Andrew Q Gordon

Good F'ing grief, you should have called the Mostly uneventful life of Charlie Wagner that suddenly turned upside down and round about Dagnabbit I'm wrong again, gotta toss the stupid turban away, it's never right. So Ricky and Wade, but no Ted, Poor ted, he can't get a Wagner if he feel on one, can he?

Guess i was half right, Ted wanted to have wild crazy sex with Chuck, but Chuck wasn't into it. oh well, sucks being half right sometimes. Wait, wait, Karnac is having a vision. Ted and Ricky doing the mattress Mamba when Chuck and Scott get him. Wait wait, there's more - Tina is joining them. Hey if we're doing farcical comedy, why the hell not?

this time I nearly stopped with that - it was like an episode of Will and Grace at the end when Karen told Tim Curry her name was Anastasia Beaverhousen. Funny, cute, entertaining in a farcical way.

YESSS!!!!!! I knew Ted would be back and he and Chuck would be boinking link bunnies! Then again, you have a decidedly Roman streak in you, Sounds like it's gonna be a Roman Orgy now that young Rick is there - well once Mama leaves of course.

I'll second Ramon's comments about rehash and leave it at that. Scott is smooth, but seriously? The dude must have HUGE Balls to invite someone over who he didn't know was gay, who never gave off ANY hint he was gay and do what he did. Okay tiny gripe - hey I've been good so far and well after that comment of yours thinking I suggested Charlie and Ricky hookup, I owe you - If this was written from Scott's perspective, how come we didn't get his thoughts there at the end? That would have been a better way to end that particular chapter. IMHO at least.

Well I bet Charlie is wishing he let Sam take his place now, doesn't he. That would for sure end all connection between the two and you'd have a much less interesting story to tell. I'm most interested in seeing what happens when Charlie learns that Scott is NOT Julie's dad - seems like Great Scott has a twisted streak in him

That's it, just Good thing Charlie didn't giggle like a girlie man when Sam cornered Scott. Clearly Mr. Scott has his eye on a different teacher. But then, that might be awkward too because as we all know Wayne . . . err Charlie, isn't gay, right?

Me: You: Okay so you're twisted. Who said anything about them hooking up?? I meant Roommates. They're cousins, about the same age, both gay, any of this sound like they'd be perfect roommates? Where'd sleeping together come in?? Geez yourself

Go on with your bad tricksy self Wayne, why is it everyone reading knew the 'local businessman' who wanted to help with 'Reeding' was going to be Mr. Reads, Scott Reed but Charlie had NO idea? But what has me more intrigues is the whole Rick Jr. thingy with Mom and Rick Sr. So are Unc C and nephew R going to have a swinging gay bachelor's pad anytime soon? I mean, for a hot naked ass, I still know my way to Patchogue.

Hmm shades of advice to come, perchance??? Will Rick Jr. give Unc the same advice as Charlie gave him?? Stay tuned Batfans, more is on the way Sorry, just a silly moment, but interesting that Rick Jr. told him. How much of - tell Charlie or Granny is true and how much is tell Charlie cause he's m age and hmm i sense he might be just like me. Evil Comic leaving us so befuddled.

Thanks for the review, clearly you've kept up to date on my doing as well so thanks for the baby well wishes, she is already a bit of a handful, but Mike and I are doing well enough. Sequel, well yeah, hmm, actually, I had something of a companion story in mind first - involving characters other than Jason or Peter as the main character. I'd also like to do a sequel five years out from Peter's perspective this time. But got a few things occupying my time right now so writing isn't easy at the moment - so be patient Personally I'm a scotch man - single malt, aged long - but right now there is no lock on the cabinet, so we'll need to fix that and other things once she's a tad older. Thanks again Andy

I guess with a clan as big as this one, there are bound to be things that shock and awe folks. Patchogue eh? The Wagners could have been neighbors with my grandparents, for a time at least, they died a bit ago, but still. Small world. Now if Charlie starts dating Rick Jr.'s ex I'm gonna buy tickets for the fireworks

Cute Chapter. Hopefully we see more of Julie and Nick, they seem part of Scott's 'family' so to speak.

Barbara Wagner is NOTHING like Hurricane Barbara Tellerman They - whoever 'they' are - say a mother always knows, so what does mother know this time? Eh? Only the shadow knows. Seems also that mom was all that fond of Tina either, could be just me but she didn't seem too upset that Charlie dumped . . . err. . . let her go. Hmm what does she know?

Am I allowed to say UFF and just leave it at that? No? Well, wow, I don't know - no scratch that, I KNOW I couldn't do what Charlie did. That took some fierce guts to do that. So NOW does Ted appear, then profess their undying love and have crazy wild sex for hours on end? Please?

Blueberry Buckle? what's a buckle? Maybe it's me but did it seem that Wayne - - oops, Charlie spent more time thinking of Mr. Reads than Tina? Just sayin.

Baking? I thought his name was charlie not wayne Despite his appearance, it appears the good Mr. Reeds is something of a nerd as well - hmm that could be good for Wayne . . . err . . . Charlie, especially since he's been asked to come back. One can't say no to the man who saved your life - in some cultures - Like those on Long Island's south shore - if a man saves your life you're required to have intense sexual relations with him for as long as you can both handle it - at least that's what I was told when I lived on the 'Island'

A bit hard to type with Baby Q in one arm, but here goes. So you weren't kidding about Charlie and luck, but so far the 'bad' luck seems to be toward everyone else - Tina got her shirt ruined, Scott got hit by a car, I mean, it can be hazardous to your health being his friend

Although it sets the table for what is to come - or so I assume - there was a bit too much narrative here - then again what do I know, I don't know what's coming next So the board is set and the players announced, - almost - let the show begin?

Not sure what to think about Charlie, I know the type, but so far - other than Tina - his situation has nothing to do with luck and everything to do with how he is. Sweet but shy is a taste - you either like it or don't, Tina obviously is an Alpha type who thought she wanted the shy submissive type but found she needed a bit more. Now what does Charlie do with it? I think he rushes into the arms of Ted, they have mad wild sex and live happily ever after.

Wayne, Couple over all thoughts - sorry these won't be all 'this was great'. First and perhaps most important this was an entertaining read, light, imaginative, different, which is what folks read for - to be entertained. Now I know this isn't your most perfected story, but what I kept looking for but never really found was character development. I never got a good feel for Nock or Lone. You gave us a sense of both, but nothing griping. Sure this was a short story, but little things would have helped - quirks, likes, dislikes, that sort of stuff that is easy to insert. Same for Lone. I get the focus was on the story, I do and you did that well. There wasn't much in the way of useless information that bogged down the story, and the flow and pacing were good, so this isn't a - 'this sucked' kinda review. Just something I noticed when reading. Andy

Hmm, I don't know that I'd say that was a retelling of red riding hood, never heard tell that her 'ass hurt' afterwards, but it was entertaining. Now you can get to work on the 'tail' of Al and Red.

Than . . .er . . . God? Xeran is dead - finally So Karadur is the Queens AND Xeran's father? That was unexpected. But then what about the Incubus? I don't think they are going to let Kynan just walk away now that they know he is their prince. There must have been something in that Pact the queen made then broke or else you wouldn't have mentioned it . . . so when do we get the last chapter????

Your Beta has good taste that was an amazingly well written chapter, compelling, imaginative and at the end satisfying.

This might be a bit long, so bear - or should I say wolf - with me. Very imaginative. Not just the Chasers which were your own, but how you wove the vampire and werewolves into their own mythos. Two snaps and back for that. Too much sex for me but at least it was fun to read. So no much of a complaint there. There was so much to work with here, that I felt at time you just rushed over to get to the good parts. I suppose that is me saying this should have been longer - you know an Andy sized story But seriously, there was so much more to explore here and not just the sex. The thriple were all pretty well defined characters, but things like how quickly Kieper and Garrett 'fell in love with Slade', there was no real discussion between the three about them being a thriple, which would be rather interesting to read, how the werewolves made it to the Chasers land, the way they suddenly were welcome and allies, the way the vampires joined 'Shade's Army' even the battle at the end, all seemed to be just rushed. Which in the end is probably a good sign in that your readers (or at least this reader) wanted more. Other than that, I have to say I didn't see a lot of what happened when this started so that was good, never want to be obvious. Definitely worth reading so as a mark.