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  1. Philippe

    Chapter 12

    You mean a script that somewhat explains why you’re shooting up the town in a car chase that results in multiple crashes, explosions, and possibly after thousands of ammo rounds being fired…oh my, someone got shot, it’s just a flesh wound?
  2. Philippe

    Chapter 12

    Maybe a tragic comedy where everything keeps going so wrong for Will that he is jumping from one tightrope to another as he goes from day to day? 😂
  3. Philippe

    Chapter 12

    Yes, the necklace… hmmm 🤔. Caitlin could still be a suspect in that the killer could have had a scuffle with Joey causing the necklace to break and fall noticed or unnoticed by the killer, but not seeing or finding it quickly they could have left just to get away from the obvious scene. But a witness could have then picked it up not having the courage to tell the story to the police; many would be suspects with Joey’s recent history, so why put yourself on the list? If Caitlin was directly involved, it makes no sense to me that she would have waited under the tree…unless she hoped for another to give her an alibi; but that seems less likely at first glance. So was she shocked that Will had it because that could make him suspect or that he might know more than he confessed to her? Much mystery but still not enough information to form a clear picture yet.
  4. Philippe

    Act II - Memory

    Oh goodness, that makes the Cliffhanger even more cruel… We interrupt the witch to take this break, just know that the preempted content will be shown in its entirety next week, meanwhile, for an update on the Eurovision competition. Let’s review the selection process…
  5. Philippe

    Chapter 25

    Interesting may be an understatement. Will they stay in writers mode or will they become hostile reporter mode? How much info have they already collected on Tony Scott, celebrity writer? Like the ambush at the restaurant, there’s always someone trying to elevate themselves above someone that holds a spot they envy. Will Tony be quick to show just how normal he and all his friends are, in light of claims of abnormal abominations; where the abnormal is really the antagonist sitting in the club challenging him.
  6. Philippe

    Act II - Memory

    It’s hard not to hate the selfish, sanctimonious, and arrogant Witch Bitch Mom; man, Gabriel doesn’t remember her from childhood, and that’s a good thing. But I can’t image just how much he hates her at this moment just before she spills her guts…ahem, mind?? I can only image that it will then be even worse. I like how the Lord Vampire Protector stood in indifference as I’m sure he understood this would only go so far and then ricochet…or boomerang back to the 🧙‍♀️ witch. Cruel cliffhanger though as the powerful spell, loaded with all the power she could muster and then some, sustained for an unexpectedly long stretch as she brought all she could bear for repeated demands to SPEAK THE TRUTH! Now if the entirety of the spell boomerangs…the 🧙 witch should be squirming with excruciating pain as she spills her plan, then spills her plans from the beginning, and perhaps spills her long involvement in wolf affairs.
  7. Philippe

    Act II - Memory

    Then I guess I’ll have to submit a scaled chapter rating comment: 1-3 😠 😡 😤 🤷‍♂️ 🤣
  8. Philippe

    Act II - Memory

    She even stated that reality just before it happened, so correction “Stupid Bitch, what do you know?”
  9. Philippe

    Act II - Memory

    Oh do tell all mommy dearest, 🧐 🧐. This should be most juicy. As hopefully she divulges all from the beginning of her influences over wolves. Perhaps we’ll learn of the old King and just why Mommy Dearest is so worried about the return of the Guardians?
  10. Neither a branding iron nor a cattle prod would be anything more than a good start for vengeance on Ian. He needs that brand somewhere prominent like a cheek, as hands can be excused too easily when simply gloved, with something satanic like the devil he is. Then…let the real revenge commence, after his little Ian styled off the books incarceration, every victim needs a public forum to declare the misdeeds of this sadistic SOB. Then put him in prison, in the communal (gen population) holding, along with all the surviving victims he had imprisoned. Dead by a thousand cuts would be too kind though maybe necessary so that Ian can no longer manipulate the narrative with his remaining contacts…the ones also worried to be exposed. But wait, Amanda should be charged as accomplice as well as Natalie, so the implications need to be uncovered quickly; before the rats all flee the sinking ship named IAN. Now Ian wants to silence that boy, the one that could ruin him. To whom is that boy that Ian speaks; Gael, Carlos, or is it the snake called Leo. That’s one connection through Natalie we know to having been disclosed to Gael, but what of his close relationship with Ophelia? Is that just a hopeful Mom-in-Law thing or is it much deeper? But likewise, Natalie exposed herself as being of the same manipulative cloth as Ian. So whether working together with Amanda or on her own, Natalie needs to go…even Carlos deserves better and a second chance free of Ian.
  11. Man, look at that nice hardtop road. That is one expensive work project, but less foundation materials required and less surface prep as a cobblestone road; imagine how tough on those horses’ hooves and ligaments.
  12. IEDs that blend right in there…kaboom, gotcha.
  13. The intro-douchion has been received, as being worst than the old Jeff is warning enough that a 1 mile separation in residences just…doesn’t seem enough. Unfortunately, a little of the old Jeff still rang through as he divulged things said and done between Michael and Stephen with expectations of privacy. i’ve always said that telling your best friend something in secret is a foolish notion, as your best friend may have another best friend themselves that they share that secret with, and that best friend has another best friend that they share that secret with too, etc., etc.,… So, the old saying, “two can keep a secret, if one of them is dead.” That was the disappointment of this chapter, Jeff is making progress, but still has a ways to go in understanding how to respect others. Otherwise, this is a fairly progressive Chapter. Heck, come out to your parents and win a double bed! 🤣 I had conservative parents, I would have kept my mouth shut, and would have been tickled to just enjoy a two man tent on the occasion parents and weather allowed a sleepover. 😎 After all, we all know a fantasy is more intense if you’re only inches away from your fantasy boy. 😢
  14. Philippe

    Chapter 1 of 10

    Oh goodness, Troy is not just a Christian antagonist wearing a pentagram pendant, he believes himself to be conjuring, dark spirits, and perhaps Satan himself. His personality doesn’t give us the impression that he is anything other than a Goth. The fact that he is a sexually depressed teenager toying with the ideas and hopes of putting a spell on his ideal crush, is not what would stereotypically be imagined as a Satanist. That seems to me as normal teen frustration as they find themselves drowning in anxieties over her friendship and relationship emotions, or perhaps more likely overwhelming frustrations. Ironically, he is actually making Seth more aware of other people’s feelings and existence, thinking beyond his normal drinking and partying nature; so as a Satanist Troy has Seth on a seemingly better path of life at this time. So whether we have a true Satanist or a depressed teen that now identifies as a Satanist due to his wishes for his ideal crush to fall for him seems to have come true. Perhaps this is where understanding the disgruntled and frustrated teen interaction Troy had with his mom would help us out in understanding the true Troy. Not that the mom of a teenage boy has the greatest insight, but her point of view may help explain more of what we see and understand about Troy. Now that Troy has Seth on a better path, we can only hope that Seth will now pull Troy to a better path and perhaps see the strength of this young gay teen relationship. Prove to be a love story, after all, how many is satanist would identify themselves as I romantic? 🤣
  15. Philippe

    Chapter 11

    Was I a suspect? To what? Will attended a party and was only witness to standard party crimes: alcohol, weed, pills, etc. Fleeing the scene of a crime? Will didn’t commit a crime, didn’t witness a crime (other than to himself), therefore is not fleeing with awareness or direct knowledge of a crime he nor anyone else committed. Is he a material witness? Possibly yes, depending on the investigation and whether police, prosecutors, or defense counsel feels his presence is necessary as alibi or witness. That requires convincing a judge to issue warrants ONLY if there is a risk of a no show or if view a hostile witness. Do I need a lawyer? I would, having seen some shit work of police and detectives building a case on their beliefs versus on were solid evidence takes the case. The police are not your friend, if any questions concern you or ask verification of your whereabouts, plead the fifth and let them build a case if they can. It’s something of a risk as it invites simple police and detectives to take a path of lease resistance. However, if Will has a solid alibi with the girl it’s not long before he’s less attractive…but a single person alibi is risky in that some may not cooperate, may disavow knowledge, etc. But sometimes the first 24-72 hours of a murder case is just investigating, yet some departments rush an arrest, but then suffer if unable to build a charge worthy case within the holding time limit. Sometimes being in holding can keep any circumstantial evidence from being collected as the police and detectives will scrutinize every activity and contact that you have while remaining free; yes, a fish is guilty of hanging out in water, so one is no more guilty than another without more direct correlation of evidence. Does Will need to talk to the Doc? Absolutely, he’s just been assaulted, with attempted rape at least (rape in many states), and to top it off, his best friend did this to him, and he’s the one dead. HOWEVER, doctor patient confidentiality is moot for attempted suicide or in cases of murder in many states. So speaking to the doctor needs to be done with care and careful wording. Likewise, unless Aiden seeks a joint appointment for his own PTSD associated with Will’s care, then doctor patient confidentiality may include him, but going as just a confidant and a supporter for Will would unfortunately be a mistake. Should murder charges be levied against Will, confidentiality will not apply to Aiden and Aidan would have full knowledge to the entire session and all of Will‘s comments would be unprotected via Aiden.
  16. Philippe

    Chapter 11

    Though it’s always an emotional situation and likewise with the decision, but Joey’s mom would be a good source for possible help if the decision is to keep the child; not that it’s her obligation or responsibility, but likewise, it will be her grandchild and a connection to Joey for them as parents. The worst they say is no way, but they may actually want to sincerely help and be a part of the child’s life.
  17. Philippe

    Chapter 10 of 10

    While it’s always nice to have author interaction, even better having authors bare their works with us here on GA, but life also has its priorities and demands, so enjoy your trip and come back safe…it will all be here awaiting your return.
  18. Philippe

    Chapter 11

    And where oh where, Will that necklace appear?
  19. Philippe

    Chapter 10 of 10

    Hmmm 🤔, just when you think Seth has issues Troy’s mom shows up with Troy seeming to clam up, and maybe even bristles; what’s up with that? There seems to be some kind of resentment or animosity going on. Was there a hidden meaning in the chicken nuggets dinner or Troy liking them? Or does Troy resent that she tries to act differently in front of Seth but will launch into a different mode when Troy returns home? It doesn’t all add up, yet Seth believes Troy to be much more together, perhaps mature, than himself. Mom is vague in that she is “kinda a volunteer,” but kinda is not what allows her access to other people’s children, especially handicapped. Either way, mom is gone and Troy is back to his happy place with Seth, and Seth is infected by the bright mood.
  20. Philippe

    Chapter 7

    Good surf boards, especially with history, draw a lot of interest. 🤷‍♂️ 😆 These chapters are ratcheting up the suspense and due to the nature of the crimes, it’s a thriller with all kinds to opportunities for someone on the good side to be injured or killed (DON’T DO IT @Paladin).May the lead only penetrate the asses of the asses, as they need to stand and be judged. However, in the interest of kids not having to relive the trauma, I hope the judge rules video evidence be verified and victims only be identified as minors (even if later turning of age) and that defense has no grounds of which to cross examine the victims as the crimes are well documented in video testimony. The defense can only challenge the authenticity of the videos and the process for validation. Likewise, they should have all assets frozen for damages due to the significant numbers of victims and be left at the mercy of public defenders.
  21. Philippe

    After The Storm

    Mom may have saved Robert from doing major prison time, as his rage may have not been peaking yet, but mom broke the chain of events enough that his rage may have stopped when otherwise…
  22. Philippe

    Chapter 7

    Ahhh, but there may be more than two groups at play, I read it as 2-3; 1) Joshua, Cam, Jordan, 2) Daniel and whom ever grabs his arm, 3) The Bikers with Batons, which may or may not be with Daniel.
  23. Philippe

    Chapter 7

    Bon voyage auntie and uncle, yeah, shit happens.
  24. Ian’s ghost of Christmas past, and future, has appeared. Hopefully he has a good long hard talk with Carlos, his little brother. I’m surprised that Carlos could recognize him so quickly but I’m glad he could, as that removes the doubts that might would linger if Sam had to identify himself and declare his relationship. The timing is so appropriate. Carlos has once again started to buckle under Ian’s thumb; his thoughts of being torn between Gael’s wrath for Justice itself vs blood…Ian, truth versus Ian and his perceived legacy. Hmmm 🧐, conniving Natalie in my opinion is the silent threat that matches Ian’s in your face threat; sandwiched in between is Carlos. Though Natalie has been a quieter threat, Carlos has picked up on clues of her motives and alignment with Ian, and so appropriately called her Ian’s lapdog; what an affectionate name for your dear wife. 🤣
  25. Philippe

    Chapter 9 of 10

    Braver than I at that point, it still feels awkward for me as I’ve never been much for PDA. I tend to that being a more private and intimate type thing. Maybe 🤔 I became that way due to being a basketball lover…I dribbles A LOT before I shoot. So for play can be rather telling, especially in light colored pants; yes, been there exposed in line at a burger joint, the agent just smiled largely as he served my order. It was as I was seated that I realized just how exposed I was. 🤦‍♂️ So embarrassed, but now, I think I might wear it with pride in certain places. 🤣
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