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FANTASTIC! I laughed out loud at Caroline's anger toward Davina. I live for their next meeting. I suspect that Caroline will provide some sort of misery for her that she will forever be neutered. Winkler staying ashore? He is too much a part of this story to write him out. I think that Jeffers will see the brand new ship as something he could not pass up. I think that the two will decide to follow Granger. Phillips will have to have a special place with Granger. He is obviously in love with him. I guess that if Ranger hasn't been eaten by now that he will have to be retired. No Rats on this new ship. A fantastic tale Mark ad superbly done. I will comment on the rest in the forum. But The fact that you are intimating that you have gotten busy scare me a little. I can't go for long without a Granger fix. You are the most spectacular writer I have ever read Mark. Don't make us wait to long to read the first chapter of Mutiny!

BRAVO! David finally said the "L" word! And the word is out. The letter from Seth was excellent and shows the support I figured would come. BUT! We still have to figure out what "mom" is up to. I was glad to see things escalating. But it has been good for too long now. The old man has to muck things up a bit or people will stop hating him!. . . Nah, never happen.

A fitting end to Belvidera. And it seems that an 18 pounder isn't the only thing to get a rise out of our little Welshman! I love the fact that neither the press nor the shisters got to Granger's men. Well done! What next one must ask.

UGH! Imaginative but not as invigorating as I imagined. Pressing her staff into service should knock her down a peg or two. Perhaps her just rewards will be Freddie cuming into his own and never touching Davina. Perhaps he will bed everything around her but not her beyond once to show her what she will now miss. And being in the middle of nowhere, she will be hard pressed to get any. OR she could die in childbirth of Granger's twins. I'm holding out for that one. AND OMG! What if they were girls! No heir! HA! That would be the ultimate pay back. And as a little icing, perhaps he could be disinherited with Granger's daughters to raise and then the heir would fall to Granger's son. I'm still liking this. BUT he just pressed 15 guys into service that would love to get their chance to pay him back. Let's hope they don't fall in with a Wilcox or a Mann. The Earle may find out in an undesirable manner then.

HA! I knew they would try and take him. And Lady Davina should have an accident with his sword. And if Freddie wrote the note then he had to have knowledge of the plan. She must have something up her sleeve. AN Ace in the hole so to speak. Either that or she and Freddie left for their ship and departed. He would have to catch them at sea or she would have the opportunity to bare his child/children. Twins would be so evil.

Delightful! And I needed this. You have a knack for posting when I need it most.Thank you. Now the big question, how can Chartley help Granger? Where can he stash a couple hundred men for an indefinite period of time? And what will happen when the good HRH of Glouchester visits Caroline's bed to find Granger and Chartley together in it? oops! The next chapter should be very interesting. Well done Mark.

UGH! See! That's exactly what I'm talking about. Leave them satisfied but wanting more. WHY ARE YOU READING THIS WHEN YOU COULD BE WRITING MORE? ugh. Hooked again, completely! You're the type that pulls out micro-seconds before your partner reaches the point of no return.

Another great chapter. But now I am down to the last chapter Posted so far. Does that mean that I smile when I say your name for just a short time? Will there be epitaphs attached to it after that? Probably. There's NEVER enough of your great writing. That's just how it is.

A delightful chapter. Well! This will certainly make the cheese more binding! Will the King find favor in Granger for helping him hide the bastard child? Or for not making a scene having found out? That makes the Granger line soon containing some Royal royal blood. IF it's a boy. Sounds like another midshipmen with hidden royal ties. lol What will this turn into is anybody's guess. Well, except yours Mark. I can't wait for more.

Here we go. Let the outing begin.

She handed him his sock! Gotta love a mom like that. A really sweet story. Can't wait until he comes out. It is sure to be a total fiasco.

Great way to handle a bully. lol. I'll use it.

WooHoo! Done deed! But now, . . . let the outing begin. He's firmly hooked. If I know you there is misery right around the corner and it will be a biggie. So who will find out first? Family or friends. I'm voting enemies.

Now THAT's what I'm talking about. They are one inch from bumping uglies.

Well it's about time. Glad it is going this way. Now if we can just out him to his family. . . .

Oh SO close. UGH!

UGH! KIDS!

UGH! SEEE! That's what I mean. UGHHHHH!

Shaping up to be another good story. I hope this one turns sweet. [ER] Can you do a love story? I men one without disasters? We'll see. I'm voting no. But you surprise me all the time. I love your style. I HATE your schedule. lol Cheers r

Oh Shit. And how long has he been gone? Longer than 9 months I dare say. I wonder if they can fudge this one. I know Granger will forgive this indiscretion but can they hide it from society? And who is the father? Can the Cinderella story have a troll in it? Did we just become a CAP spin off? Mark, you are truly evil. I just hope he's a cute little bastard.

Another fantastic story. I love the spin off. I'm glad I read them in order. WHen I read the line about the teddy bear restraining order I laughed out loud. You have sucb a gift for portraying the anxiety of youth. It's just fantastic. And the clothes hamper!Omigod. Too much. I can't wiat for more. Thanks. GREAT! Now I'm hooked on another one! Damnit Cosmie. Get writing.

UGH! I KNEW YOU WOULD LEAVE ME THIS WAY! UGGGGH! WHY did I TRUST you again! When's the next chapter? The second week of neverwherey? UGGGH! And You'll leave Randy in pain all that time. WHAT a thing to do to your muse. UGH!

UGH! Can I detest that guy any more than I do now? I'm losing the feel good for this story. Where's the "happily ever after sean"? I repeat! UGH!

OK, I'm getting close to the current end. I hope you are taking it as a hint to start writing on this one again. I don,t want to be hung up in another "In A Clas By Himself" annual event. Just be forwarned. This is a troll alert. Sean is an absolute piece of crap. I would like to see Randy predict privately to Ryan that Sean is going to kiss him and just say, "It wasn't planned, it just happened." What a creep.

Most adorable character? Wilson of course! Second by the shy and constantly blushing Ariel. Most detested? Sean - Already. You sure flesh them well in story. And I don't see any way for Randy to stop what is happening.