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Kileoli

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  1. Kileoli

    Chapter 13

    This was great and the plant and the wipe cards. I'm just thinking, and I want an honest answer, are there in Warwick one of these Amsterdam chain stores with weed supplies and you've been there eating cookies and drinking coffe!?
  2. Kileoli

    Chapter 12

    Just biting nails....I'm so glad I'm not into meat...not that kind of meat at least.
  3. Kileoli

    Chapter 11

    It's getting wilder and wilder. You redefined polyamory. It's good at least they can't make babies otherwise the town would run out of condoms... Wait a sec, there's a baby in the next book, are we going to get into this absurd horror movie male pregnancy or I can relax and rely on Charlie and his exes?! # the skirt girl ? I'm so bad with names😂 Charlie being the pet, Taine can probably get direct custody of the baby, right?
  4. Theo is a lost case if he tries to fight the evil creatures on his own. Jack and Vee have to speed up. And now we know Cassandra was a puppet too.
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    Amalgamate

    That was way too much detailed sex, I hope @chris191070is happy now or not complete until he gets James and Charlie in bed. So are you confessing there is another Gabriel and co story? The Frederick earns lots of money by killing the senator but then you made it sound like he's someone else from the guy warning Gabriel and breaking into his house. Let's see if Scott finds out something
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    Chaos Maybe Not

    That was a nice frustrating story. They almost came out to everyone and no one and it was nice to have such understanding parents. Hope Aarons mom didn't try to make him sleep with Sarah. I would have kissed Steven in front of her to just get rid of her.
  7. Kileoli

    Chapter 10

    I'm reading it. It's so awesome and mean. Poor Simon. And there's no plothole, it's perfekkkkt!
  8. Kileoli

    Chapter 10

    Ok the question to Tyler and Charlies immunity is answered but what about Chloe, Mrs. Hartley, and Gregory. BTW Matt is also bonded to Lynix who is immortal, doesn't that work? And thanks for the idea of tea cup pyjamas, it's added to my Amazon wishlist
  9. Kileoli

    Mousetrap

    It's so annoying so who's this guy following Gabriel? It doesn't look like he wants to kill him or the senator. Is he a distraction so we don't see the real killer from Mehmet?!
  10. Kileoli

    Intervention

    I guess it's too late. Your reputation is ruined. @Jason Rimbaudwhen do publish according to different time zones, then we get more chapters, right? I guess it's worth discussing it with the admins or...you publish 2 in 1.
  11. I'm glad you liked it. I spent way too much time playing so it might be there's too much blah blah. Honestly in the first book is way too blah, im gonna edit it probably sometime. I suggest when it gets too boring just do skim and go to the next chapter.
  12. Kileoli

    Intervention

    If i do the math right, there should be like5-6 more chapters? This is so annoying to wait. I'm gonna book my ticket to Hawaii to meet Gabriel there, and also till this story is complete.
  13. Kileoli

    Realization

    Another theory is...that's you with all your power 😂 I somehow managed to miss this chapter yesterday but I'm glad I did. Now I don't have to wait
  14. I can send you the recipe if you have time or wait till @drsawzall makes it and ask him nicely to send you a piece 😂
  15. Exactly thats the case. And he's not alone or Liam is naive and even after so many years fall in the traps 😁
  16. It's a matter of measuring method and correct conversion. Maybe it was in cm 😂
  17. Kileoli

    Prologue

    This one is so different and promising.
  18. The apartment held the quiet density of evening, the kind that settled into corners as the light outside thinned but didn’t fully disappear. A single lamp near the couch cast a warm, uneven circle across the room, leaving the kitchen half in shadow, the edges of the counter catching just enough light to outline the objects Liam had arranged earlier—knife aligned with the cutting board, a glass placed precisely at the edge, a folded dish towel squared. Rick lay stretched across the couch, one s
  19. Kileoli

    Chapter 2

    I'm not sure if I asked the right thing anymore! *Runs away and hide*
  20. Kileoli

    Chapter 2

    So are we dealing with rats or warriors waiting to kill? I wonder what happens if I nicely ask @Topher Lydonfor a dinosaur story?!
  21. Kileoli

    Chapter 9

    It's always good to have a demon/demons on your side. Edgar is definitely not done considering we're still on ch9 unless someone makes Kebab out of that not Vegan plant.
  22. Wait, did I accidentally send you my notes to part 2 or why are suggesting Liam to drink? He tried Absinthe 80%, one of his worse decisions ever, that thing was horrible to drink and causes hours of headache. I think everyone has a collection of things they can't let go, it's part of us and defines us. I have a box full of baby stuff attached to crazy memories, we gave away almost all baby stuff but not those in my treasure box, it's stupid but I like to have something to show the kids when they are older. There is actually a part 2 and 3 since the Aussie (ex-boy) friend was here for four days, I have the notes and plots but it probably gets boring. Although it never gets boring for Rick and his other allies to annoy Liam, I guess he's just so naive and easy to piss off. On your way, ( I gotta find something in English or translate one). It's not really complicated, it just takes soooo much time.
  23. Kileoli

    Illusive

    You might write a story with/for @chris191070
  24. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    I like them and Val. I want a sword too, you know the light expensive one... Or any other sword will do.
  25. Medovik, my nightmare cake. All in all, it was a nice visit from my Aussie guy and now my English is promoted from German-English to Australian-German-English. Zat ist very good, oder?
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