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Chapter 19 - Uncertain Steps to Misunderstandings
charlieocho commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 19 - Uncertain Steps to Misunderstandings
Well.....I have been putting this off for a while, now. I am afraid I have been "put off" by River's response (or lack off) to Silver. Like you predicted, Nephy. It appears his spine has turned to jelly. He has a lot of redeeming to do. Let's see what's next. I am not optimistic. -
Chapter 13 - Ghosts from the Past
charlieocho commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Ghosts from the Past
I told myself I would go to bed after "one more", when I started Chapter 14. Oh damn! "Onward.", an inner voice commands. -
Chapter 4 - Don't Be Scared
charlieocho commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Don't Be Scared
Well, I wanted to soak up some more of this fine creation before I added my two cents, but I can't wait any longer. When I read that others were "falling in love" with this story, I thought that was stretching things too far. HAH. The lovebug has bitten me, too. Nephy (If I may be so familiar), this is the second story of yours I have read (Dangerous Liaisons was the first--loved it) and it is in such a league of its own it is frightening. I have to pace myself and not inhale it all at once. Let's see what you have in store for us! -
What an uplifting story. Thanks.
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Very well done. Worth waiting for. Thanks.
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Good job on moving forward to sounding more "grownup". Looking forward to the rest of the story.
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At least Jules didn't walk in while they were in a liplock. Really enjoying this story.
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It was very sexy. Lots said in few words. Thanks.
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This masterpiece will take quite a while to settle in, if it ever does. I have a hard time reading stories more than once, "been there, done that", so to speak. But I will keep this one close by me, and I know there will be occasions when the time is just right, and I will come back to this.
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This chapter feels like a different story, but with references to the previous one. After the rape, this scenario is welcome. Yes, a roller-coaster ride for sure. Only one more to go (glad it is a long one--I hope).
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Truly a tour de force.
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This must be the most cataclysmic turn of events I have ever read. You pulled it off superbly. I am stunned. It feels like the sun will never shine again.
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I have to agree with Nephylim..,,this feels so comfortable and right, I want them to "live happily ever after," too. Indeed, a most awesome job.
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This chapter opens up so many other possible spin off stories. I sure am enjoyin' the ride.
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Your portrayal of their sexual encounter is perfect. It all reads so naturally and (to borrow someone else's word) fluid. Oftentimes I skip over sex scenes because they are usually so predictable and almost identical. This was anything but. Bravo.
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Ahh, back in the saddle again. What terrain will we cover today? The different scenes come across so vividly. Something is bound to go wrong.
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Can't read any more tonight...eyelids are drooping. But this story clicks so well. Plus it leaves me with a strong sense of deja vu. Can't wait to savor some more tomorrow. To say that it is entertaining doesn't do it justice. Spellbinding is closer to the truth, I think.
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This story is rolling along, gathering steam. Sure brings back memories. Looks like it's gonna be a fun ride.
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Well....certainly a gangbusters first chapter. It has an epic feel to it. You are a great storyteller and an impressive writer. I am hooked, agin(!)
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Mmmm Mmmm Good. I am sort of glad there is an intermission, so I can get some stuff done, instead of reading for hours on end.
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Oh no...only one more to go
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Damn, I've got yardwork which has to be done this afternoon, but I can't put this down. Riveting turn of events.
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First of all, thanks, this is great. I sort of stumbled on to it by accident and started reading. And yes, "what he said" too! I am relieved the "complete" status was incorrect. Back to reading.
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I just found this story today, and devoured it. A most fascinating read from a very talented author. I patiently wait for more.
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This is quite captivating. It would be great if there is more to come.
