JimCarter

Well done new ridders. D'dag can celebrate a successful hatching. Seens Lessa can communicate with grumpy old holders as well as dragons. it seems fitting Hortimin however it spelled wants to stay. It seems to me to be a sign of maturing. This appears to be a good group of cluchmates. Thanks @Mawgrimfor this wonderful story. I think most of us think it could go for another few chapters, but of course, thats just us being greedy.

I think D'gar sees a lot of himself in Jevikel. I think he also sees a lot of S'brin and himself in our current romantic pair. This might explain the change to allow them both to stand this time and that also explains his comment about less than excited candidates. I hope mister bully impresses a green so that he will have plenty of male company on mating flights. Isn't that fitting the homophobe needing to learn the ways of the wyer. i

Hortaimin crying and begging D'gar for another chance will either turn him around or cause him to become more devious in his torture of his perceived enemies. Let's hope he becomes a better candidate and becomes someone they can think of as a friend.

I have thought about Hornymon. I really think he is just a bully. He seems to always have his little posy around. He is used getting his jollys from being king shit of his little posy. I think what he really needs is a group the quiet guys to team up and teach him a lesson. That as a team they are stronger than his little posy and can do great things together. Come on boys teach him a lesson.

I'll join the pack. Nice surprise. Let the good times roll.

Wonderful chapter. It nice seeing the candidates learning about taking care of dragons so they don't get a big shock when they have the responsibility for real. It seems like D'gar is going to be a good Werling master.

Loved this chapter. I know the boys are starting to get excited. I imagine it will just increase.

I don't comment often. My eyes are bad and my old hands don't to well either. From what I think about what we know so far I hope Bertie sticks it to the rest of family and really takes care of Gabe in a BIG way. I think it would be great if Edward and the others had to grovel after the will is read.

Well, I for one wouldn't put much faith in the printed information provided. I'm pretty sure the guilty ones would sanitize the provided. The key is going to be finding out where the real information is kept and confiscate that data I'm thinking the key might be to really kidnap Rilley's father and brothers and beat the truth out of them before A & B have a chance to get all the players on the same page and actively work a thought out cover-up.

That says exactly what I wanted to say, so I'll just say thanks Chris. 🤣🤣🤣😘

I just read all these comments/speculations and my headaches so bad right now. I won't make this mistake again. I'm too damn old to put myself through this again. I will enjoy the story without all the peanut gallery trying to guess/influence what happens next. Now I realize why I try to avoid these comments. I hope I'm not hurting anyone feelings, but I now know why I avoid reading other's comments.

Nice story, I'm happy for the boys to have the possibility of a decent chance at getting on with their lives. Jim

CJ's supervisor seems resigned to allow his employee the freedom to do what he needs to do. I don't think he likes it much, but so far every time he has attempted to keep CJ under his thumb the ambassador has made a show of how correct CJ's actions were. I think the guy is bidding his time. For some reason he seems like a negative kind of guy. I wonder if he thought of himself as the key employee or something as is worried CJ will become that key guy. I don't think it take much for our boy to out shine that guy. Jim

Gary I don't often take the time to write a review not because I don't want to, but because my old hands don't work so well anymore. I am sure that everyone has already said what a good job you are doing with this story, so I will be brief and just this was a fantastic chapter and I eagerly await the Mitch and Will talk, and hopefully they can finally enjoy some time together. Hopefully Mitch ends up with enough time left to enjoy some time with Will and the boys. Thanks for this great yarn. 👏 Jim

I agree, the cliffy seems a little too contrived. Just my opinion, like assholes everyone has one.