Marzipan
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Thank you for your help! I'm going to offer 1. Run and Tell from Hairspray 2. Time Wrap from Rocky Horror Picture Show (loved that, love Rocky!) 3. Memory from Cats for the cooldown and stretching
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But Bee, I stopped watching Bones almost a year ago! Found myself much better activities! K, I'll keep the telly if Lily want's to watch it.
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That will not happen! *gets rid of her telly before Lily comes* Can't wait for you to come!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hello Ande! Welcome to GA! I'm looking forward on your stories! Is it vampires that you write about Have fun here!
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This was a lighter chapter compared to the first ones and had a touch of humour in it. Soo, Draco and Harry, slowly building towards that... It is fun to see how you make Draco more likeable. I liked him when he was bad boy too and soo full of himself. Is he conna humble in your interperation? JKR alway hinted that Harry would be the powerful one, The One that Lived, but she didn't make him superior or build up as powerful future as you have done. I like he's becoming a superwizard Wonder how much politics you are gonna sneak in now that Harry posesses a chair too... Soo much fun
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It has to be a musical song... but thanks for those tips!
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So, it might be a wise call for me to stay away from every single episode of it even with the danger of being left as a wall flower when everyone else yada-yada-yada about it I can't take anymore addictions...
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Trev doesn't get to talk enough of Glee I agree it must (might) be good show and all... Have not seen a single episode of it, so it kinda gets boring to listen about it all the time. Maybe I'll give Glee a go so I can actually participate in the on going polemik.
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I have no idea where to start... I need 3 well known musical songs. Any suggestion or recommendations? They would be used in a gym class and they need to have a sorta beat in them... Sigh, mys boss has weird ideas... :wacko:
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I'm sure that something was definitely missing Sigh... this thread should help me out of my romantic mood not get deeper in it.
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The Ancient and Most Noble House of Black
Marzipan commented on Myr's story chapter in The Ancient and Most Noble House of Black
All the magical turmoil and epical fighting almost drowned the fact that Harry was getting in touch with his gay side. Well that must have been the smallest of his problems at the time. You can make the action parts flow so easily. Also the sadness and comfort between the boys felt believable. But Sirius died already, My favorite characters in the originals were Sirius Black, Severus Snape and Draco with C . Gonna be interesting to see where you lead this story! -
The chills on my arms say that I liked it! The original had that effect on me and I guess I feel I'm reading an adult version of it. I love this. Poor Drago!
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I know, peeps are in total denial about that one!
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Wows, this was much darker than the origials, but I'm liking the flow of the story and the sharper contrasts. Waiting to see how this developes. Especialy I'm keeping my eye in the tone and how you have transformed it, sooo iteresting Definitely gonna continue to read! Very good indeed!
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I think it is... but then again what do I know. I have not experienced THE LOVE ever, nor lost it.
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Consider yourself lucky! I'm afraid I will never feel that way with anyone. What I think or dream I want is so different than actually having experienced that even for a passing moment.
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I'm a total virgin with Harry Potter fan-fics, so I'm looking forward for this trip with you as a captain! I have no idea what upset you with book 5?
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Crimson Lies, Sorbet Dreams, and the Sour Seraphic
Marzipan commented on Lugh's story chapter in Crimson Lies, Sorbet Dreams, and the Sour Seraphic
This one was a reall puzzle to read. It is the kind of stories that one needs to stop and think. You write them well, and that makes me coming back! I felt lost with the faceless characters almost all the time. But that's war, impersonal and destructive. Yet the individual acts alternated from merciful and sacrificial to cruel and vendictive. And the seraphs frustration was a real nice touch. -
lol Bet you are a heartbreaker I know one of that kind, **needs to be careful around them**
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I can only speak for myself. I'm not working a series out of popularity pressure, it is an inner obligation to complite what I have started. I originally started my story as a single. But in the middle of it I found out I wanted to expand it to three pieces series. So that. It has a clear start and middle part and a closure. And all stories work as singles too. They are equal to each other.
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Oh no... I think my heart shattered now. I've just been reading a similar story from the other side and this just hit the nerve after it. But still, ending a life, a foolish sacrifice for love '*weeps**. The wooden boy, how appropriate. It is said that the truth is carved in the stone, but wood bends and twists easily, so even if our wooden boy here feels he was the seducer, is that the whole truth?
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Glorious death is not. You captured so well the unavoidable.
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The ending said it: the rest of our lives. That means love.
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You presented a deep cutting moral dilemma with your story. I have never personally thought about other person making me full, or keep me in balance. To me finding balance is something deeply personal and an ongoing process. It is never finished. But you made me think about my perspectives of balance again. I loved the way the voice of the narrator rolled fro the start. It was easy to put myself in his shoes. I also loved that you left the choice he eventually makes open, although I think he stayed with the guy. Well, I think that that statement says more about me, heh-heh... Thank you for a really thoughtful piece of story!
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I really am interested to join you guys if you'll have me . It's only matter of me getting my holidays for that time.
