Joseph OHara
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Now that Kent is concentrating on a solution, healing should come more quickly. Something needs to be done about Niran though. Pete needs to get more proactive also. It is good the medication is working although marginally as yet. I think Marvin should be accompanied as well. If you Kent loses anyone close to him it might be his undoing. Maybe the entire family needs to be brought into what's going on. Time will tell.................
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Once again, Geron Kees, I want to thank you for this wonderful story in your conclusion of the Mooi series. All of your stories are so entertaining and most enjoyable. I always enjoy a creative plot that is well edited as well as devoid of gratuitous sex for just the sake of sex. Thank you!
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Not only does Marvin need to know but we need to make sure that everyone gets some form of protection.....QUICKLY!. His and Devon's life are too important to risk. Also keeping tabs on people and keeping them together makes it simpler to protect everyone. Great writing and great plot, Tony.
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Another incredible adventure by Geron Kees! Geron, you never fail to exceed my expectations. Thank you again.
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What a wonderful beginning to what I assume will be another masterpiece by Geron Kees ! I look forward to reading the rest of this series. Thank you for writing this, Geron.
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Great story! Geron Kees always does a fine job, both with plot and the precision of his presentation. A pleasure to read and enjoy. Your topics vary between the wild blue yonder to home on earth but always please. Thank you Geron!
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The Competition Performs
Joseph OHara commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Competition Performs
Just joining this story now. I've read all the chapters up to this point I find it quite intriguing. This is certainly a novel idea and I'm quite interested in reading the following chapters as they arrive. Very good, @Lee Wilson ! Keep up the fine work and thanks for the entertainment.- 21 comments
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I guess Niran really plans to play dirty now. Kent has some great relatives.......NOT! Greed is certainly the cause of so many problems worldwide and unfortunately Kent's family is somewhat riddled with greed. I appreciate him keeping Marvin out of it because I don't see Marvin being able to handle the rough stuff it if they came after him. On the other hand, Marvin needs to know, just in case as well as the fact Marvin saw part of the interaction. I hope Pete gets on it quickly because this is really the last thing that Kent needs in his current state. Great intrigue, Tony, I guess you felt the story needed some shaking up right now. The quality of your writing remains strong, both in plot and execution. Thank you again for the entertainment!
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Things are still very tenuous for Kent. Thank heavens he's taking his medication. Marvin is still doing his best but Kent doesn't quite reveal enough to allow him to be that successful. Hopefully time will allow full openness and Marvin can make some deeper inroads with Kent. Tony, Your analysis and description of human emotions is excellent and what you're trying to show us is coming through loud and clear. Excellent!
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This was truly a remarkable story. I know I'm going to miss the characters until you can get the next story going that includes them. I'm really disappointed that Seth won't be a regular part of things but that's life or maybe death. 😁 @Josh Aterovis, you've done such a wonderful job with the entire Killian series and I can't wait to see it go on. I sincerely hope that Jacy we'll be returning also. Thank you many times over for the intrigue, for the intricate plots, and for such a wonderful cast of characters.
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Hopefully, Kent stays on his medication. He just might with Marvin looking on. Maybe recovery is in sight now, not close, but somewhere. This remains a remarkable study of human emotions. Tony, you are doing a great job with what is not just an interesting plot but a unique character study of a man in emotional pain. Thank you for your contribution to my entertainment!
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Chapter 13 – Trials, Tribulations, and Overwhelming Joy
Joseph OHara commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 13 – Trials, Tribulations, and Overwhelming Joy
What a wonderful story! It was heartwarming, had an actual plot, and It consisted of characters that had brains in their heads instead of just a sex drive. @Bill W, thank you so much for sharing and entertaining us. -
The Space Between Breaths
Joseph OHara commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Space Between Breaths
It's about time Kent finally opened up to the possibilities. He may just be on the road to recovery from this depression and PTSD. Marvin's a good person and I think he has the ability to draw Kent out further. Tony, Your study of emotions and people is wonderful. Thank you. -
In my opinion the ending was incomplete. It was less a matter of good or bad than it was being inconclusive It was a great story in so many ways up until the ending. When you live with a character or should I say many characters, for so long it's nice to know what their next step was as opposed to just dropping the mic. I wish there had been a Epilog to give us a little hint where their lives went. Good bad or indifferent incomplete is incomplete.
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As wonderful as this chapter was, I am saddened by the fact the saga is almost finished. I was really hoping more would happen between Jacy and Killian with regard to a relationship. I'm not sure that Killian and Micah are a really good fit. I'm also not sure that a return to Asher is called for. Needless to say, this has been a wonderful journey along with the other Killian stories. Great writing and great plots as well as characters to whom one can be empathetic. Missing some of Seth's insights though. One appearance by Seth was really not enough . Thank you, @Josh Aterovis. Please do not be too long with a continuation so we can see Killian's future. I also look forward to seeing the solution to the mystery as to who killed the professor. The antique dealer maybe?
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It appears that Kent is turning a corner. Depression is insidious how it sneaks up on a person and with Marvin's help he was able to see it and start attacking it. Thank God for good friends. Tony, you're doing an excellent job. The emotions are so real you almost feel it yourself. Thank you for this wonderful story and I look forward to the next chapter.
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WOW!! Talk about excitement! Great chapter @Josh Aterovis What more can I say? Sadly we are near the end and I hate to think that Killian and Jacy have not gotten close yet. You have spun a wonderful a tale and I look forward to seeing the loose ends come together in subsequent chapters. I know we seem to have at least one more killer left to identify. Thank you Josh!
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I'm really liking Marvin. He's a good neighbor, a great friend, and a caring individual. He is exactly what Kent needs in his life. Kent, for all his good attributes, is quite lost in life and needs someone to bring him back to the living. It appears that Marvin is up to that and it looks like that's what he intends to do. This is a great story and I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you very much Tony.
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Looking forward to both, especially "A kind of Death." Thanks for the update!
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I really don't want this to end. The intrigue is reaching a pinnacle and I'd like to dwell in its solving for more than just a few remaining chapters. At the very least I would like to know you have another story or two to reconcile Killian's love life, hopefully with Jacy. Needless to say, @Josh Aterovis, you are continuing to do a great job with all aspects of the story. Thank you for for your continued postings and I look forward to Monday's.
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Chapter 26: Parting Ways
Joseph OHara commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 26: Parting Ways
I haven't posted any comments to this story as yet as I joined it late and have just now finished everything that's been posted and await the last chapter. It has an interesting theme and it was most enjoyable. I have a thing for Asians to begin with and really got into this and enjoyed it. I just never paused long enough to place a comment between chapters. It's a good story and I appreciate it being posted and thank you for entertaining us Richard. -
It looks like between Devon and Marvin, Kent might just come back to the living. They are good for him and seem to have his best interest in mind. Okay, I am hooked now and I want to see where this goes, This is both an interesting and unusual plot and I find it to be good reading. Certainly up to your usual good standards Tony, both in plot and clean presentation. Thank you for entertaining us!
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Another good chapter. Little by little were getting a little more background on everybody and, hopefully, when that comes to completion we can move forward with the investigation. It's just hard to make any decisions in direction until Killian has all the background facts. I really appreciate the regularity of the postings and the cleanliness of the text that makes it so easy to read and enjoy. This is a great plot with an excellent mystery element and I'm enjoying it immensely. Thank you very much @Josh Aterovis!
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Chapter 8 - Epilogue
Joseph OHara commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Epilogue
A wonderful tale! Thank you so much Mark. It's always wonderful to see someone climb out of the depths of abuse on to the top of the mountain. The story was well written and had characters who became people we knew and loved. Keep up the good work Mark and, again, thank you very much!- 39 comments
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Small, Ordinary Bravery
Joseph OHara commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Small, Ordinary Bravery
It took me a few chapters to really get in to this story but I am beginning to understand it better now. Excellent character study of Kent. You are doing well with it and I will definitely follow it to the end. You are certainly continuing up to your high standards now that I understand what is going on. Just took me a while. Looks like Marvin and his brother might just break Kent out from his funk.
