoyed that.
  15. HAPPY BIRTHDAY ! KC !
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    Chapter 1

    Yay, you made my night finding this posted. Thanks.
  17. Happy Birthday, Mark !
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    Chapter 7: Quarry

    Hey Jaro, this was unexpected... to see reviews for one of my silly stories... but thank you very much. You have been very kind and generous, thank you.
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    Intermezzo

    You created great characters here.
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    Chapter 1

    Good luck with your story, enjoyed the beginning.
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you. I don't know how you found my little story to read, but thanks for your time and comment.
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    Chapter 8

    I'm glad you posted again.
  23. , had fun reading this.
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