Joseph OHara

BEAUTIFUL!!! Such an in depth description of love, a deep undying love. Your words and imagery are so powerful. Your writing is second to none. I am anxious to see this story play out. I'm sure each of us who are reading it has an idea where we think it will go but I am sure your writing will bring it somewhere that exceeds any of our expectations. Thank you for this beautiful beginning, We all look forward to seeing more. Thank you Nuno!

I think we're getting someplace. I truly feel the boys will be together very soon. This has been a wonderful, an emotional, and very stressful story at times but I am so pleased we have been blessed with-it. Thank you @Tony S. for allowing us to read it. You have been a blessing to us all! Now bring them back together and all will be right with the world. ☺️ You are an excellent writer and so good with the plots. Thank you again!

A great foundation to a story that could go anywhere. I can hardly wait to see where that is. Thank you for starting a third piece to your collection.

What a fantastic character study! This is a love story that is unequaled In history! What you have done @Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro is just amazing. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. I am forever in your debt for being allowed to read this marvelous story. Just looked I see you have started a third. Thank you,

It is nice to see the compatibility increasing between Killian and Jacy. I and, I am sure, Killian were getting a little tired of the manipulation by both Micah and Asher. Jacy appears to be more of an open book and probably more Killian's style if he'd stop to think about it. Killian doesn't require intrigue in his love life as he gets plenty of it in his profession. As far as the storyline, it looks like they may have a lead that could take them someplace. Time will tell. @Josh Aterovis, you are doing an excellent job with the story as well as the quality of the presentation (i.e. proofreading, etc.). Thanks again, especially now that the plot line is ramping up again.

AHHH, THE GAME'S AFOOT! It appears the boys may have success after all. They're both so close now. Let us not allow fate to let them take the wrong path and then not end up together. @Tony S.you are doing a great job in every respect. Great plot, superb writing skills and proofreading, warm leading characters, and a great supporting cast. Thank you so much for this wonderful story. You are much appreciated! You have set a high bar for your next contribution to literature!

This is a really sweet story about two young boys coming together and finding themselves. It's done tastefully and the proofreading is excellent which makes it a pleasure to read. I am curious to see where the plot goes eventually but the set up in the first two chapters gives it a great deal of promise. Thank you@Mark Ponyboy Peters.

What a beautiful chapter! I think they're getting close to coming back together. I know Matt is more than ready but it seems that Kitt is coming closer too. @Tony S., you are doing a great job with this story and I know that others as well as myself truly appreciate the effort you have put into it. Thank you!

Between his messed up love triangle and his nightmares I think it's time for Killian to go into therapy. He definitely needs to reduce his stress levels. As far as love interests, Jacy might good partner from the standpoint that they're on a similar wavelength with the Spirit world. Thank you @Josh Aterovis for continuing to roll out the chapters on a regular basis. You still haven't given us anything important regarding the investigation but this was a good sidebar in the life of Killian.

This is more than a story! It should be classified as "classical literature." @Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro, You have captured the emotions of the best of romance novels at an unbelievable level, added courtroom drama, and all the elements of a national treasure in literature. Such a wonderful story and I thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Here we go! Finally some positive movement. Two boys we have learned to love and care for appeared to be on the verge of reuniting. It looks like their world may come back together again in the not too distant future. This story that you are writing has been a masterpiece of emotions. You've done an excellent job with both of your primary characters. Those of us who have had trouble sleeping some nights because of our worry, even though it's a fictional story, are thankful that things are coming together for them. @Tony S., You have produced a masterful work and we are much obliged.

Not much plot progress in this chapter. Kilian still with extreme indecision in his love life and nothing on the investigation. This is not to say that it wasn't an important part of the overall plot. Hopefully the next chapter moves forward with the investigation. The writing continues to be beautiful but marching in place gets to one after a while. Thank you for continuing to write this very entertaining story @Josh Aterovis Looking forward to Chapter 18.

An excellent start ! I look forward to seeing more chapters of this story and I'm eager to see where it progresses. Your plot, writing style, and proofreading are excellent! It makes it a pleasure to read and I hope to read more very quickly. Thank you @Mark Ponyboy Peters

At last! Beautiful writing but keep the progress moving. Don't forget we're suffering right along with Matt and Kitt. Thank you, @Tony S.

It s definitely a great story and well written! We do need to get off center sooner rather than later now. The suspense has gone on long enough. We all need to see the beginning of resolution and we need it now. Please give us at least a small break in the impasse. We've grown to love and respect these two boys and based on that, watching them suffer is gnawing away at us. Give us at least a small break now @Tony S. Thanks again for the entertainment you are providing for us.

Come on let it happen! Its time for the two to quit suffering. You're doing a great job with the story but it's time for them to meet again, no matter what. Good going Tony. I know you can do it now!

This chapter has done a good job of setting up the next step. So. with all the known parties identified Killian at least has some things to work with. I assume in the next chapter they will pick up the pace a little on the investigation. Once again, the plot seems to be well thought out, written well, and well proofread making it a pleasure to read. Another excellent piece of work @Josh Aterovis

RELIEF!! Finally we have a way forward. By the fact Matt is still looking for him, Kitt now must realize he needs to do something about it. Good old Tom to the rescue. He knows what needs to be done and will guide Kitt to pull his head out of the sand. Hopefully the two boys we'll come together soon and I can finally get some sleep at night. For all the torment and desperation, this is a beautiful story. It is so well done, plot is well thought out, and the proofreading is excellent. Thank you Tony!

At least no horrendous cliffhanger has been added to the mix. 😁 This chapter accomplished some busy work to get some things out of the way. Now, hopefully the next chapter will bring us a little closer to the solution on the case and a receptionist. Nice smooth writing hopefully leading to a crescendo that will satisfy some of my curiosity. Don't need or want the solution yet, just like to see some interaction between the major parties to get some things accomplished. The priority now is to get Jase out of the clink. Micah's situation needs a conclusion too. Good going @Josh Aterovis.

I only started reading this two days ago which is why I haven't commented on each chapter. Overall I give it high marks for organization, excellent proofreading, literary skills, and plot. I must admit that some of it caused considerable anguish in anticipation of what might be to come. My only true disappointment was the fact that Yeison was cast aside by Hunter. I had high hopes that Hunter would not disappoint him as he has, thinking that he would mature after his disappointing past with poor Rory. I really fell for the purity I saw in Yeison's heart. his loyalty and love for Hunter, and his kindly nature. He so disserved more in life than his humble and deprived situation and treatment he endured from Miguel. Well, nothing in life is guaranteed but there might be time still for a happy ending for Yeison with someone more dependable that Hunter. I truly hope he has a better and more important future opportunity than that of a gay barber considering the educational opportunity he has been lucky enough to obtain for high school. (If he were a real person and not a fictional character, I would be inclined to sponsor a scholarship to university knowing what we know about him.) He appears to be capable of much more in life and disserves an opportunity to escape his poverty and help his family. He just needs someone in his corner. I guess I am just a softy with strong feelings for the underdog. Great writing skills and complements to Little Buddha!

Tony, this is a fantastic story. You're catching their emotions so beautifully and it really adds to the story. This is certainly a cliffhanger also from the standpoint that were sitting on the edge of our seats waiting for them to hopefully somehow find each other again. Matt's anguish is so palpable! Also, I really suffered right along with Kitt as he tried to keep himself together. It was so intense at times that I really had trouble sleeping a couple of nights. You're doing a great job. Keep them coming as quickly as you can so we can once again sleep comfortably. 😁

It was nice to see some progress in the investigation (although not much). Looking forward to Wednesday's chapter. Thanks for getting this one posted early. I am enthralled with the story and you are really doing a great job with a truly interesting plot. Thanks again for moving it along @Josh Aterovis.

Piecemealing this out in little bits and chunks is driving me insane! Are you writing a story or trying to give me a coronary? LOL Your writing is excellent and you're doing a great job of putting together the plot but these cliffhangers on Friday nights are a disaster! Hopefully you get up real early on Monday for the next segment. 😁 Thank you for your great work @Josh Aterovis.

The intrigue is certainly mounting! You are certainly weaving an incredible and very twisted plot. While all of your stories are fantastic, this one is exceeding your norm. Good going @Josh Aterovis !

This is such a sensuous and emotional story, @Tony S. Thank you very much for taking your time to write it for us. Looking forward to reading the next one now!