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You know, the one phrase that seems to fall off my lips at the end of every chapter is, "Oh Shit!" This one is no different. lol Well Done.

Perfect indeed! And Wilson? He certainly is getting ed-u-makated! And he's got more ammunition! Hey, isn't there supposed to be a party going on?

OH SHIT! Wilson has the number! His mother takes the messages! I'm still a little bit nervous about the dad still wandering around. His nightmare could become a reality. And a make out party? Really? Are they both insane?

Wow, goes from tense to wilson in 90 seconds. Great chapter.

UGH! I hope they put his dad out of our misery! Graphic Chapter. Well written.

He should have kicked him in the nuts and called a cop. No patience for that type, or tolerance.

Oh shit! And he forgot he was supposed to meet his dad. This is going to hell in a handbasket rather quickly.

Oh Shit! DDDDDdad. Not good. Not good at all.

The King of misdirection. Well done and we fell for it hook line and stinker. Well that just proves you're a pretty fart smeller. Well done.

Exactly what I thought too. Mr Curious said it exactly.

Another Great Chapter. Really enjoying the story. Your ability to write from within the character always amazes me. On to the next!

A delightful chapter Mark. And glad to see caulder out of the picture. Surely he is a hidden relative of a Wilcox, Fox or Mann. With him gone, the rats will be free in the chartroom as well. I wonder if Mr Llwelyn will be helping Winkler to restore the Captains cabin? Perhaps he will be ploishing the 18 pounder when Granger returns. And Winkler smirking over the threesome! Was that a tease that Granger will have to retalliate for? Winkler hasn't been put into a full on blush for quite some time. And a smirk over Granger doing a threesome with Winklers lover? Well that certainly is some blushable material. Winkler can't be any happier over the preoccupation of Captain Sommers with Sir Phillip either. Not only has Granger taken his lover knowing how he felt, but turned him into a Kerry addict as well. Winkler has to be miserable. And in truth, not a little hurt and pissed. Having another fan of political power certainly won't hurt Grangers interests at court. Mr Lennox's transformation might just have strengthened Granger's political position greater than anything thus far, short of anything caused or brought about by a prize. It should be an interesting meeting. And perhaps, Mr Clifton Will Make First Lt regardless of seniority. He can get seasoned on the next voyage with Granger. I mean, Granger was an early bloomer. And Mr Clifton's relatives are politically stronger than Grangers. We shall see. Well done Mark.

Hmmm, A cum plaster. I wonder if it has an medicinal properties. For sure it causes happiness. Perhaps it can be considered a cure for depression? I know I'm happier just reading about it. lol. Great chapter, great story.

Walks like a duck, talks like a duck, looks like a duck, must be a musk ox! I fear trouble in River City!

The quick cure, A threesome! Nah, too easy.

Oh shit! He needs to put the breaks on this one right now and to tell his love what happened and what he did about it. Some of this is coming back to me. I think I read part of it before. Trouble with the dad coming if I'm not mistaken. A great story. Loving it. (Again apparently) But with my age, all the brain cells aren't always shaking hands anyways so it can all be new to me again! lol 55 and the mind is going already. And they said it would only make me go blind!

Now THAT's how it's supposed to go. Excellent!

God you write well. But damn you and your cliff hangers! It wouldn't be bad except you can collect social security before you find out what happened. Luckily I waited for this one to be mostly complete. But if CH 47 is a cliffey I'm sending quido out to collect the next chapter. LOL Cheers. (I hope he's alright!)

Wrong move. He should have held out and broke it off with tyler as a mistake. KIDS!

DAMN! I hate it when I see it coming. It was just too perfect. Shit.

Things like that don't go away, they ferment and then foment. This is going to be crushing for Ryan AND Tyler. All three in fact. And huess who will end up being alone.

Oh shit. He gets what he deserves. No tolerance for infidelity.

Oh shit. HE's supposed to like only Ryan. He's supposed to tell him what happened right off. to say that tyler was trying his best to get into his pants and that he ran for it with a feeble excuses. that he was so horny that he made a horned toad look as smooth as a babies ass. Shit shit shit!. What a mess.

Oh shit. Didn't see that one coming. I figured Ryan would walk in and catch them in a lip lock initiated by tyler. I gotta see what's next.

The only thing lacking is mom and dad catching them. I certainly called that one. And what happens when Tyler is caught kissing him?