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  1. Kileoli
    Klebber didn't have it easy, but then it's nice to see Dennis understands and tries his best to catch Klebbers attention the right way. The question is how long Klebb needs to move on and notice Dennis and how long is Dennis going to hide his true identity.
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    Wow, that was so intense but well deserved, and Theo worked hard for his reward
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    That was sorta sweet, Brad needing someone close, but then that explains why he sleeps around Are we getting any close to the point when they all break up?
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    Are they really interconnected?😁
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    Apart from Lyn who sees the world differently, I guess the others pretty much know what they are doing. If Bella knows Brad and Luke well enough, she probably guesses what's going on. So more importantly is what she is hiding and what happened between Lyn and Brad 8 years ago.🤨
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    Good point. Who knows? Does AI have tendency to abuse and kill people? I hope we're not that far. I wasn't aiming for that genre.
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    Benedict Michell lifted his guitar case off the chair with the exaggerated care of a man handling something both precious and mildly accusatory. “Right then,” he told it, as if the instrument had been the one cancelling plans all week. “We’re gaun oot. Behave yerself. Na drama.” Jessy watched from the rug with the concentrated seriousness of a dog supervising a surgical checklist. Her ears were perked, head tilted, tail making a slow, anticipatory sweep against the floor. Benedict
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    That's the question I ask myself when dealing with the outliers in my data, are there error or do they lie there to outstand the model?😁
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    Donovan sat on the edge of the couch with his phone resting in his palm, the screen dark, as if it were waiting for him to make the first mistake. Outside, the city had settled into its late-night register—the hour when sound thinned but didn’t disappear, when sirens were farther apart and laughter carried farther than it should. Rain traced thin, uncertain lines down the window, catching the streetlight just long enough to look intentional before slipping out of shape. His apartment smelle
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    Benedict Michell woke with the feeling of being watched. It was the sort of awareness that slid under the skin before thought had time to form, a quiet certainty rather than a jolt of fear. He didn’t open his eyes at first. There was a warm body pressed against his side, solid breathing, unmistakenly alive, a reassuring presence fitted against him with the unselfconscious certainty of something that belonged there. His first instinct was to lean into it, to steal heat, to pretend for a few more
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    Unseen Hands

    Kileoli commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Unseen Hands

    So as always some guy who knows about classified stuff. Then a system against humanity or people or ...and some biological experiment went wrong.... Still your story keeps me intrigued. If it was some Netflix series, I would have stopped long ago. 😁
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    I feel bad for Gabe. He's acting like such a gentleman letting Skylar root for Ryan or us he going to claim Skylar in another scandalous kiss again? And the logic of football and how the whole thing can change lives of teenagers will remain a mystery to me.
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    I try not to disappoint you
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    Ok, I like Kyle but then he might be somehow disappointed with Morgan's comment on his borrowed body. Doesn't look like a good way for intimacy. So next stop, shopping 🛒
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    Kim can learn a few things from Reyes.
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    Thanks. Then I have more reason to procrastinate with writing. It was sorta funny, while I was waiting for my story to be approved by admins, you posted a story in the same genre or you had used the Scottish accent which is part of the next character in my story. That's when I thought I probably had felt the inspiring vibes from your stories without knowing. :😁
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    Late autumn in New York came down like a judgment. There was no soft edges to it, no easing into cold weather—just a sudden, deliberate shift in the air that made the city feel sharper, harder, more awake than its citizens wanted to be. The kind of cold that slid beneath collars and cuffs with the silent confidence of something that had done this a thousand times before. It still carried the smell of damp concrete, burnt coffee, and subway heat—a city refusing to slow down just because the seaso
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    Donovan Stevens has spent his life mastering distance- between himself and the dead, between himself and the living, but an overlooked detail throws him into a shadowed world of anonymous digital holes entangling him in a connection that blurs the line between professional detachment and personal desire. Bottles don't choose their shores is a crime novel with a bit of humor that explores anonymity, desire and the consequences of reaching for someone you were never meant to find.
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    That was too easy and the Kyle is suspicious. For a second I thought it was one of his friends coming to take him home. Whatever it is Morgan doesn't want his key in some physical chambers. Scientists have a habit of breaking things to understand them.
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    Fairway to Heaven

    Kileoli commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Fairway to Heaven

    I can totally understand that you don't want 20 chapters out of it but I thought it would be a shame to use in only a chapter. The Danny boy has earned himself a few more chapters and more stories, and the boss sounds like an empathetic person to get to know 🤐 I wanna meet the captain's son too. (Not personally, he doesn't seem my type 😁)
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    Fairway to Heaven

    Kileoli commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Fairway to Heaven

    Wow, that was good. Case solved in half day. If things were so efficient, were some guy jobless. But it was a good work on how trackable we are these days And when comes the next case?😁
  22. Kileoli
    I know writing is a slow process when it is supposed to be good. So on my next haunt I have to see where I can find a beta reader and an editor as my ally.
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    Thanks, I'm gonna use this tool responsibly
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    Hi everyone , I'm sorta new here, but not really since I've been checking gay authors since 2013, on and off editing but never writing really. I even met my partner here. Now that I have to sit down and write my dissertation, I let the lord of procrastination tempt me into writing a story. It's probably going to be creepy and oddly horrible but I just want to get it done so I can finally go back to my manuscript before it's published by some smart people Hope things work and can find a bunch of friends.
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    It feels so unfair. Sky is paying for an attempt at love and getting no chance to fix things. But then that's life. Good chapter, please hit some sense into Ryan in the next one.
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