okay you know how i haven't read this properly, Andy. But i'm going to now! just re read chapter one and i can see why you get so many reviews
Keep up the work, and i'll keep up with my reading LOL
Poor willie, hope there was more to blue's little show than just a humiliating scene.
I'm enjoying it so far, your style is quite different to the other works on this site and it works.
Andy that was well written i particularly though the music CD scene was funny. Haha you listen to girly music
The end scene was quite effective to show his conflicting reasoning. Looking forward to chapter 2