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Very powerful writing. I confess that I became very angry with you at Barega's death. The killing of such a joyful innocent should always engender anger at the callous perpetrators. It is said that corporations have no conscience, but those who run them need to be held to account. I look forward to Yirgella doing just that. Compensating the shareholders was generous, but ultimately it is the shareholders, who effectively own the corporation, who are to blame for the "the bottom line is all that matters" attitude which prevails in corporate think. The shareholders can and should hold the corporation management responsible for whatever is done by that corporation.
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I'm with Timothy M! Only one chapter left <sob>. We can assure you that all your trouble with Jonas has been very well worthwhile. Nothing good ever comes easily, after all. There is just so much scope left to extend the story. I really hope that you will one day see your way clear to do that. Cheers, Brian.
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Thanks, Myr for a delightful story. I have enjoyed re-reading it every bit as much as I enjoyed it the first time. I had a good chuckle several times, but broke into a rather loud guffaw when you had poor Ron put his two knuts into the conversation! Thanks for that I've no idea why I neglected to give you likes for every chapter before, but I have rectified that and hope that you will forgive me.
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Great chapter, Carlos! Can't wait for CJ to paralyse the parent/priest putsch. Gotta love that kid.
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You, too, got it so right. Great yarn, interesting characters, more plot than sex kept me reading eagerly. If our heroes do come back, I shall be one of the happy campers, avidly reading.
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Simply outstanding! I sit in awe of your breadth of imagination and storytelling prowess. Thank you so much for this amazing story. The promise of more to come is really exciting.
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Great work, Carlos! Loving it so far. The dogpile after the phone call had me laughing out loud. Thanks.
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Here's hoping that this helps to weigh the balance in favour of "enough interest"
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I am enjoying re-reading the story, having read it yonks ago. Just as enjoyable the second time around.
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Thank you, so much. Just bloody brilliant. Like the others, I'd love to read more of Damien and Kayden's adventures.
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Jarara is going to give Mirri so much of a sense of satisfaction, turning his songs into fascinating music. I knew that there would have to be more about Mirri's singing once it was introduced, but I expect that we do not know nearly all of it yet. I agree that Yirgella may wish to become involved in security planning, after all the terrorists are basically aiming at him.
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Oh my goodness, YES, more please! I love this story.
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Yirgy and Mirri and lots of laughter. Those are VAST concepts for an AI. Wonderful chapter Iarwain. I cannot imagine what Yirgy and Mirri will get up to, but I am sure it will be truly amazing.
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Again I am amazed at the depth of gentle humanity in your writing. Thank you.
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The story is terriffic, and your writing becomes more fluid with each chapter. Thoroughly enjoyable. Great dramatic tension in the setting of the love story on such a vessel! Please keep this one going as long as you can.
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A wonderful beginning to what is bound to be a wonderful story. I particularly like your gently humane characters, Iarwain. This characteristic shone through in Attunga and is already evident here. I anticipate a marvellous journey with Jarra and Mirri.
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Thanks, Faxity! It is a great little story. It even prompted me to write a review, which I don't often do - even though I probably should Such a pleasure to read a well crafted story and be left with a smile on my face and the urge to drive down to the beach and feel the sand between my toes.
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Chapter 25 A Personal Encounter
BrianM commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 25 A Personal Encounter
WOW! Mind ... blown. You certainly do not shy away from the largest possible canvas. A superb story. Thank you. -
Great start. I look forward to seeing how this develops. B.
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I am loving this! So glad that I found it here. It is a really refreshing take on the fantasy genre, cleverly set in the back rooms of a major retailing enterprise. Please keep it going just as it has been. i look forward to watching it unfold as Jonas gains more confidence as he interacts with Opie and Fire and his more mundane friends. Thanks
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Totally loving the story and I am so looking forward to Firebreath demonstrating her name! This is exactly the sort of story I really enjoy. I hope that not too many artifacts bond with Jonas, that could make life really problematical.
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Chapter 14: Haley’s Story—Winter in Alborg
BrianM commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 14: Haley’s Story—Winter in Alborg
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Now that is a twist which I definitely did not see coming! I am fascinated to see where you will take this from here.
