Joseph OHara

So much is now settled but now, so much is not settled. The hard part comes with balancing all the different parts that will make Kent's future. In my opinion, I believe Kent's life is in Thailand. Between Marvin and Devon, Kent found a new family one that provides the love and potential for a future of happiness add accomplishment. There's even the possibility of expanding his father's business in Thailand. Let's hope that Kent weighs all the possible options and consults with Marvin and hopefully comes up with a conclusion that keeps them in the life that he has just started which is beginning to work for him................. finally! @Tony S., another great contribution to the ongoing saga of Kent's life. Thank you again for another chapter of a well thought out plot, of well written prose, and providing us with something to think about.

An excellent chapter Dodger. I'm somewhat disappointed that Rory's status with Robbie is still up in the air though. I was sure hoping they'd be back together by now. Interesting development on the cause of the pregnancy and probably not as far fetched as some might assume. Bored rich kids can do pretty strange things to gain attention. I really hate to think about Robbie's baby growing up under the Influence of Don's church. After what we seen of his fellow members It almost sounds like a fate worse than death. Please don't leave me hanging so long in the next chapter as I'm really concerned about Robbie's relationship with Rory. This is a great plot line and if there's anything I can do to assist you in editing or whatever let me know. Thank you and all the best Dodger.

It is nice to see Kent is finally opening up to Marvin. It serves two purposes. It shares the pain plus it brings them closer. Intimate details increase intimacy which Kent really needs. Beautiful writing Tony, as always, Thank you for sharing this wonderful and heartfelt story. You are a marvelous writer and the way you put your thoughts together on paper infers to the reader the characters' emotions so much more and so much more powerfully than just stating the obvious.

Normality for Kent seems to be right around the corner now. It will still take time, it will still take work, but it looks like it's coming. Kent seems to be able to adjust his position in life a little better now. Hard work, therapy, and the medication seem to be achieving results. It appears he can now bring Marvin into his life and position Ken where he needs to be in his memory. Tony, this is a very interesting and quite accurate study of human emotions and you're to be commended for describing and handling it so well. I feel I must thank you profusely for writing such an interesting plot, touching an area that is so unique in this forum, and doing it so well.

Well, Niran has been put in this place. Kent now lives with Peace of Mind and in so doing has enabled Marvin and Devon to go back to their normal lives and relax. What more can one ask as a solution to what appeared to be a severe problem? Hopefully this is it with Niran. Although, one can never tell with people like him. The story continues to be a wonderful study of human nature entertaining us with an intriguing plot that is well thought out and well presented. Thank you Tony for a wonderful story.

One of the saddest endings I've ever seen in a story. I'm heartbroken in spite of the fact that's fiction. I have nothing further to say.

Niran appears to be slipping somewhat. Advantage Kent. Tony, that was a very clever chapter. You are building intrigue in a very unique way making the story all the better. You're doing so well with this and I thank you once again for such brilliant entertainment.

That was a really great story, Lee! Sometimes it is nice to have something a little different and this sure was! Sure glad Russel was able to remain connected. Thanks again for the great entertainment. Looking forward to your next contribution.

It's about time things were coming together for Kent. Luckily he's been coached by people with his best interest in mind and therefore has done everything necessary to present the proper response. His supporters are now ready to move more aggressively and hopefully Niran gives up. I marvel at the creativity of this story. Tony, you are doing an excellent job in presenting a polished and intricate story that provides much entertainment for those of us who are reading it. Thank you, Tony.

It looks like something will come to a head soon. Getting the estate settled and final should now be an absolute priority. It is time for an active investigation against Niran. This has been one-sided for too long. Pete definitely needs to step it up a notch. Once again, Tony, I need to compliment you on a well constructed story and an interesting plot. Thank you for entertaining us.

A very poignant tale @Mark Ponyboy Peters. Thank you again Mark. Your story telling and your plots are much appreciated by many of us. Your entry into our lives makes it just that much better it more ways than one.

Now that Kent is concentrating on a solution, healing should come more quickly. Something needs to be done about Niran though. Pete needs to get more proactive also. It is good the medication is working although marginally as yet. I think Marvin should be accompanied as well. If you Kent loses anyone close to him it might be his undoing. Maybe the entire family needs to be brought into what's going on. Time will tell.................

Once again, Geron Kees, I want to thank you for this wonderful story in your conclusion of the Mooi series. All of your stories are so entertaining and most enjoyable. I always enjoy a creative plot that is well edited as well as devoid of gratuitous sex for just the sake of sex. Thank you!

Not only does Marvin need to know but we need to make sure that everyone gets some form of protection.....QUICKLY!. His and Devon's life are too important to risk. Also keeping tabs on people and keeping them together makes it simpler to protect everyone. Great writing and great plot, Tony.

Another incredible adventure by Geron Kees! Geron, you never fail to exceed my expectations. Thank you again.

What a wonderful beginning to what I assume will be another masterpiece by Geron Kees ! I look forward to reading the rest of this series. Thank you for writing this, Geron.

Great story! Geron Kees always does a fine job, both with plot and the precision of his presentation. A pleasure to read and enjoy. Your topics vary between the wild blue yonder to home on earth but always please. Thank you Geron!

Just joining this story now. I've read all the chapters up to this point I find it quite intriguing. This is certainly a novel idea and I'm quite interested in reading the following chapters as they arrive. Very good, @Lee Wilson ! Keep up the fine work and thanks for the entertainment.

I guess Niran really plans to play dirty now. Kent has some great relatives.......NOT! Greed is certainly the cause of so many problems worldwide and unfortunately Kent's family is somewhat riddled with greed. I appreciate him keeping Marvin out of it because I don't see Marvin being able to handle the rough stuff it if they came after him. On the other hand, Marvin needs to know, just in case as well as the fact Marvin saw part of the interaction. I hope Pete gets on it quickly because this is really the last thing that Kent needs in his current state. Great intrigue, Tony, I guess you felt the story needed some shaking up right now. The quality of your writing remains strong, both in plot and execution. Thank you again for the entertainment!

Things are still very tenuous for Kent. Thank heavens he's taking his medication. Marvin is still doing his best but Kent doesn't quite reveal enough to allow him to be that successful. Hopefully time will allow full openness and Marvin can make some deeper inroads with Kent. Tony, Your analysis and description of human emotions is excellent and what you're trying to show us is coming through loud and clear. Excellent!

This was truly a remarkable story. I know I'm going to miss the characters until you can get the next story going that includes them. I'm really disappointed that Seth won't be a regular part of things but that's life or maybe death. 😁 @Josh Aterovis, you've done such a wonderful job with the entire Killian series and I can't wait to see it go on. I sincerely hope that Jacy we'll be returning also. Thank you many times over for the intrigue, for the intricate plots, and for such a wonderful cast of characters.

Hopefully, Kent stays on his medication. He just might with Marvin looking on. Maybe recovery is in sight now, not close, but somewhere. This remains a remarkable study of human emotions. Tony, you are doing a great job with what is not just an interesting plot but a unique character study of a man in emotional pain. Thank you for your contribution to my entertainment!

What a wonderful story! It was heartwarming, had an actual plot, and It consisted of characters that had brains in their heads instead of just a sex drive. @Bill W, thank you so much for sharing and entertaining us.

It's about time Kent finally opened up to the possibilities. He may just be on the road to recovery from this depression and PTSD. Marvin's a good person and I think he has the ability to draw Kent out further. Tony, Your study of emotions and people is wonderful. Thank you.

In my opinion the ending was incomplete. It was less a matter of good or bad than it was being inconclusive It was a great story in so many ways up until the ending. When you live with a character or should I say many characters, for so long it's nice to know what their next step was as opposed to just dropping the mic. I wish there had been a Epilog to give us a little hint where their lives went. Good bad or indifferent incomplete is incomplete.