Lisa

Duh, of course Ryan is in the way. lol Although I'd love to find out what Sean told his folks about West. From his mom's reaction, I'm assuming he's out at home? I wonder what he told him mom about Ryan also. Oh, I was a bit confused about the hamster part. Even if Sean didn't mention having a hamster at all, why would he be so suspicious that West knew about it. I think if someone sees an animal in a person's home, the logical thing to ask would be, "Oh, is that your..dog, cat, hamster, whatever..." So why was West so taken back that he remembered Sean telling RYAN about the hamster, but not him. It wouldn't matter who Sean told; it's just a hamster; anyone would have asked if it were his. In my opinion. So I don't know what the big deal was. West didn't have to lie and say he must have mentioned it. Anyway...on to the next chapter.

I hope they all find their way back. The forest is not a good place to be after dark. lol I'm glad Daniel is letting his guard down a little and being friendly with Sam. Although I do see his point with the booze and the drugs, he also needs to realize that he's in college now. Things are different than high school; he has to live with these guys. He doesn't want to alienate them b/c then he won't have any friends. Lecturing other kids on the evils of booze and weed is not going to win him friends. Anyway...good chapter. Hopefully they'll all find their way back soon.

I agree with Daithi; I feel sorry for David too. I know he was the world's biggest prick, but he is sorry for what he did and he did it b/c he thought Luke killed his b/f. I mean, that's no excuse of course, but wasn't he being set up by his dad? I'm trying to remember all the details... Ms. Jacobs was totally out of line. I don't care what you personally think of your student; you never are unprofessional with them. And what Drew thought was true; it doesn't seem like Ms. Jacobs would be attracted to such a fuck-up like Luke's uncle. I'm just nervous b/c I don't know when Tyler's killer is going to strike. None of them are safe. Great chapter HJ! Looking foward to the next one; maybe a little bit sooner, eh? lol

Dammit, I used up all my likes already! How can that be? It must be left over from yesterday... Anyway...I LOVE Dylan's mom! She is so cool! Dylan's lucky to have a mom who is so cool! And Cooper is acting a tad suspicious! I wonder if he is the one who wrote the note or if Meghan knows who wrote it? Great chapter Autumn! Looking forward to the next one.

Where the heck are the cops?? Didn't Edward call them like hours ago? lol I like how protective Edward is of Zune even if it's basically to ease his guilty mind. That was a horrible thing he did to Stephen but at least he recognizes what he did and he's sorry for it. Poor Zune; now he has to face those thugs on his own...... Oh, btw sacred, I had to get a new computer b/c those pictures of your three hot guys totally melted my screen! lol Zune is nice looking, but Edward and that skank Kevin, drool-worthy. lol I tried to leave a comment in the gallery section where you posted them, but I couldn't find a comment thingy to click on. Oh well. They are hottttt, hottttt, hottttt though!

This story just gets funnier and funnier. Five feet eleven of cappuccino gorgeous. Hysterical! lol And Rims! Now I get it! He owns, err, owned an auto body shop! haha Do all cops/detectives drive Crown Vics? Reminds me of that "Sleepy Little Town" song. =) So, the plot thickens. Who wants to frame Ryan? Why do they think he killed Nico? I love the new characters; they all add so much humor to the story!

This story is so funny! I can't believe I missed this chapter. "I've only jut met him. I'm not sure we're ready to get a room." That was hysterical! And of course Miki (is that his nickname?) was pretty unprofessional; all set to get a bj and TAKE A PICTURE!!!! Omg, so funny! Loved the "Sweeney Todd" reference; never saw it, but love Johnny Depp. lol Ok, on to chapter three.

Andrew, you're killing me again!!!!! I KNEW Zak wasn't ok. He has a concussion, probably a bad one at that. Dusty should have called 911 as soon as they found him, just to be on the safe side anyway. Ok, well now I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. lol

Wow, what a tearjerker of a chapter! Poor Ryo. Now he will always remember his last words with his brother as being harsh. I hope Ryo is stronger than his parents and is able to get away. Why on earth would he have to stay at the house? Why couldn't he just go over there to help with the arrangements. It's not like it's going to take a week to get everything done.

Holy shit Andrew!!!!! Next year for sure I'm voting you King of the Cliffies! Holy shit! I just noticed you posted the next chapter. Thank God otherwise I'd be on pins and needles until you did. I never put two and two together like Gene and Gentim did; did CJ and Mattie's evil uncle do something to spook Zephyr? Ok, well, on to the next chapter. Oh, p.s. - the scene where CJ confesses to Danny that he "cheated" on him and may be a daddy, just had me sobbing as usual. I always have to make sure I have my Kleenex handy when I'm reading your updates!

Whew! Gunni's first concert is over! Now he can relax. lol So glad it went well. And of course Jo's a doll, helping Gunni get ready and all. Well, Dmitri has so many surprises up his sleeve. lol Looks like Siggi's jealous. Of whom I don't know; of Gunni or of Dmitri? lol Great chapter James! Can't wait to read about Siggi's reaction to the kiss. lol

What the heck happened to Mark? He got too dehydrated after he finished off all their water? lol It's nice to see Daniel and Michael bonding. Oh, at one point you wrote: "But Mark is a nice guy. He talks too much - a bit too much but ya, he talks to me," Mark said. You mean Michael said, right? I'm looking forward to finding out what happened to Mark. lol

My heart breaks for Luka. He's so starved for attention and human connection, that he just whores himself out. It's not just money that he's looking for; he just wants men to pay attention to him. I gotta go back and reread the last two chapters to see if anything is said about his father. Soren's cousin having gender-reassignment surgery is interesting. His father doesn't seem to care. Does his dad know about Soren? And if so, does he know about Soren and Cody? I think the girls were adorable in the diner; squealing about Soren and Cody! lol That was a funny scene. Evelyn's father really is going overboard. He's blocking all the TV stations? Is he for real? What is she supposed to watch for God's sakes?! And he won't let her go over Raquel's house? Why is Evelyn not rebelling? Why is she going along with it so easily? You know, by her father acting like this and keeping her in a bubble, she will never grow up. You have to trust your kids. If you've raised them right and they know right from wrong and morals and ethics, yada, yada, yada, then you need to trust them. He needs to let his daughter spread her wings, (WINGS, people, WINGS! Get your heads outta the gutter! lol), and let her experience life. Eventually the time will come when she will snap.She's going to blow up and she's going to resent him for holding her back all this time. There's overprotective, and there's overprotective. Is that one word or two? I'm too lazy to look it up. Oh, a typo I noticed: Max's Dinner: diner has one 'n', not dinner. You eat dinner in a diner, but they are separate words. =) And when Luka was giving that old due a bj, it was written that the guy was 'trice his age'. What's trice? Is that like three times? He was three times his age? Or did you mean the guy was twice his age? Two times his age? Another terrific chapter Finn! Looking forward to more! You know, from the title of the story, I wasn't even going to check it out b/c I thought it was poetry! Glad I was wrong! lol

I agree w/Gene; what's that "brief moment of panic"? CJ didn't do anything in the past nine months, did he? I can't remember from when Danny left to when CJ came back home. I just hope there are no more bumpy patches in their future. I'll tell you: Andrew, you gotta clone Zak, well, and Danny, oh and Dusty, hell, all of 'em!!! These boys are so nice and sweet and understanding. I'm glad Tanner feels comfortable enough around Zak to confide in him. Looking foward to his side of things. Well, not the horrid parts; just the good parts; the Cody-less parts.

Comicality, you don't know how happy I was to see an update so soon! I think I did a little jig. lol But seriously, thank you so, so much for updating one of my favorite stories of yours! You made my night! =) Tristan is so cute with all his insecurities and anxiety over meeting Jesse. But who could blame him? I'd be the same exact way! Although I'm female and straight, I can totally relate to how Tristan is feeling towards Jesse. Being a groupie, lol, I can really relate to how Tristan is feeling. I can imagine what it would be like if say, I was able to hang out with one of the guys, (or all of them, I'm not picky!), of One Direction. Ok, so they're a bit young for me, but this is fantasy, after all. So I can see how Tristan would be so anxious and nervous and insecure. The really sweet thing is that Jesse, with all his online celebrity and whatnot, is just as nervous and anxious. I think they're both adorable. Also, I could totally see myself squealing in glee if I were one of Tristan's female friends. Lori and Michelle are great! He's luck to have them. I also think his mom is pretty cool. She pretty much knows what's going on, but she's not judgemental or disgusted; she's just letting Tristan tell her in his own time. And she seems like she will be fine with it. I think if she weren't, he'd know by now. Another awesome chapter Comicality! And thanks again for updating it so quickly! You're the best! =)

Heya Jon! I finished reading this awesome chapter at four a.m., but wasn't coherent enough to put together a decent review. But I did take my notes. lol When Corbin explained what a ghost hand, (never heard of it before), was to Pete, I was laughing so hard I almost fell off my chair. Wow, that 'Berto is one smart dude. I think he did hit the nail on the head with Mike. It makes perfect sense that he should be scared to death of his feelings for Corbs. After all, he's spent the last twenty years living on the 'straight and narrow', pardon the saying, and here comes Corbin who just rocks his little cadet world. Personally, I think Corbs was making too big a deal out of the 'hey' text message. I took that message to be sort of shy and timid, a little insecure maybe. And of course Cadet Mike showing up that night, dressed in his whites, kissing Corbin; that was a breakthrough also. I loved the line where the Vmee says that Corbin took his control away from him ages ago. Thereby saying that Corbin's been in control this whole time. Corbin's always been in control of the Vmee's feelings; Cadet Mike has just been trying so hard to push those feelings back for the longest time, but maybe now he doesn't want them pushed back. Maybe now he can man-up to those feelings and admit to Corbin how he really feels. Loved the, "I swear the two of you are the most jealous non-boyfriends I have ever had." That's a great line! =) I was confused a bit about 3/4 of the way down when Corbin and Pete wwere guarding the front door, before the Vmee came, Corbin told Pete he knew Amanda told Pete that Corbin liked him. But Corbin already admitted that he liked Pete in that way, to Pete's face the day they had their big blow-up. Didn't he? That's when Pete told him that he wasn't gay. And how can Pete stand there and tell Corbin he doesn't know where he stands with him? Corbin is the one who never knows where he stands with Pete! I admit, Corbin is hot and cold with his 'freeze' of the Brit, but Pete is the one who's always giving Corbs mixed signals. Even before when they were dancing; holding hands and holding the other's waist. What straight guy does this? Oh, I loved the left, left, left, right, left. Reminded me of that awesome Trace Adkins song, "Bodonkadonk" or something like that. lol Now Lee: it's probably mean of me to think this of Lee, but up to the point of penetration, I thought he was on the up-and-up with Corbin. But when Corbin had no problems sliding in there W/O LUBE MAY I ADD, I thought maybe Lee pre-lubed. lol We all thought he was a virgin with that text message from Ryan about them wanting to try anal. Maybe he had this all planned out when he saw Corbin head on up. Maybe that whole, 'can't go back to my dorm room' was a load of shit. Maybe he did this on purpose; maybe he just played Corbin to get his bid or something. I mean, let's face it, he's used Corbin in the past, who's to say he wouldn't use him again? And Corbin: OMG, even if the kid WASN'T a virgin, damn, don't you have lube????? And Lee didn't scream? Corbin went in there totally dry with not even spit????? And no stretching or preparing Lee? (this is what I've heard anyway; you've got to stretch the guy first, or at least it helps both parties if he's stretched, lol) I'm anxiously looking forward to the next chapter where hopefully Corbs and Pete will continue their talk. That is if Pete is still talking to Corbs after witnessing that kiss between Corbs and the Vmee. But then again, if he's so straight and if he's just friends with Corbs, then he has no reason to be jealous. Right? Terrific chapter Jon!

For some reason I thought Oscar went over to Olivia's for the whole weekend, Friday night until Sunday night. I thought they had all day on Saturday and Sunday to study, (revise). Anyway.....I was cracking up when Olivia showed Oscar the box of toys she and her mother bought. What a cool mom she has, huh? And it's terrific that they have that type of relationship where Olivia can feel comfortable discussing anything with her mom. But of course, highly embarrassing for Oscar! lol Olivia's parents are terrific. Her dad cooking is the best! See, these are the role models Oscar needs. His parents are NOT role models. A man can make money AND cook dinner. And do the dishes and clean, etc., etc. It isn't degrading or emasculating for a man to do "female" chores. Just like girls can mow the lawn and rake leaves and shovel snow, (like I had to do when I was young). Another terrific chapter, James!

I just can't believe I missed this chapter also! Henry is a trooper and he's allowed to bitch and complain and whine all he wants. His parents are wonderful. Oscar's parents, not at all. I know his father is a tyrant, but why? Why is he so hard on Oscar? And does he really think that whipping the poor kid until he's bleeding all over the place, will change him? Does he really think this is a good thing? That's child abuse. Did Oscar's mother know what her husband was doing to her son? And she stood for that?! Unbelievable. Oscar should look into getting emancipated. I don't know if he could, but he should give it some thought. So I have to wonder who helps Henry with all the things he can't do himself, like eating, going to the bathroom.....his mom? Poor Henry; it's gotta be extremely embarrassing to be so dependent on your family, on anyone really. I finished reading a story not long ago about two college roommates. It was move in day and the main character volunteered to help out another kid, in order to be able to bring his car to school. He found out the kid was his roommate and he was in a wheelchair. He had been in a car accident and one leg was in a cast and both arms were casted at the elbows. So he had to help his brand new roommie do EVERYTHING, lol. The poor roommate, how embarrassing, right? But finally the casts came off and they fell in love in the end, so it was all good. lol Sorry, off topic.....ok, on to chapter sixteen; almost caught up now! lol

Wow, where have I been that I missed this chapter? I started reading the last chapter and I was like, whoa! I missed something! It's good the headmistriss had the assembly regarding Henry's beating. She should, after all, she has a gay daughter. I was a bit confused by Jean's question regarding Oscar's scar. First I was like, Oscar has a scar? I didn't remember ever reading about it. I was confused b/c Jean doesn't seem the type to me that would wait fourteen chapters to ask about a scar he's obviously seen a million times. He seems pretty blunt and I would have thought he would have mentioned it the first time he was with Oscar in the bathroom. You know, like in between the grunts and the groans, he would have asked him how he got his scar, lol. Now THAT seems more like the Jean we know and love. hahah But seriously, I really would have thought he would have asked Oscar about it a long time ago. And his condition I've NEVER heard of. Is it really possible for people to be born with their heart and other organs on the opposite side? I should Google it.....lol Ok, on to chapter fifteen.

Harry's adorable. I hope Tess likes him as much as he likes her. Loved West's comment about taking lessons from Charlie; that was funny. =) Looking foward to the next chapter Kai!

I'm kinda confused as to why Caleb seems upset about Jake telling Knox what Jake has been up to. Caleb already knew he was a man-whore; he was flitting from girl to girl at that party that fateful blowjob night. lol And Jake already told Caleb about a couple of the guys, one being that guy who thought they were b/f's or something. I hope Caleb doesn't cancel on Jake about the upcoming weekend. I want to know if Caleb is going to bring it up to Jake. I still love Carson! She's always looking out for Caleb; always trying to protect him. That whole scene with Adam was a twist! I certainly didn't see the whole I give guys blowjobs and oh yeah, I'm gonna be a daddy! lol I really did think the scene was extremely well-written. It's refreshing to hear from the relative of an addict, rather than the addict. From Caleb's pov, we realize that the addict doesn't just mess with their own life; they are messing with their family's life, their friends' lives...With Adam high all the time, and away from the home, he had no clue how his folks reacted to his drugginess; how his siblings reacted. He was totally clueless. But through Caleb, we learn that his mother and father were greatly affected by their son's drug use. It was a great scene; a very emotional scene. Terrific chapter furnished! Good luck with the Reader's Choice Awards! This story definitely deserved to be nominated; it's one of the best stories on here.

Another interesting chapter Amika! =) It does seem that Daniel is better suited to be paired with Michael and Sam paired with his buddy Mark. I'm looking foward to reading about the trek. Daniel still needs to lighten up though. Having his fellow classmates snickering at him b/c he's the only one taking notes on a guided tour is not a good thing. lol

So glad you're back with EBaC Sui. =) Olympic event for texting, hmmmm, is THAT why they took out wrestling????? Although instead of wrestling, my kid could go out for Olympic texting. lol I love the way Josh kept screwing up Adrian's name. That was funny. I would be insulted too if I found out my b/f family had him checked out. But I totally get that they had to, especially after the Adrian debacle, but also b/c Koturu, (or is it Koturo? I don't remember, sorry...Kotaru maybe?), is such an important name, I'm sure background checks are done on everyone the family comes across. I'm glad Alexi was able to teach the class. It's good that he was ablel to relax enough to do this. I'm looking forward to Joshua meeting Alexi's family, and vice-versa.

Oh Andrew, I'm so glad to see Tanner again! Dylan must be thrilled! =) I can't wait to find out who is behind Tanner being there. lol I love how Ace fits in and how he's getting along so well with everyone. Especially Maxie! lol I would actually love to have a chapter on Devon and see how he's doing after Ace moved. Ohhh, I know! If Dylan and Tanner can only be friends, maybe Devon can come out and visit and they can meet. Oh but Devon lives all the way in Cali. Well hell, you can have him move in with Ace and his dad. lol Just sayin'......But seriously, it would be nice to see how he's doing.

Ryo's brother shouldn't be involving Ryo or his friends in any of his shady dealings. I hope the alarm system is a deterrent and keeps Ryo's brother's enemies out. I was actually surprised that Soubi wasn't upset with Ryo for reading his diary. Now, was Soubi writing about Rin? It wasn't Ryo, was it? I figured if it were Ryo, he would have commented on that fact that the story was about him and Soubi. Another great chapter sui!