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  1. Kileoli
    Ok, I like Kyle but then he might be somehow disappointed with Morgan's comment on his borrowed body. Doesn't look like a good way for intimacy. So next stop, shopping 🛒
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    Kim can learn a few things from Reyes.
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    Thanks. Then I have more reason to procrastinate with writing. It was sorta funny, while I was waiting for my story to be approved by admins, you posted a story in the same genre or you had used the Scottish accent which is part of the next character in my story. That's when I thought I probably had felt the inspiring vibes from your stories without knowing. :😁
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    Late autumn in New York came down like a judgment. There was no soft edges to it, no easing into cold weather—just a sudden, deliberate shift in the air that made the city feel sharper, harder, more awake than its citizens wanted to be. The kind of cold that slid beneath collars and cuffs with the silent confidence of something that had done this a thousand times before. It still carried the smell of damp concrete, burnt coffee, and subway heat—a city refusing to slow down just because the seaso
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    Donovan Stevens has spent his life mastering distance- between himself and the dead, between himself and the living, but an overlooked detail throws him into a shadowed world of anonymous digital holes entangling him in a connection that blurs the line between professional detachment and personal desire. Warning: Although the whole plot, jokes, scenes and thoughts are mine, I used a lot of help from AI. I might go through the whole story and rewrite it myself for now my apologies.
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    That was too easy and the Kyle is suspicious. For a second I thought it was one of his friends coming to take him home. Whatever it is Morgan doesn't want his key in some physical chambers. Scientists have a habit of breaking things to understand them.
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    Fairway to Heaven

    Kileoli commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Fairway to Heaven

    I can totally understand that you don't want 20 chapters out of it but I thought it would be a shame to use in only a chapter. The Danny boy has earned himself a few more chapters and more stories, and the boss sounds like an empathetic person to get to know 🤐 I wanna meet the captain's son too. (Not personally, he doesn't seem my type 😁)
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    Fairway to Heaven

    Kileoli commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Fairway to Heaven

    Wow, that was good. Case solved in half day. If things were so efficient, were some guy jobless. But it was a good work on how trackable we are these days And when comes the next case?😁
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    I know writing is a slow process when it is supposed to be good. So on my next haunt I have to see where I can find a beta reader and an editor as my ally.
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    Thanks, I'm gonna use this tool responsibly
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    Hi everyone , I'm sorta new here, but not really since I've been checking gay authors since 2013, on and off editing but never writing really. I even met my partner here. Now that I have to sit down and write my dissertation, I let the lord of procrastination tempt me into writing a story. It's probably going to be creepy and oddly horrible but I just want to get it done so I can finally go back to my manuscript before it's published by some smart people Hope things work and can find a bunch of friends.
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    It feels so unfair. Sky is paying for an attempt at love and getting no chance to fix things. But then that's life. Good chapter, please hit some sense into Ryan in the next one.
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