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That whole scene with Will and Noah just made me sad. I feel bad for Will. He fell in love with Scott and didn't know how to deal with it and he just screwed up everything, especially his possible friendship with Scott and his long-time friendship with Noah. The scene where Noah and Scott are watching Zach sleep is really sweet. Noah is really lucky he found Scott. Scott is very nurturing and I think he's going to be a great second dad to Zach. I hope you have a great holiday and a wonderful New Year's Fitz! Now that the world didn't end yesterday, I'll look forward to continuing this story in 2013!

What is it with these kids living alone? Why would Timmy even think Matthew lives alone? I would assume he moved there with his family. Anyway, if Matthew takes a liking to Timmy, Kevin is going to be jealous. These last two chapters were good; I'm all caught up now. Looking forward to the next one. Wait until Kevin hears that Matthew lives right by Timmy and that he TALKED to him! lol =)

I had two great chapters to catch up with today.Thank you, I needed to read something happy. I've spent the last five days crying over what happened two towns away from me. Joshua's family is so warm and friendly. I can relate to Alexi's nervousness meeting them though; he wants to make a good impression and he wants them to like him. I look forward to Alexi and Shane meeting. =)

Omg, what happened with Gabe? Why was he in that kind of a facility? How did he die? No wonder Kyle feels so much guilt; guilt over hurting Gabe when he broke up with him right before the wedding, and guilt b/c he probably thinks he drove Gabe to his death. At least drove him to the facility he was in. Terrific chapter Sid! Like I said in a previous review: I LOVE the flashbacks. We really get a sense of what happened in the past and how that relates to the present. As always, looking forward to the next chapter.

Skylights, you updated! I had to re-read chapters nine and ten to re-familiarize myself with what happened last. Great chapter though; Max is finally growing up. I'm actually glad he was upset after he blew (blew, not blowed, lol) Chase. And what a shit Chase was; so cocky; so sure of himself. And Max had no damn willpower. Hopefully he won't let this little setback get in the way of his otherwise positive behavior and change. And he will always have Sam to help guide him when he needs it. =) Looking forward to chapter twelve.

Siggi's such a prick! lol He's going to just torture Gunni, I can tell. And Dmitri, (did I spell his name right; the 'bastard', lol), will tease I think, both Siggi and Gunni. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens at the next rehearsal. =)

Thank God that woman came in when she did! Hopefully Soubi won't have to work with Hiro again. Although if he tells Ryo what he did, I'm sure Hiro won't be working with anyone anytime soon. lol Ryo's family relations seem so strained. Maybe that's why his brother isn't nice; b/c he has to deal with his father, mother and step-mother.

Hey Kai! I love your new story! West is a cool name; this is the second story I read w/a 'West' in it. West definitely started something he might not be able to stop. It's not a nice game he's playing and for someone who doesn't want to hurt his best friend, he certainly isn't thinking twice about the fact that what he's doing can very well hurt Sean. I may have to read the second chapter from your site; I'm too impatient to wait for an update. lol Oh, and what about "Kieran"? Are you going to finish it? And "American Dreams"? (Was that the name of it; I couldn't find it on your site...)

It's great that Timmy is taking such an interest in finding this kid. I hope it's not leaving him wide open to getting hurt either. I think the culprit will strike again when he thinks that Kevin forgot about the first note. I don't know. Looking forward to more.

Oh Em, you're killing me here! =) What a cliffie! What the hell happened to Tommy and the others? I wonder if the artifacts vanished along with the people? Shit, how the heck is Sean going to find Tommy. It'll be like trying to find a needle a haystack. lol You know, I don't get Sean. Is he on crack? Or an alchy? (or is it alchie?) Seriously. What did he mean when he thought: if only he'd known what kind of consequences his actiions would have had - he could have prevented himself from taking them in the first place. Is he fucking kidding???? What the fuck did he think Tommy would do once he saw Sean and that ho John, (holyshit! Is this ho John from the office? Omg, what a tramp! He knew Sean was in a relationship; what the hell is he doing???? I thought they were best friends??? What a douchebag.), did he think Tommy was what, going to strip and join their party? What the hell was he thinking?? He told Tommy he loved him. Yeah, nice way to show someone your love. Asshole. Oh, and I'm sure Tommy going to India was a last minute thing. I doubt he was planning on reneging on his word not to go to India w/George. He must have decided to go b/c of what Sean did. The fucker. (Sean, not Tommy) Shit, you know the more I think about it, the more steamed I get. Sean AND JOHN knew damn well that Tommy lost someone three years ago.He FINALLY decided to move on and six months later THIS happens to him? Shit, he'll never trust anyone ever again. Sean is such an ass. I don't know if he can ever be redeemed, imo. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter Em!!! :)

Damnit, I used up all my likes....sorry. Amanda, that bitch!! I can't believe she's blaming Mark for being gay. Calling him abnormal and it's his fault people are giving Steve shit. Damn her! Why is she making this about her? I'm glad Steve broke up with her though; it just shows that he knows what is right and what is wrong and he will stick by his convictions even though he still loves her. He knows he can't be with anyone like that. I wonder if Mark will tell Adam what went down. Can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, you're still writing trough instead of through.

Amanda! Why would she do that? Is that why she's been acting so strange w/Steve? Because she's so against this? Or wait, maybe her feelings don't have much to do with it. Maybe she's just a gossip-monger and just wants to spread gossip. Shit, I don't know. I just get so pissed at people like Sarah. It's horrible when your own family turns against you, but to have "friends" turn against you over something that you have no control over just infuriates me. Ok, on to the next chapter! I feel like the holidays came early this year; I got to read two chapters in one day! Oh yeah, my holiday is here already. lol

Damnit, who's after sweet, funny Kevin? I can't tell you my anxiety while I was reading this chapter. It started when Nora asked Timmy where Kevin was. And then of course it grew and grew b/c I keep thinking back to the first chapter. Oh man Sovereign, you've got me on pins and needles. I think I need some Zanax or w/e you take for anxiety. lol

Spazzrat! Hysterical name! lol I feel bad for Kevin; having to live on his own. How does he pay for an apartment? Ok, on to chapter three. =) Oh, and Carrie's right; "Pay it Forward" was an excellent movie. I think Haley Joel Osment did it right after "The Sixth Sense" and before "Secondhand Lions" Not 100% sure which came first.

Damnit, I've been meaning to r&r all week! Mr. Morris is a cool teacher; I like him. I read a lot of stories about these asshole "macho" gym teachers that look the other way when kids are bullying another kid. I'm glad he's sticking up for Jacob. And kudos to Mr. Matthews; another staff member, (and the most important one in the school), for covering for J&K. I think Jacob, (and Kyle), will be surprised at how many people are actually on their side. Now as for Bill.....I also have to get drunk before I clean my house. lol Ok, j/k, this is no laughing matter. No matter how wasted Bill gets, it won't change anything. He'll just pass out, wake up with a nasty hangover and feel miserable. And it will be worse if any of the kids see him like this. He needs to try to get his shit together and face facts: he needs to think about the future, a future w/o that ass of a wife in it. Great chapter podium! Looking forward to more! =)

Em, I love your new story! I'm on pins and needles; what happened to Tommy? I'm assuming after Sean cheated on him, (the fucker), after PROMISING HE WILL NEVER LEAVE HIM....", well, technically he didn't leave him; he just cheated on him and Tommy left, but still....I'm assuming Tommy went with George to India. I'm really glad that Sean is suffering for breaking Tommy's heart. He deserves to suffer. What the hell was he thinking? I am a little confused though regarding the timeline. At the beginning of the story when Tommy walked in on Sean and that ho in bed, you said Sean wanted to desperately rush over and enfold Tommy in his arms - just like he had done countless times over the past six months they had been together. They've only been together six months, right? So when Sean was thinking back to the day Tommy was telling him about the dig in India and promising he'd never leave him, that must have been right before he cheated on Tommy. Because when Sean took off for India, only two weeks had passed since his cheating. I'm just trying to figure out why one minute he's confessing his undying love to Tommy, and the next minute he has some floozy, (ok, male floozy, but a floozy all the same), in bed with him. The timeline just didn't make sense to me. But maybe I'm just not focusing on the bigger picture; sorry bad habit of mine. In my mind everything has to be consistent. Anyway...I love the story, love the Indian hotel clerk; how did he learn to speak and understand English so well? Love the Austin Powers question, lol. Looking forward to chapter two! Oh, and don't forget about poor Davey......just sayin'.

Terrific story, but I already have anxiety b/c it seems you're setting us up to fall in love with Kevin, only to find out something horrible happened to him. I hope I'm wrong. Anxiously (lol) awaiting the next chapter!

Ah, poor Jean; everyone's cock-blocking him! lol I can't believe that he's that way in front of his foster father! And WITH his foster father! What a naughty boy! lol I'm looking forward to reading more about their camping trip. At least if Olivia has her way, Oscar's parents will be proud of him. lol

I thought for sure it would have been Amanda. I know Leslie's learned her lesson now, so I'm sure it wasn't her. Since you haven't mentioned Eric at all in the school, (although I assumed he also went there), I didn't think it would be him. I think if Eric were to out Mark, it would have been awhile ago, like when Mark ran away. Why would he all of a sudden out him just out of the blue like that? I'm sticking with Amanda. After all, it's Monday and she and Steve found out on Friday, so it gave her plenty of time over the weekend to talk about Mark to her friends. Just out of curiosity, I wonder if Sarah would react the same way if she found out about Steve? Anyway, this is an awesome story and I'm sad that I'm all caught up now! Can't wait for chapter six!

I love Leslie's parents! They were very generous in offering their house to Mark. Even with the condition of contacting his parents. Adam seems great also; very open to having Mark room with him even though they just met. I was wondering how Mark was going to get to school since Adam lives twenty minutes away from Leslie, and I'm assuming where he lives isn't in the school district. Ok, on to chapter three. Oh, if I may, I just want to point out a couple of errors, you know, in case you want to go back and fix them: you confuse was and were a lot. Here is one example: The reason I were having dinner, should be the reason I was having dinner. And you keep writing trough, I think you mean through. You did this a few times in chapters one and two and every time I said that in my head I thought I sounded like Tony Soprano. lol

I have been trying to read this since last week! I read the first chapter and just wanted to say what a terrific story this is so far! Ok, on to chapter two!

Furrioda - yeah, I got one of those. Rin is such a self-absorbed asshole. He 'owns' Shoubi???? And the sad thing is Shoubi thinks Rin owns him too.To leave him w/o a word two years ago and then suddenly show up out of the blue, expecting Shoubi to fall for him again, is really presumptuous of Rin. He's such a cocky bastard. And Shoubi is weak; he was ready to just fall for Rin's line of shit all over again. Then when Rin got bored again and took a hike Ryo would be left picking up the pieces of Shoubi's broken heart yet again. Not that I think Ryo minds, lol. But still......Rin's an ass. Shoubi is lucky he has Ryo. Many people don't have anyone who can help them pick up the pieces of their broken life. Great chapter lilansui!

Can you believe that I reached my rationed quota of likes already? It's only one in the a.m.! And Sid, you know I haven't been reading all day! lol I wonder what time the new day starts with these five rationed likes. I'll have to check on it later to see if I can 'like' the chapter. So...they finally did it! After five years! And apparently on the night before Kyle and Gabe's wedding. Woulda loved to be a fly on the wall when Kyle had to explain why he was calling off the wedding. lol Sid, I absolutely LOVE the flashbacks! It's such a great way to learn about the backstory and to find out what happened in their past. Awesome chapter Sid! Looking forward to reading more!

Eh, the chapter went up a little early, huh? lol I love the bantering back and forth between Carol and Kev. They actually get along really well b/c they both know the other is kidding. But I can see how it would drive someone crazy just listening to them all the time! =) So....Wheelchair Lady = Mrs. W. = Mr. Arrogant's mom - didn't see that one coming. Also didn't see the fact that Mr. Arrogant may be human after all. lol I actually feel really sorry for him. But not as sorry as I feel for his mom. She must be in mental anguish knowing how unhappy her son is and not being able to help him. I hope by her asking Zune to help her and befriend Edward doesn't blow up in her face. I was really surprised to find out that he paints. And that he painted a picture of Zune. And that he smiles every time he looks at it. And that he feels like he has to cover up his "humanity" and being nice b/c his father is an ass. So, maybe there's hope for him yet? Ha, I'm sure he won't even let Zune near him, never mind make friends with him. Terrific chapter sacred! Really pulled on my momma heartstrings.

Omg, I almost wrote my review for the NEXT chapter! Shit, glad I caught that in time. The fire scene was amazing! I was really at the edge of my seat! How the heck did Zune think of everything he did to save Ariel and Wheelchair Lady? I would have been panicking and probably wouldn't know what to do. He was incredible. He should really be given an award; he did save those two people! =) And wait! MR. ARROGANT SAVED ZUNE?! Say it ain't so! I was expecting Kev to be the knight in shining armor! lol And Zune sure is stingy with his kisses! lol Poor Kevin! Great job sacred! Looking forward to more!