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  1. Philippe

    Erupt Ch 7

    Yeah really, the notion of commuting in an airplane sounds exciting, but the weather in that area is far different than the arid regions of Australia. With icing, severe winter storms, and just plain cloud cover and fog, it would be a weather related mishap in waiting; and he would still need a vehicle at the airport, as a bike is just as impractical in the inclement months. Likewise, a seaplane is a lot heavier and slower than its land counterpart; adding possibly 25-30% longer flight times, with worsening characteristics in icing, making the commute by seaplane even more dangerous and impractical; oh but the fun on nice weather days with public bodies of water.
  2. Philippe

    Chapter 45

    Rasmus! Young but still pushed out the door, Much the price of global war. Father fears - to protect his son, Invading forces may like his one. Tow haired boy with eyes of blue, Favored child to be imbued. Country life make him seem plain, Not to be German, but Dane. Much to learn, a foreign land, No home, wrong tongue, for England. Found in street, abused and cursed, Given home, care, without purse. Street to floor to bed to share, With youth in mental nightmare. Deep depression, tub of red, Too confusing - much unsaid. Much blood needed - none did match, Until Dane blood did, no catch. Blood brothers, not once, but deuce, Save life, save face, adopt a truce. Despondent mom, brother met, With a promise to be kept. Low life desire, reluctant kiss, Puts Dane stomach in a twist. More touch, more kiss, they did try, Dane virginity gone bye. Penetration with great pain, More confident is the Dane. Tossed in bed, rolled in the hay, Country trip with naked play. Stroke a penis, pull a teat, Country boy life, can be sweet. City, country, harvest run, This chapter, shows us more fun! Karl, write your family a letter, Hope news can make nightmares better. @LittleCherryBlossom26, Rasmus actor, he be Dane, Casting him, makes you quite sane.
  3. Philippe

    Chapter 61

    Like fireworks zooming and screaming to their apex…now wait for it…wait…wait…
  4. Philippe

    Chapter 59

    Mom had the one consultation and that doctor had accepted her for care if desired, however at the time she planned to continue with Psychopath Dr B. Rapist…ahem…Psychologist Dr B. Stevens; did she have more or was it on hold by her choice, if not seen in between those visits it could easily be argued that he was no longer her doctor at all. Either way, now just have the new doctor do a follow up session with witness or recorded, record the dates care started, and request ALL RECORDS PERTAINING to her care. A law suite may be premature, but it too can be amended, and that would certainly justify the restraining order. Even if committed to volunteer in-house evaluation, it would serve as a restraining order as those programs have very restricted access.
  5. Philippe

    Chapter 43

    @scrubber6620, please don’t take this as an attack of your input or logic, but rather pointing out a different perspective, both personal and of my understanding of historical context. It’s so hard to put ourselves into the early 1940 mindset and societal context. There was no internet for learning and sharing anything about sex; especially sex that was more than likely to get you executed. Libraries were prohibited from shelving such smut and even scrutinized minors for inquiring mature subjects in medical or educational journals “appropriate only for adults.” Learning about sex more often was by exploring, experimenting, and possibly trusting someone rumored to have experience that may teach you how others were “doing it.” Even several decades ago in my sexual formative days, books were still only eluding to practices without details to help educate a young gay man in the ways of safer, more compassionate, and more mutually synchronized consent. It was not unusual to believe entry only required Vaseline and the receiver would get use to and learn to enjoy submitting to “being the girl” in the act between guys. Assuming it had progressed beyond just being a cocksucker for guys unable to accept they were truly willing partners to homosexual sex. So while Karl feels the ache and desire of sex, and has become somewhat attached to George, he also feels the underlying sense that this is not seen, accepted, nor normal. Now Karl trust Paul enough to seek some level of counsel; ironically, Paul may understand George better than thought, as the older Paul may have had a younger George sharing sexual experimentation back in their earlier days. Somewhere within, Paul must have known of George’s special friendship. Either way, the relationship of George, Paul, and George’s lost love has yet to reveal a timeline that gives us the understanding of when, why, and how, George was on the streets; and when he became a more permanent resident in the Hoskin home. George is not in the military due to his vision, however the draft requirements could be changed based on support functions needed; unlikely, as every society needs a work force to support war efforts from home. @LittleCherryBlossom26, your casting script would be interesting so long as any spoilers are segregated or listed by chapters; so as to be selective by choice. Great job at trying to bring the awkwardness of young gay men and sex to us using a sheltered and much different time period; accentuated by the communication barriers within language, age, and experience.
  6. Is that before or after the bloody nose routine? 😝
  7. Philippe

    Chapter 59

    State police need to be brought in due to the conflict and corruption; ironically, the doctor and Benny probably just gave them the ammo to get the state investigation opened, and that should make things move rather quickly. These guys jumped from the frying pan into the fire by compromising ethics for coverup; the biggest indicator of guilt and/or foul play.
  8. Philippe

    Chapter 58

    Blue collar translation….the doctor says “it smells like §h|t 💩 in here,” the policeman says “it looks like §h|t in here,” and the teacher says “history repeats itself and we’re in deep §h|t.” 🥵
  9. Philippe

    Chapter 58

    Ok…Who is on first? Exactly!
  10. Philippe

    Chapter 15

    Wow, so much deceit and deception. Has Morgana been vanquished by death or merely forced into an undesired transformation? Hopefully Thade will bring clarity in the aftermath of this entrapped battle the young had to endure. The Knights Bastian and Sage have become pivotal in this battle for the return of rightful reign; the underlying doubts in returning the sword evaporated into courage as they witnessed the transformation, then leapt into action against the legendary foe.
  11. Philippe

    Up Close

    As with the Mishith that are incomplete without their other half, Mira and Shay certainly understand that feeling as they have an insatiable urge to become one…or at least to enjoy trying! 😊 Hmmm 🤔, a little one? A family? Miracle Jr? True to the Hartley name, Tytos Hartley is every bit as power hungry, but with vastly more resources. Now we have him standing at an ancient control console, much the way we saw a Hartley try to steal the aqumi node at the capital from Shay. Aqumi in the hands of a Hartley is almost as scary as the Enemy. Under the Enemy’s control you become a mindless slave to the master, losing humanity and awareness. Under Hartley you’d become a tortured human soul, every bit the slave but with the awareness of endless torture. Liberty lives! Much the way Shay liberated Mira, Liberty appears to be liberated but with a sense of belonging; hopefully that’s true and we can see more benefits of that relationship. The Herald is reconstituted and back hot on the trail of Shay; will Shay figure out the new gifts 🎁 before the Herald demonstrates the adaptive learning of the Enemy? Earth has been invaded, Hartley stands before an aqumi node, and the Herald has materialized amongst the lifeboat and command vessel that the ancients put all their faith for survival of our universe in. Wow; suspenseful doesn’t even begin to explain the momentum within this multi-layered series! @Stellar, thank you so very much for sharing this labor of love and all that it takes to bring this story to us!
  12. If the ideal on 21 more chapters does result in a happy dance then perhaps Deadnus is the bedfellow for you! The statement of if only Graham could be Vincent’s mentor hints of promise that indeed there is hope for Vincent yet. Yes, Vinicius had great advise, with amazing foresight. Perhaps his talks to young Vincent were more impactful than anyone could ever know, and thru Dani perhaps Vinicius thru Graham and Dani is still having that impact today.
  13. Insane??? No, but living dangerously, YES. Anyone that clandestinely attacks the first and only council kingdom’s leaders, in the name of fighting a tyrant, while hopeful to gain help in eliminating said tyrant, and by undermining possibly the kingdom’s if not the world’s most powerful magik wielder is definitely touched; Kalian did ask him to defend why he shouldn’t be executed RIGHT NOW for giving every indication of intent to kill him; yes, he is insane…and lacking social graces too. @Geemeedee, in honor of Eon and Wren’s relationship, why would your desired matchup of Loren and Suman be any less traumatic…ahem, I mean meaningful; oh goodness are the days of the gatherings of “uncles” going to drive Kalian crazy while entertaining Wyn. Even Talon may join Wren in sharpening the knives. Ironically, the extreme matchup of the Princes of Light and Dark seems tame compared to that of Eon/Wren and the possibility of Loren/Suman. Is this a mashup of The Addams Family and The Munsters? Hahaha 🤣
  14. Philippe

    Chapter 45

    My Truth by Ann Marie’s Mom Mirror, mirror on the wall, show blind and ignorant reality of all, truth as it should be, please show this to me. ….No, no, don’t show me what they’ve done, show them my truth or you be gone!
  15. Philippe

    Chapter 38

    Not intending to hurt yourself doesn’t normally require an exposed blade near your arm. Karl has amazing timing to keep interrupting George, but now through this accident, he can see that his actions can be resulting in other being/getting hurt. The irony of depression, I wanted to kill myself, but please don’t tell the Hopkins… So yes, we may have a breakthrough in that George can start thinking beyond his own internalized depression. I think Karl is exactly what George needs; naivety that demands explanation, and explanation that requires thought and patience to communicate. Yet Karl is vested enough to not run away from George’s scary actions and by giving blood to save “not a friend” from his own foolhardy death wish. Whether Karl understands blood brother or not is kinda irrelevant as George is now talking more levelheaded and with a rational fear, without screaming; promising signs for moving towards a healthier perspective.
  16. Philippe

    Chapter 68

    We in the Galactic already have a “few” with the council that try to “respect” the resources…but the majority thinks we have found a pirates treasure of resources to be harvested at will; now you bear witness to an unknown alien species laying claim to our booty? Yeah, an unexpected development…that’s sure to get slow rolled in diplomatic haggling…until the superior forces show up and establish habitat and no share protocols. Obviously having no concept of first contact diplomacy, or even self preservation when assuming the alien race has no defensive capabilities, or superior forces; and let alone the little pet velociraptor that can probably incite pack defensive reactions by pure instincts found within herds. Maybe Essell and Garjah need to establish a pack for bouncer; now that’s a security force with some teeth to it!
  17. What a baby, continuously wailing, whimpering, and whining for others to figure out its needs; what you’d expect from the infant but not the Dleth Crown Prince. I’m not sure he proved a case for why he should have been spared. His one redeeming quality was protecting the teen and the infant of magik. While Suman is quiet crazy, the King is completely and utterly insane for power and control. Ironic that he should feel superior to one Prince, if not two Princes, that actually have the power he can never possess through his reign of terror; Suman has much to learn, but can he comprehend…
  18. Philippe

    Chapter 37

    Oh goodness, the psychiatrist hasn’t been able to break George’s death wish and now poor Karl get punished for his heroics in rescue, and life saving blood transfusion; poor Karl, that has to be terribly confusing, frustrating, and enough to make him challenge George’s appreciation for others too. Maybe that will be just the distraction George needs to… take his hands, grab his ears, and pull his head from his a$$. Perhaps in the heat of that argument Karl will declare his promise to Jojo and make George climb from his depths of despair 😩 . It’s great to see the independent relationship with Jojo bringing friendship to two deserving young men. Hopefully Karl will start to put his mind at ease as he processes to events and returns to better dreams and rest. If not, I hope George gets the full effect of Karl’s traumatic nightmares and gains more appreciation of what Karl is suffering too. @LittleCherryBlossom26, this is definitely dark, but it gives us a few rays of sunshine the light the path for brighter days…I hope!
  19. Hmmm 🤔, so Dani is under attack. Is the assassin bad at aim or is it exactly as desired; not fatal targeting and doses could be just the scheme to get Dani secreted away from the school, for his rescue, for his security, just as an excuse to hide him from all but the ones wanting him under their control. Deadnus is an easy assumption for this action, but Uncle Ciprian seemed to have greater plans than those known to Vincient; the sidebar discussion after the awakening was not of reassurance for Vincient reigning without undercurrents and back channeling power. He was rather impatient for Dani’s support and any hesitation meant possibly not joining…therefore enemy. Vincient waved him off to say he and only he, would deal with Dani… TRUST NO ONE Vague prophecies or contextual riddles, did Vinicius betray Romero, or was the King betrayed and blamed for rogue vampire elements….CIPRIAN??? His anti human, vampire dynasty ambitions fit the motive. Likewise, was the human Dahlia killed or turned at the hand of the anti human elements. So much suspicion surrounding Ciprian; has Ciprian again repeated a betrayal to the rightful heir by orchestrating a hit on Dani? @C. Henderson, really? A hit job cliffhanger…from a peaceful ride back and a good dream sleep?? You are twisted and evil 👿! But the story is wickedly good 😊, so I hope you have the twelve days of Christmas written, edited and loaded with auto posting throughout the holidays, for us kids are ready for the wonderful gifting that would be! Hahaha Joyful wishes into the holiday season everyone!
  20. Philippe

    Chapter 36

    That’s true, but remember too that, it’s complicated that quiet and naive Karl doesn’t speak much and he doesn’t read nor write; so the learning curve is more of a ruffled curve, and time intensive to learn Karl…with Karl! 😝 The good news is that they have the patience for chess, so learning the Danish alphabet and phonetics from a country boy that doesn’t read or write should be good for many hours of fun; Pictionary with sounds! Hahaha
  21. Philippe

    Chapter 36

    So we have the confirmation of the boys in the picture, and near testimony of George being Robert’s nephew…if not by blood then of commitment to little brother it would seem; so whether fathered, fostered, or adopted by Lewis, George is doublely family. First by relationship to Lewis and then with a long history with Robert’s side of the Hopkins. Learning more of the tragedy of Lewis’ short life; with war, war bride, George, and the Spanish Flu is great and eager to learn more. Ironically, Lewis died at almost the same age as George is now. George idled by anguish, while in contrast Lewis appeared to have no stops in pursuit of life’s adventures and/or challenges. How much of George’s withdrawal is mommy dearest and how much the internal battle George had for years. From the seemingly skittish and less confident disposition of George’s little brother, we may be witnessing history repeating George’s youthful struggle in home life. No doubts as to why George found comfort with Cousin (but more a brother) Paul. But when did Paul and family finally learn of George’s home and street life? How much do they already know? Waiting for George to say or just too awkward to talk about sexuality(especially in that age in history)? Was mom keeping him away from Robert’s side of the family? Once again Karl shines as a warm supporting soul. Many guests could choose to turn a blind eye, “out of sight, out of mind,” as it provides distance and avoids the awkwardness. As this is, it will be great to learn Karl’s POV on this eventful night, the picture, the strong pains of mental anguish, and how he relates this to sorting his own feelings.
  22. Philippe

    Chapter 50

    That a-hole is no therapist! Springing such a entrapment apology upon a teen Wolf estranged from an abusive adult (not parent) is unprofessional and against guardianship of the minor! Argh, the timing again is highly suspicious.
  23. Philippe

    Chapter 42

    The court decision was due to a lack of financial awareness and self determination, but this tantrum, and the emotional refusal to concede anything to the family is a dangerous game for Ann Marie. She could find herself losing all rights and possibly committed into full time psychiatric care…no cabin, no freedom, and no credit card. She is a physical threat to herself and others.
  24. Philippe

    Chapter 35

    It’s a roller coaster ride with George revived, but then subjected to mommy dearest; confessions but still without acceptance. Mom hasn’t changed. George needs to look beyond the mirror to realize he is not being judged as harshly by some others as he is by himself; Mr Hopkins seems to know but not care to the extent of it changing their relationship, and furthermore honors the dead.
  25. Philippe

    Chapter 34

    Oh geez, her home is somehow broken but now mom believes she will bring George back there, as the best and right thing to do; argh, you can’t fix your broken home by just pretending now everything will be ok or that you can just smile to make things better. As the old saying goes… “from the mouths of babes,” Jojo’s body language and overall behavior seems to scream out in defiance of the open and welcoming family dinner. Poor Jojo seems to be caught in the middle with the family concerns of George, but he finds a kindred spirit in Karl as Karl sees and understands what the boy is unable to express outright; the innocence and sincerity in both of these young men is both heartwarming yet heartbreaking; yet, the very nature of it seems to be a milestone of significance for the future. George has familiar family support from the Hopkins, then with the shared blood of these boys, family of one and life blood of the other, will George feel the pull back towards life beyond mourning for Nathan?
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