Michael9344
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Is it okay to give constructive criticism in reviews and author forums
Michael9344 replied to Sidd's topic in The Lounge
Yeah. We all know...:-) -
Is it okay to give constructive criticism in reviews and author forums
Michael9344 replied to Sidd's topic in The Lounge
And of course, Dannsar is good at doing that. I think he's the only person that does that except Cia. -
Is it okay to give constructive criticism in reviews and author forums
Michael9344 replied to Sidd's topic in The Lounge
Okay. This is actually true. But I think the reason why most ppl don't actually give constructive criticism. I guess it has to do with the fact that most authors here are new and might not take the criticisms... Some other times I just don't feel like being the bad cop. -
He's a bad assed bad boy.
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Just wanted to mention your last two poems would make good songs:).
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I love poems. I have a particular weakness for meaningful rhymes. I really like this poem. Although it's coming from a brat.
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I write songs/lyrics. Plently. None recorded, yet. I enjoy writing and sometimes songs are just more expressive.
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I have to admit, I was on a trial and error motive. Read the first chapter and make up my mind whether to forget I read it or just close my enjoy the rest of the story. I wasn't exactly surprised, but I enjoyed reading it. Going to READ all everything now:)
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Okay. It wasn't hard to imagine you as a warsp and Stuby as a...um...teasel . Don't get mad yet, there was a complement somewhere in there:). I love the story. It kind of did something with my imagination...
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Chapter 4 - A Wolf in Grandma's Bed
Michael9344 commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 4 - A Wolf in Grandma's Bed
Goody. I wasn't expecting Wolf to be killed as he did in the real deal, but I'm pleasantly surprised. Really loved this, Wayne:) -
You are doing it again. You are updating new story with the potential of getting me totally hooked. I'm going stop there, unless I'm going to keep gushing...
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I Hate This Part by The Pussycat Dolls. Goofy Goody...
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Happy Belated Birthday, Rush Happy Belated Birthday, Rush
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Should I give up a $50,000 a year career I hate for a possibly di
Michael9344 replied to Syniq's topic in The Lounge
I think you should stick with the job that are with now for a while. The economy is bad and unstable. It's not exactly the perfect time to be considering making a change like this that would probably leave you in the open for an economical illness:-). Save more money, before you switch over, I suggest. I think you should stick with the job that are with now for a while. The economy is bad and unstable. It's not exactly the perfect time to be considering making a change like this that would probably leave you in the open for an economical illness:-). Save more money, before you switch over, I suggest. -
.G&H sure is fun!
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hmmm. That your roomate failed to guess that you're gay doesn't mean that your aunt doesn't have a gaydar.
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Games and Humor. I like to laugh. Beats the battle going on in the Soapbox. I also visit the Lounge a lot. I sometime peek in the Soapbox to see who's getting butchered:).
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I liked it. I enjoyed the story. But I have to say that I didn't have total utility. It's like driving a car that's slow but you know that it can go faster, but it won't go faster because something is missing or something. Don't misunderstand. It was a good story, but it could have been a great story:).
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Obviously, there's nothing wrong with your sex scenes. The story is making more sense. And the chapter is great. It's just that you probably somehow indicate that the last part is a memory.
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Buy My Love by Wynter Gordon
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Seeing signs come natural to me. Don't worry, I'm not going to explain that. Almost everything for is a sign. If I'm going somewhere and I hit my right foot against a stone, - good luck. If I hit my left leg - bad bad luck. I often know that it's going to rain from the clouds and sometimes when and how long its going to rain. I guess it's supersticious or something, but that's just the way I'm wired. I tend to notice the litte details...and read meaning into them..
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Like everybody else before me said, it's good. You put those emotions and thoughts on ink. But I'm more intrigued by what was left unsaid...
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Okay. I like it. I really like it. Like Nephy, I love twists and turns in a story (scratch that, good twisits and turns:)) and your story looks twisty. I enjoyed reading this chapter and would love to read more. Good work.
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I think what interested so much in this story is how fascinating Glory is. So fascinating that each and every thing about him is intriguing; including his future i have no idea where Glory and Sar are headed, but I'm sure as hell going for the ride;). Did I mention how good a story teller you are?
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Epic. Just epic. I would have loved to write a lengthy review on the story and it's last chapter, but I've got just two words; Epic and a Classic:). Great story.
