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Chapter 2 - Introductions
Rebelghost85 commented on bashfulpie's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Introductions
This was a really interesting chapter. I hope we get to learn more about the everyone in future chapters. -
Chapter 1 - Setting Up
Rebelghost85 commented on bashfulpie's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Setting Up
I enjoyed the tone of this chapter. It was light-hearted and fun. I'm looking forward to more! -
The thoughts of each of the characters were great. I really enjoyed Shay's inner monologue about how he feels when Mira kisses him.
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Great chapter. The conflicted feelings and the information about the social greek scene at Old Dominion were very interesting. I also enjoyed our first peek into the inner workings of the newspaper.
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Epilogue – (10 Years Later)
Rebelghost85 commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Epilogue – (10 Years Later)
I loved the epilogue and I'm happy that Gibby found love later in his life. The ending was great and I'm really sad to see this story come to an end. Is there another story in the works? Are you going to continue your draconian tactic of posting just one chapter a week? (kidding). Thank you so much for writing this. It was amazing. -
Wow. The paperwork here is going to be incredibly complicated. I'm at the edge of my seat and I need to read the epilogue. I'll write a more in depth review after that.
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Amazing chapter. I'm totally invested in every one of your characters and I can't wait to read more.
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Gah. I can't believe we have to wait a week. I'm bursting at the seems to find out what happens next. Gibby needs help! They're on to him and he's in trouble. I hope nothing drastic happens. Amanda needs to get what's coming to her in the worst way!
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Sarah's motivation is perfect teen logic. I'm really looking forward to seeing how her actions affect Mark and Tyler's "relationship".
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Once again I have to say that I love getting glimpses into Mira's mind. (A 'look' inside Mira if you will). It was interesting that the Sharpling was able to recognize him for what he was to a certain extent. As for the big reveal, of course I didn't see it coming. 214 years is crazy long. How did he survive? Was it intentional? Accidental? I have a feeling that the virus is most definitely a biological weapon and that there is a shadow government interested in it's development, cure and use. Great chapter and thanks for updating!
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Why the hell is Gibby following Scott. Isn't he smarter than that? God damn it.
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This has become one of my top 5 series ever. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it.
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I want West and Peter to get back together!
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While the events themselves are extraordinary, Will and his friends' reactions are very realistic and the story was extremely gripping. I enjoyed every chapter of it.
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The climax of book 5 was really riveting. Your narrative development really evolves throughout the books. (I'm jealous) Thanks for posting.
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Great chapter! Peter has been bullied for being gay huh? I hope he doesn't hide it too much. Jon could use a friend at the very least. Hopefully Peter lives up to his word to take care of the trouble I'm sure Ellis has brewing. Simon seems to feel that Jon is a threat to his relationship with Peter. Hopefully they can get over that initial meeting (first impressions D:) and become friends. I can see Jon and Peter backing Simon up when he's being bullied by Ellis as a binding factor. As for Jon, he really has a lot of healing and self confidence building to do. I hope that he knows when to ask for help and when to take challenges on his own but I don't think we'll see the best choices.
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So much about such a small amount of time, yet I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you. P.S. I hope Will was lying to himself about the disparaging comments about teaching. I'd be disappointed if he really thought that.
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This was my favorite book so far. The realism was wonderful. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this awesome story.
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Amanda is plotting something! Watch out Gibby! I'm not sure what the police will do but hopefully they'll do something. Great chapter.
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He really is naive. Not noticing a pipe when he sees one. Hopefully it's just weed and Joey's not freebasing.
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You know, I don't normally gush about first kisses but this was really well done. I'm not a "squeeing" guy but if I were I would be. As far as romantic sex I trust that you can pull it off. I enjoy plot driven stories as opposed to sex driven ones. If I'm really invested in the plot and there's too much sex I find myself skipping the sex scenes.
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When does this story take place? Canada allowed gay people to serve in it's military in 1992 and the UK allowed gays to serve in 2000. Will would never join the military but not because he's gay However, I can see this taking place in the 80s or 90s. There really isn't enough technology around to make it purely modern.
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Beautiful. I read it all in one day. Tomorrow book II!
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I can't believe Gibby showed his hand. Well... I can sort of believe it. The emotions running through his mind right now have to be out of control and maybe Amanda will make a mistake. Great chapter and I hope Gibby can prove that Amanda is guilty soon. I don't know if I can take much more suspense.
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Small Problems and Even Smaller Problems
Rebelghost85 commented on Lalanekomaster's story chapter in Small Problems and Even Smaller Problems
Alright. Now we have the promised surprises. You've got my interest. Please continue. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.
