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    Chapter 50

    charlieocho commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 50

    Where is the fire extinguisher, for cripes sake??? This is just too hot for words. Good job C-Man. Keep it coming.
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    Chapter 17

    charlieocho commented on akisar61's story chapter in Chapter 17

    Very well done! This has lots of new possibilities. Where will you take us next?
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    Chapter 1

    charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 1

    This is my first time reading a vampire story. So far they have not been attractive to me. I enjoyed some of your free verse, so I thought I would give it a go. So far, I am glad I did. It is definitely a change. I like the sexual tension.
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    Very well done. Do keep it coming!
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    Story

    charlieocho commented on Comicality's story chapter in Story

    Saw this story alluded to, today, and had to reread it. I forgot what a gem it is
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    untold

    charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in untold

    You say so much with so few words. Your strength is remarkable.
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    Chapter 28

    charlieocho commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 28

    I don't understand how this gets better with each chapter, but it does. I love the roller-coaster ride of emotions.
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    Chapter 16

    charlieocho commented on akisar61's story chapter in Chapter 16

    Uh oh! Trouble in Paradise.
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    Chapter 27

    charlieocho commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 27

    This is such a good read. The characters definitely come across very well. Hope there is lots more to this story.
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    The love scene was perfect. You captured the longing, the hesitancy and the raw desire just right.
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    Superbly written. So sad for both of them .
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    This is a good read. I feel big drama is lurking, however.
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    Great dialogue, very smooth. I like how the story is coming together .
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    Brilliant. Your writing is always worth waiting for.
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    Chapter 16

    charlieocho commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 16

    This story is very addicting. It is getting late, so I won't be able to devour it tonight. It feels quite different from your other writings, which I also enjoyed.
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    Chapter 12

    charlieocho commented on akisar61's story chapter in Chapter 12

    As they say, "Jolly good!"
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    Chapter 3

    charlieocho commented on akisar61's story chapter in Chapter 3

    She's such a sod. Nice work, akisar61, I am enjoying this tremendously. Will try not to devour it all at once.
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    Chapter 1

    charlieocho commented on akisar61's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I was hooked, also. The story is unfolding credibly and smoothly.
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    Excellent. I can't wait for the next installment. This is shaping up very well. Poor Derek. He has a lot of adjustments to make.
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    Chapter 1

    charlieocho commented on Libby Drew's story chapter in Chapter 1

    What a great story. Can't begin to express how much I enjoyed it.
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    Very powerful chapter. Great job. Where to next?
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    "....Silver. You're a legend." My whole body shivered when I read that. Powerful writing, Nephy. I am enjoying it tremendously, and trying not to devour it too fast.
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    Whoooo whoooo, Nephy. Some rollercoaster ride you have us on.
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    Sam is like a giant oak. Great writing Nephy. Fantastic story. Got me on the edge of my seat.
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    River does not deserve Silver. Pure, plain, and simple. I liked the "sometimes my training comes in handy" also!
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