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Philippe

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  1. Philippe

    Chapter 2

    He feels the need to show he’s moving on, but perhaps he should wait until the business is up and running, with new but established deliveries, before trading off the truck, The major depreciation is not likely to change much for the next year, especially if mileage is low. What happened to his vehicle, or did they share a single household vehicle?
  2. Philippe

    Chapter 2

    How do you handle a Hungary man…with both hands.
  3. Philippe

    Chapter 2

    Exactly, there is no perfect, just a balancing act of good and bad; hopefully with the right people to support you when it gets too challenging.
  4. Philippe

    Chapter 2

    Yes, we all grieve differently but we also have different sensitivities…and all that on our own schedule of what is right and when we’re ready. The sad part is too often we think we have to totally let go, it’s farewell forever. Even our new interest should be concerned with that expectation, as to what does that say about any future relationships when you’ve been one so disconnected that it’s so easy to say farewell…forever. On a side note; severe old studies found that divorced people were much more likely to divorce, again, than others for the first time; in fact, many had a least two divorces or more. Human nature is often habitual. So a widower is hopefully more likely to love…until death do thee part. 🙃 So back to Lonnie, seeing someone else may be a slow, healing, and forgiving process for Lonnie, but also allowing Keve know it’s ok to speak of the departed partner, and that Lonnie needs to be able to speak of his departed partner. Finding a balance of understanding, balancing the past and present, is bound to be a work in progress. if ever lonely, I can’t think of a better person to help…fill that void, than a hunky plumber; he should be very good at snaking your lines and Che king line pressures.
  5. Philippe

    Chapter 11

    It’s very disturbing that Miss Vessey is chatting so freely about tribal business with her daughter. If the mom knows her daughter enough to share, then the implications are that she doesn’t care herself. If sharing without knowing the habit of gab, then she is using tribal business and authority to connect with her daughter; either way, as a council member she is betraying the tribe in discussing the council busy in larger circles…unless cleared by tribe, yet, we know the intent was strict discretion and that the looting is a security concern. So did Pam really get the info from mom, or is mom good with notes but poor on securing them?
  6. Philippe

    Chapter 11

    Yup, Gordon and Daisy would probably give us a glimpse into hell on earth; then bring that into the family and it’s…torture from satin incarnate. As to Micah and Asher, I personally can’t see Asher as a trusted lover anymore, and I’m not sure that Micah isn’t dancing closer to that same very dance floor of becoming more controlling, and less secure when it doesn’t go as he expects.
  7. Philippe

    Chapter 3

    Oh my, I was speaking of the boys using frantic sign language with their eyes closed…awkwardly searching for each other’s tonsils.
  8. Philippe

    Chapter 3

    Bummer of a name though, popular as a boy name …long time ago, but tends toward being more of a girl name now days; yet, still better than the boy named Sue.
  9. Philippe

    Chapter 3

    Not familiar with this clip’s origin but they do seem to be beyond method acting…
  10. Philippe

    Chapter 2

  11. Philippe

    Chapter 2

  12. Philippe

    Chapter 2

    Bitcoin, it’s my virtual….nevermind, that’s something else you can’t always visualize.
  13. Philippe

    Chapter 2

    Sausage is much better, and can pass for real if horse play tickles the pickle…or if the girls think they will prove it’s socks, but then their eyes go wide to have a hand full of body temp sausage.
  14. Philippe

    Chapter 2

    I think they’re already toast, but not for failing to pull off the fake relationship, but that their dislike of each other is being rapidly replaced by new perspectives and…respect; with Justin becoming protective of Tim, after coming to his defense on early occasions. So indeed fake is failing, but it’s stumbling upon the uncomfortable and awkward reality of real feelings….but without the alcohol.
  15. Philippe

    Chapter 1

    Nothing like a cheerleader and her megaphone 📣
  16. Philippe

    Prologue

    Whether trying to force two closeted friends to be out, or be it pure bullying blackmail, this is a cruel and dangerous thing to do. One can never know the emotional state or how that person will react. That pressure could be enough to push the individual to tragedy. Such private moments captured when there was an expectation of privacy is just plain rude. At best you can share it with them person to person, while letting them know they can count on you, or that they should be careful as you and/or others don’t want to see such affections…but be polite and no manipulation. The story is looking to be either disturbing or hopefully marching down a path where discovery and acceptance is an ironic side benefit of the misguided conduct of what is likely a peer. This has an intriguing mix of mystery, drama, and possible a coming out or accepting one’s self journey. I’m probably already hooked…as I now clicking Chapter 1. 😊
  17. Philippe

    Chapter 8

    The “shit” uttered by Hank, seemed to have more of a history of him and Miller than it being just a response to Jesse’s presence being known. Yup, on the surface Miller seems to be more linked to dark networks than to the official law enforcement channels. The reference to a lot of money being spent to find Jesse doesn’t look like a lawful process being anywhere near the area. I love the storyline being mysterious but now about to give us backstories of the players, which in turn gives me the impression of ratcheting up the intensity of what kind of exchange may be coming….the final paragraph tells much. The sheriff knows Hank, he doesn’t expect to pull one over on Hank, it’s going to get nasty, yet he smirks as if he will win…again? Stay turned as the backstory brings on the drama of the past with promises of an engaging future.
  18. Philippe

    Chapter 1

    This has a nice personal feel to it, though sad. This is giving us a feel of their bond sadly ripped away, yet the memories paint the depths of their bond and likewise helps us understand the depths of his wounded soul. Getting out was wise, and his new project seems sincere. Hopefully it does keep him engaged and mending while somewhat honoring the memory of his partner as he immerses himself into their shared business. I see much room for drama, healing, romance, and maybe love; now where is chapter 2? What’s the posting schedule? 😇
  19. Philippe

    Chapter 7

    Then sausage brought them together; their likeness in vegan taste was influenced by sausage.
  20. This is a wonderful story that reflects upon the growth of two teens raising their caregivers. It shows us neglect versus nurturing, but also shows the power of family, whether given or chosen. But growth is an ageless commodity with equal opportunity for all with an open heart and mind. It’s a virtual guide that could be labeled; “All You Ever Wanted to Know about Pizza Delivery,” when it’s comes special ordered with extra sausage.
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  21. Philippe

    Chapter 7

    Sausage is a necessity, like bacon, it just makes vegetables, or anything else) taste delightful.
  22. Philippe

    Chapter 6

    Then it would need new shocks too, and the two 14yo would be learning mechanics too; or at least the function of shock absorbers.
  23. Philippe

    Chapter 6

    Axl would literally give you the clothes off his…crack; just give him a pizza box.
  24. Philippe

    Chapter 6

    Oh, the meat lovers supreme!
  25. Philippe

    Chapter 6

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