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Mine! Not so much an error as it was a repetitive line.
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February 11th, 2011, Greenwich, CT The following morning, I woke up far beyond my usual time. Normally I’d get up at 7am, but when I glanced at the alarm, my eyes not yet accustomed to the light that streamed into the room, it showed 09:12am. Yikes! I never sleep in, working for old Mr. Montgomery had prohibited it, and I need my eight hours. Anything less will result in a very grumpy Chris. I'm usually a morning person, chipper, cheerful, but today, the jury hadn't come to a verdict y
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Christ, did you proofread? Man...
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I'm about to change the dynamic. Trust me.
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He had clean undies at the bottom of the suitcase. Doncha just hate it when that happens; needing something and having to dig through...
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No offense taken, BA. I thank you for reading this far.
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There's an error in here. I just saw it. lol.
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February 10th, 2011, Greenwich, CT This went on for over another week. I cooked, he came in for a plate, gave me hassle about not eating in the dining room and for the rest of the evening, there was peace and quiet. He didn’t try to talk any more or apologize for his obvious mistake of misinterpreting the relationship between his father and me. Then, on a Friday night, he came into the kitchen (he had an uncanny way of knowing just when to come in, before I was done cooking), just as I was
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Hmm, not meant a plot device. The instructions were in there, so I guess convenience. I really don't remember, that chapter remained as it was for years. Oops?
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LOL! Food is important!
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Be sure to re-read. The edit I did was minor, but for development reason i had to take something out. That needs to happen later.
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Minor edit happened. Sorry 'bout that. The seed file I use has a different version of the story. $%^&*( - Another little edit. I copied from the wrong file!
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And so the year began. Even though I chose to not continue as a butler, officially accepting the will and its contents via notary, I ended up doing the tasks still. Maybe it was because of automatism. It was what I knew best. It also didn’t help Gregory had run the maid off with his boorish behavior, either. She had worked for old Mr. Montgomery for close to ten years, coming in twice a week for a few hours to help with cleaning and dusting; one week with Jr. and she was out the door. T
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Makes you wonder why, no?
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January 12th, 2011, Greenwich, CT We survived the weekend without too much mishap; I mainly avoided Gregory whenever I could; if he noticed it, he didn’t let on. The overall tone was a bit sad, though. An era had come to an end, or so it seemed. Soon I’d have to leave, and that saddened me more than I expected. Mr. Montgomery had been very good to me. Not only financially, but also as a human being. He’d given me a chance when no one else would, and for that, I’d always be thankful.
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That's a possibilty, I guess.. He does. In a kind of fun way, lol! Not fun for Greg, though, but he'll realize Chris's value. I make no promises. Thank you! Greg is the way he is for a reason, to be revealed later. It puts some things in perspective. Chris is also not your run-of-the-mill type, so even if the other two were available for it, they'd not be good for him. Sometimes it's hard to see clear, when the threats mount... Clearly, Chris's fear of him makes him not think that way. But wait; Greg will make another threat soon enough. One more effective. Am about to post that chapter.
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February 2nd, 2006, Greenwich, CT. It was 10pm, and we were sitting in the den, with a nice fire going; Mr. Montgomery preferred a real fire as opposed to the state-of-the-art heating system. It had been installed several years ago, he’d told me. But every day, when the evenings were still long and the nights still cold, he asked for a fire to be lit in certain rooms. The dining room, his study, his own room, the den and the library. The heating system was turned up to heat the rest; it wa
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I dropped Gregory’s clothes off at the cleaners that afternoon, and went on to get some more groceries; if Seth’s wife, Kathleen, and the children were coming, I’d definitely needed to stock up on candy and fruit. They loved their sweets. Kat had a rule, or at least had it the last time they visited; take one piece of candy and eat a piece of fruit. Take two pieces of candy? Take two pieces of fruit. I bought an equal amount of each, and went perusing the isles for dinner ideas. Je
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That's a possibilty, I guess.. He does. In a kind of fun way, lol! Not fun for Greg, though, but he'll realize Chris's value. I make no promises. Thank you! Greg is the way he is for a reason, to be revealed later. It puts some things in perspective. Chris is also not your run-of-the-mill type, so even if the other two were available for it, they'd not be good for him. Sometimes it's hard to see clear, when the threats mount...
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Dammit, did you proofread this before? How do you know so much already?
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LOL! You didn't miss it; it's new.
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He will in one of the upcoming chapters. If he survives that, though...
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LOL! It won't. And I have 2, and save online these days, so that won't happen again.
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It shouldn't; it's close to finished on my computer. New chapters will be forthcoming today. EDIT: Duh, that would be true if I hadn't fallen asleep! Woops! More later today.
