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But the Delorean is not ready yet, and it probably doesn't purr..... Wait a sec. Is that Orel and Finn in the Delorean heading to Alvin for a round of roles and dices?
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Oh no. I really had to accept the challenge. I opened the door, music loud in the headphones, making up new numbers, I really tried to be nice to them but it was damned cold. Didn't I say I don't like snow? At least I let them go their way into the cold wonderful forest. And thanks now I have it looped in my playlist. I even thought of watching the series but they stopped streaming it on Netflix end of 2025. I wonder if PB is Lydia and who is Jake? Kyle?😅
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Chapter 2 - New Beginnings
Kileoli commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 2 - New Beginnings
It was nice seeing Marcus giving himself a second chance but what was with the ending? It looked like the calm before storm. And do we get James and Marcus as a couple?😂 -
Liam sat slouched in an office chair with wheels that rolled too easily for his liking, one foot hooked around the central spoke to keep himself from drifting backward as he leaned. The controller lay warm and familiar in his hands, plastic worn smooth where his thumbs rested. The room was mostly dark, its edges softened by the glow of two monitors, everything else reduced to suggestion: the corner of a desk, an abandoned mug, the faint reflection of himself in black glass. On the main scre
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That's an interesting view, when the characters start running their own stories. I can totally feel it when I throw melodrama and chain killers at them and they leave the scene sitting on a swing eating ice cream totally avoiding the drama. This is not true about all characters, some bend to my will. And that's why I throw them out of the stories. I just wonder which character is on a joy ride now. I can totally offer him a test drive in a VW. 😁 The weather is not the best but he can definitely go over 150 mph.
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Orel has a proper job to finance his home and a mentor. It's just Finn who needs an invitation to Orels new home or they should pay a visit to IKEA, buy their own bed and rug. Garrett can donate the vase and they may get the flowers from Ms. Patel. How Orel sees the world and analyzes it was the best in the chapter with the final decision of joining the chaos.
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At least Brad didn't give up on Lyn and Alexander, but then he was the one pushing them apart. Still I don't feel sorry for Brad, sick or not, it doesn't justify being an ass.
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What a twist. I was hoping for team Lydia and Oliver, but bamm you took away the auditor. Now Finn and Orel have to rely on glitter and donuts coming from Kyle and Rett. But how did Ollie finance the checks? I thought Orel had the money and Tarquin had already spent Ollie's share.
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Sorta funny when I was reading about the band , I thought of NSYNC and BSB, not one direction. Gabriel walking randomly into Sean in the park. Sean looking for a way to hide from his band mates and Gabriel checking the possibilities. There should be some hidden places for something quick between those two, right? And I really like Tom. He's definitely gonna save Gabriel's sorry ass one way or another.
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Hi Nikita, welcome and enjoy reading. There should be something for you that you like.
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No? Not one single kid? Then you have to sit at their kitchen table and watch their daily debates😅🤔 It might be that your grandchildren behave to impress you. Or it can be that these two kids are a bit different. They do have Liam/Rick's genes somehow since the two worked really hard to create these little monsters😁
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Only the big bad wolf can save the poor little Jack ,lost in an old misery. Jack has definitely seen some part of Theos reality. Still he has to believe in himself and not to follow the kind evil voice.
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Finn should call Lydia for back up. Orel actually knows how to deal with Tarquin now that he has his place, but then Tarquin has his men who can blow the extra house, it's almost standing on prayers and magic.
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The kids were there, at least they were in the last chapter of "snow" book with the idea of the yellow snow. If they sound so old, then Liam and Rick should be ancient. So it's something like this Liam is 41, Rick 35, Hermine 8 and Tiffany 5. They also have a gecko as pet, his name's Eddie. I also started with another story Ctrl+s... which tells the story of how Rick and Liam met.
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I thought I just write them in random short stories, but then it would be a bit annoying for the reader not knowing who they are dealing with or having to read other stories, so I hope it works.
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Rick was the kind of man people trusted instinctively, which was unfortunate for everyone involved, because it meant he was regularly handed responsibilities he never asked for and problems that should have belonged to entire committees. He spoke clearly. He listened carefully. He smiled at the right moments and frowned at the right ones. He knew how systems worked—legal systems, financial systems, institutional systems—and more importantly, he knew how they failed. When Rick entered a room
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That was really mean and real. Sometimes it feels there is no way out of such situations and the bullies keep on going, getting more motivated. So hopefully can Marcus start something better.
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It's awesome how Orel sees things and claims them, a wise ghost with a new friend. And now has Finn two allies he can rely on Andrew and Garrett. So who's gonna defend the fortress when Tarquin comes with fire. Finn should repair the oven soon so Orel can bake his magical muffins using them as ammunition against Tarquin's army.
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Chapter 1: The car that purrs
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 1: The car that purrs
Btw he didn't have the key, he never got it from Julia, that's why she was sitting there 😅 -
Chapter 1: The car that purrs
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 1: The car that purrs
Actually he did not run the red light. Sometimes the yellow phase is pretty long so it is better to keep on driving, since almost every one drive and if you brake you probably cause an accident. Thinking about it, the colors of the traffic light are green, orange and red so for orange we say it was cherry green. It really does not make sense and is not funny in English,😅my bad. PS: There are very few countries you can push the electric cars to their speed limit. -
Rick heard Liam before he saw him, which was usually a bad sign only if you believed plans were meant to be announced in advance instead of assembled mid-motion like a jazz solo that assumed everyone else would keep up. The underground garage had a particular talent for turning normal life into theatre: the lighting was clean and bright without being flattering, the concrete was pale and polished in a way that made every footstep sound deliberate, and the air held that sterile blend of dust, rub
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Rick likes order, rules and the fact that he is always right. Liam is an endless chaos, making the world look more complicated with his mathematical formulas and magical scientific crap. Putting these two together in the same room causes nothing more than misery, disorder, and fun. Malicious Glee is a collection of short stories following Rick and Liam—partners who love each other fiercely, argue publicly, flirt dangerously, and take an almost academic pleasure in pushing each other's boundaries. Warning: Although the whole plot, jokes, scenes and thoughts are mine, I used a lot of help from AI. So my apologies.
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Tick Tock, time is up! "Background music : Hunger games" So the game is on now. Tarquin and his crew, against Orel and his team. Orel surprised me with his strength, so let's see who's writing the roles and games.
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And I just realized I wrote a new story with dungeons and dragons without reading these crazy stuff. So I guess I gotta write something about purring cars, otherwise it wouldn't be fair. *Starts a new series just for purring cars*
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I can't believe I started with the second book. There was so much into the story. How Orel and Oliver walk in, the Cleric, good choice. And the game, I so much miss those nights throwing dices and waiting for the mighty bolt to strike the Orc.
