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Late to this story. And I must remember to check the Falcon reference. But already loving the developments. Or should that be "cautiously optimistic".
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The devotion Titus has to Marcus is truly wonderful, saving his cithara and more concerned about fetching his master's cloak than his own safety. Ingomar may also have put his own life at risk for his love of Marcus. And Marcus is in an unenviable position. Ransome, rescue, escape, slavery or death.
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Another fantastic episode. Love how each has found a thrill which exhilarates yet scares each other. And Connor, who earlier had faced down a boar, provides a romantic bower of flowers for his "date". That's both an aaaw! and a wow! And the verbal sparring is a delight. Not sure whether to hope for a rescue at this point or for them enjoy their Eden for longer.
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Chapter 13 Under the Wyoming Sun
sandeman commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 13 Under the Wyoming Sun
Marcus is going to find it difficult to choose one brother. Sex with Cameron is instant and hot. With Ryan its more teasing slower but just as hot. A high octane life in the city which will suit Cameron to a T? or a settled ranch life with Ryan who will support Marcus' dreams? -
Chapter 30 ~ Finding His Place ~
sandeman commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 30 ~ Finding His Place ~
The light of Two Spirits shines through always. -
A guerilla attack so early on the baggage train would also on the narrow road with dense? forest on either side provide a road block of carts dead oxen horses and people. If the main body of soldiers were to turn back they would be slowed down to clear miles of road and have to enter the forest to fight against people who know the forest . Varus is in a predicament. Will he retreat or fight where he is or continue onwards to find a better battlefield. All the maps and discussion of strategy proving as pointless as all the information given him by Arminius.
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By midday the rear of the column would barely be out of sight of the fort. The attack so soon was well planned as the column became thinner and slower as the road narrowed, seemingly with the main thrust at the weakest point, the baggage train. Was the van of the army being attacked also ? or realise what was happening until too late? and how could they regroup or retaliate ? An attack like this on such a column of thousands of disciplined soldiers required long term planning, organisation and a great deal of information. And complacency on the part of the Roman command. All fostered over the years by Arminius.
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Chapter 10- A Mother's Shadow
sandeman commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 10- A Mother's Shadow
The mother/son meeting was less traumatic than expected. More understanding, more bonding, with Andrea accepting Cal and that with him Nos may have more control over blood lust. A welcome visit to Blake and Emon. And a tender first mating for Nos and Cal. Great storytelling. -
Chapter 29 ~ Brothers in Arms ~
sandeman commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 29 ~ Brothers in Arms ~
Of so many wonderful chapters in this story, I found this one of the most heartwarming. Yes Sir. I like the way you are handling the burgeoning Frank and Rhett relationship. Shyly. Please don't rush it. Jo has always been the character I love most. And your love - and respect - for him shines through in this beautifully told episode. His 'cup runneth over'. -
Two fantastic chapters of joyful sex. But I've got to say it. This episode certainly had more bite to it! Our intrepid trio has passsed through the VEIL, fought against VILE foes and defeated their EVIL designs and now can LIVE and love as is their destiny. With the emphasis now definitely on love!
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Segestes second warning to Varus this time he felt compelled to deliver in person. Varus again shrugs it off, preferring to believe Arminius. The march east is on. To quote Iulius Caesar "Iacta alea est".
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A convincing continuation of your story, with the clued up sheriff involved in preventing violence. Interestingly the sheriff seemed to be unfazed by the reappearance of Silas and Ares. Waiting for a promised "reward" from them? Wonder what form that will take!
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A loving description of the gentle interaction between the two young men.
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Chapter 9- Moonlight Glass
sandeman commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 9- Moonlight Glass
The boys had a great day together. Nos and Cal were making headway but the unexpected appearance of Nos' mother and her open dislike of Cal has certainly put a damper on developments. Interesting introduction to Orion's match. Jarlan seems to be the authority figure Orion needs. -
Against the Wall, Part Three of Three
sandeman commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Against the Wall, Part Three of Three
Despite the fact that there were condoms the rush that raw sex gave overruled the fear and guilt . That would come later and often too late. Both these men were old enough and informed enough to have made a different choice. But how many of us who lived through that period could honestly say we made right choices EVERYtime? A cautionary tale told with your usual skill. Thank you. -
Chapter 12 The Calloway Brothers
sandeman commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 12 The Calloway Brothers
The three musketeers. All for one and one for all! Loving how this is turning into a competition. -
Interesting how the relationship between Marcus and Ingomar will develop. Even on the frontier it would be necessary for Marcus to take the dominant role and for Ingomar to be the passive partner in any sexual relationship. Otherwise Marcus would face social disgrace and accusations of effeminacy which are already being spoken. Varus is encouraging the relationship for his own ends. Ingomar fortunately has chosen to protect Marcus and his loyalties will I am sure soon be tested. A captivating story .
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Chapter 27 ~ Mystery Muffins ~
sandeman commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 27 ~ Mystery Muffins ~
I did not expect after all that has happened that it would be Shayna at the door with muffins. But Bass saved the day. Prison is too good for Shayna but sadly she will find plenty there who won't be put off "noshing on her muffin". -
Bravo Theo! Bravo Vince! But for brave little Jack he deserves, or his butt does, a well deserved Bravissimo!
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The friendship Vitalis extended to Marcus months past has now developed into a companionship that includes Ingomar. Vitalis sees and accepts the growing closeness of Marcus and Ingomar. The trio may well need this support for each other in a not too distant future. Roman engineering and construction was quite amazing. Roads, bridges
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Chapter 26 ~ Rectal Retribution ~
sandeman commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 26 ~ Rectal Retribution ~
At last the deserved poetic justice for one shit. But it's good that River's confidence will be strengthened as he becomes more involved in the ranch. And the visitor at the door does not appear to have caused a fearful reaction in Mannly . -
Chapter 17 The Days Ahead
sandeman commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 17 The Days Ahead
Many questions are given answers by what Daisy has revealed. How she and Dale came to be on the island and their relationship. Now a means for the two young men and Daisy to leave the island appears to have been found. Jamie is in many ways being healed of the horrors of the island in his frolick with the orca and he has the support and love of Connor. A lovely chapter. -
Chapter 8- A Taste of Trust
sandeman commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 8- A Taste of Trust
Snails have a fascinating sex life. A courtship phase involving touching circling and sometimes shooting a love dart into each other. This can take up to 15 hours before consummation. Cal is encouraging Nos to take things slowly but Nos is working to an imposed time limit and must find in himself the strength of will to overcome his memories and fears. The poet Pilip Larkin " They fuck you up, your mum and dad. They may not mean to, but they do.They fill you with the faults they had And add some extra, just for you." -
It's good to know more of Jo's story. Despite the tragedy of his time in his mother's womb, Jo from birth has been gifted the love of those around him, from the caring nurses to his friends and co-workers on the ranch. A love not demanded but freely given. And freely returned. What a contrast with Shayna. A demanding piece of garbage who'll find at the end that no-one really cares a toss about her.
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Fortune favours the bold and the beautiful. Load - loads! - of deserved fun being had by our three heroes in their mating ritual - rituals.
