Joseph OHara
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Life happens that way. I found it very sad for Tommy. He deserved so much more from Brian than he ended up with. I was sorry to see that Brian was using Tommy as I thought there was so much more to his character than that. One sided relationships occur so frequently in life but for someone who put as much into it as Tommy did I was terribly disappointed. I feel that Brian owed him more than what happened. I hope that wasn't the last chapter. I would really like to see that Brian was struck by the light and figured out what went wrong for Tommy. Time will tell. @Tony S., you definitely write well and I always enjoy your plots. Thank you for this chapter and see if you can't find it in your heart to straighten out Brian. 😁
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Mission accomplished! A solid landing in T'ville. Chapter two is now starting in Levi's Life. A whole change of everything he's known and unlimited possibilities lie ahead. I believe he knows he's loved at this point in time by both his grandparents and his dad, possibly even Luke. Levi's head appears to be on straight and with Matt's support, he should make it. Another great chapter @Mark Ponyboy Peters! Thank you again for your excellent and well thought out entertainment. You write such enjoyable stories.
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I empathize with poor Tommy. With Brian getting back on his feet he is finding it obvious that he's just a third wheel now. He put his heart and soul in helping Brian get better and Brian just does not realize what he sacrificed for him. @Tony S., you handle these dialogs so well. Without saying what is happening you express it so well in the dialog that it is so much more than obvious. You're an excellent writer and should think of publishing at some point. Your talents far exceed the average contributor to GA. Thank you for this new story with an excellently thought out plot.
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It looks like Levi is beginning to rationalize himself into normality. He may never end up being pro gay but I can't see him being anti gay in any way shape or form either. Once again @Mark Ponyboy Peters,you are giving us a wonderful plot that is well written, free of errors, and enjoyable. Thank you for the quality entertainment you're providing us!
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Now we have made it to the meat of the story. @Tony S. in his usual way is handling such a difficult subject with empathy and grace. You draw us in to the most unexpected subject matter and expose us to a side that most of us don't imagine and you do it so terribly well. The fact that you're posting literate, important, and rare subject matter to this site, adds so much to the value of GA. Your value here it's immeasurable. Thank you so much for your contributions to not just our entertainment but to waking us up to things of which we should be more aware.
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This is a typical, wonderful first chapter of a @Tony S. story. It consists of atmosphere, set up, Introduction to characters and hints of what might be coming. It's too early to know where it's going but it definitely holds promise as usual. It may take a couple chapters to figure it out, at least it does for me. I can tell it's going to be good because it's so typical of your stories. I'm hooked. Now I just need to get into the meat of the story. Looking forward to chapter two with bated breath. Thank you for getting another one under way.
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It looks like Levi is becoming a bit more comfortable with his father and the community around him. The dream he had about his mother pushing him forward was encouraging as well as we all know dreams come from your own heart not from the outside. You're doing a great job. Keep up the good work. Love the fact that your work is so well thought out and totally proofread. Thank you, @Mark Ponyboy Peters.
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I do hope you are able to continue this fine story. Thank you for what you have posted so far.
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Chapter 178, The Photoshoot
Joseph OHara commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 178, The Photoshoot
Another great chapter, @Dodger. It's good to see that Robby is being a little more forceful. Also pleased that Rory is beginning to talk to him. Someone really needs to take Don and Symmonds down. Keep up the good work and don't be a stranger for so long . 😁 -
Ahh, Levi seems to really be settling in. He'll soon be able to translate the love Matt and Luke have into other gay couples as well. It'll just take time. It really appears he was brought up in basically what was more of a cult than a church. @Mark Ponyboy Peters , you are doing a fine job as usual. You are so capable when it comes to expressing their emotions. This is a well thought out plot being written was artistic professionalism. Thank you for bringing this to us.
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Just catching up on some of your older stories. As usual, @Mark Ponyboy Peters, another excellent plot well written! Thank you.
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Another great chapter, @Mark Ponyboy Peters. I think Levi's grace said most of it. It looks like he has finally accepted his future situation. He also appears to be enamored with the town which is great. Thank you Mark for your usual high quality plots and writing skills and sharing them with us.
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Great story Tony S. I finally got around to reading this one. Thanks for posting it on GA.
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Ahh, some real growth in Levi coming about! The story is really developing nicely. Mark, you write such interesting stories and I enjoy them all. Thank you so much.
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Great story, @chris191070! Such a refreshing change from the norm. Thank you for your contribution to our entertainment.
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Self doubt is a killer. Thank you for the reminder Cynus.
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A clever and very cute story. Thank you very much Cynus.
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That was a two tissue box story for sure, Cynus. I am so glad I ran across your story today. Thank you for such a loving and wonderful story. You are to be commended and given much thanks for giving it to us.
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This turned out to be a beautiful story brought to a wonderful and fulfilling conclusion. Thank you empath!
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What a wonderful story! throughout the reading I always feared the worst would happen but you certainly brought it back in a beautiful way! You're an excellent writer and I thank you so much for bringing this entertainment to us. Thank you again, @empath!
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What a wonderful heartfelt story! Thank you so much for sharing PlugInMatty.
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Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
Joseph OHara commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
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Chapter 1 - A Chance Encounter
Joseph OHara commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - A Chance Encounter
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An interesting story Bill W. I enjoyed it very much and thank you for posting it on GA for us.
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Chapter 1 - Precious Memories
Joseph OHara commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Precious Memories
Another great story. Thank you Bill W
