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Awww Stu, thanks Let's see whether Coop will do the right thing. And Coop's headache
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Thanks for reading. Sorry for the aching knot in your heart You're right, Mich doesn't deserve to be alone. But in real life, sad things really happen
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Sorry Will see what I can do. Thanks for reading.
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Frosty, thanks for the review. I do try to keep the emotions real, but you're right. In this case, it makes the hurt deeper. Hope the next chapter is a happy one. Thanks
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Don’t you know that the pain of his wounds was nothing compared to the hurt you caused when you kicked him out of your life? Like a broken record, Grandpa’s words repeated themselves inside my head. What have I done? I meant to protect him from further harm, that’s all. The doubts I kept at bay surrounded and threatened to drown me. If I did the right thing by pushing him away, why does the knowledge that Mich is hurting makes me feel like I’m the biggest jerk in the world? Unbid
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Happy Birthday!
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How the heck did you manage to write all that hurt in so little words? For that alone, great job!
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People chattering about everything And nothing in particular A cacophony of voices wanting attention Yours and mine lost in the hubbub A rigmarole unfolding before my eyes Is this where I belong? A heart searching for someone special And another who yearns for the same We started out as strangers who had nothing in common Except for a shared dream of a life filled with love Two hearts separated by miles upon miles of distance Fate stepped
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Happy birthday Anyway, I enjoyed reading this one a lot. At first, it was serious and a bit sad, but a smile crossed my face toward the end. Write more
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The words used brought forth vivid images in my head. Very well done. I love the descriptions very much
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Hey, so cool! Thanks for reading. And I'm glad you like what I've written (you did like it, right?). This was the first rather long story I've written so this was really special to me
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Happy Birthday, Andy!
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Happy Birthday, Frosty
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Apology... Explanation... Excuse... However you want to take it!
jian_sierra commented on Frostina's blog entry in Chatter from the Chatterbox
Hey Frosty, well you were there for me when I needed an editor and I wanna thank you for that. I can't speak for all the people you edit for so I'll just speak for myself. You don't need to apologize for taking care of your family, most especially yourself! I do hope you get well soon. And if there's anything I can do for you, anything at all, please don't hesitate to holler -
Thanks, John. I'm partial to sad endings, but let's see
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Hey John, I didn't avail the services of a beta-reader and editor for this story, sorry. This was meant to be a short story anyway so I didn't see the point. But thinking about it, maybe I should have hehe. Anyway, it was done and I'm not ashamed of what I've done. Hope you enjoy the rest.
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Hey Frosty, I really enjoyed reading this one. I agree with Nephy that although this was personal, it is also universal in a way. There were lines in your poem I could really relate to. So thanks for sharing
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Hey Frosty! Well this was supposed to be only three chapters, but with the current pace, I think it would be four chapters at least. Anyway, thanks for reading and writing a review
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Hey Maria, you're welcome. Thanks for letting me write this for you. And that's my favorite scene to. I'm a frustrated painted
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I don’t like you. The words rang in my ears and reverberated inside my head. A small ache in my heart threatened to worsen. So this is how it feels? I used the words a lot of times to a great deal of people without any regard to their feelings. Is this karma? If I knew then how much they hurt, would I had said them? I turned around and faced him, pretending that the indifference on his face had no effect on me. “Understood. There’s nothing I can do about it though so... I think it’d bett
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69 wpm with no mistakes
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You were a friend among many Kind, honest and supportive Your words held a friendly note But I shrugged it off as nothing I was a naive storyteller Who pretended I was a writer My words were a bit awkward But you liked them anyway Words bloomed into feelings Then turned into something more Yours were known to you Mine were in my subconscious On an ordinary day like others Something extraordinary happened You reached out in a friendly gestu
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A poem written for and dedicated to Bleu...
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No way, Frosty beat me to it. Not fair! Anyway, thanks. Hope the firsts will just continue on and on MK
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I'm sorry, but I agree with Sam that I was a little confused as well. But probably it's because this is the start and I've no idea what your 'world' is like. Thanks for sharing.
