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This is progressing very nicely. I don't enjoy analyzing the characters, or the story development. I read it, and I am either engaged, or not. This is capturing my interest in a big way! Sweet.
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Hmmm, fascinating. This is the third story of yours I have read--"Second Shot", "Purpose", and now "Archangel". Each one is so different from the others, yet they all play out convincingly. Very entertaining to read. Thanks QT.
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Bravo! So far, I have been content to let Bugeye's comments speak for me, also. This chapter, however, requires additional praise. Superb. Intensely entertaining. This story may not end as we would like it to, but getting there will be riveting.
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Chapter 1 is off to a good start. Definitely looking forward to the rest.
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Unbelievable! So hot. I am a loss for words, like in breathless. That has got to be some of the most erotic writing I have ever read. Superb.
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Chapter 13 - Getting Through the Day
charlieocho commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Getting Through the Day
Damn! Things were just starting to simmer nicely, and then you hit the pause button. I will definitely try the peach cake. Thanks. -
This story is very addictive. I really like how you've written Derek's thoughts. Good job!
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WOW! What a great story. Excellent writing. I have never reread anything on this site, but I will read this again. Thanks.
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Chapter 18: Whispers in the Dark
charlieocho commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 18: Whispers in the Dark
Superb, as always. "And the hits just keep on comin'" -
Reading this just takes my breath away. Too numb to review.
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OMG. From Nowhere Man to Twist and Shout. What could be next? Travis is surely playing with fire.
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Holy shit! Just when you think the story couldn't get any more intense or mesmerizing....BAM. Especially liked --"we entered a smoky motel room fit for (a) psycho." Thanks.
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This story is so fine. You are a masterful storyteller. Thanks.
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Chapter 17: Injured Diver
charlieocho commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 17: Injured Diver
Take all the time you need. This is great!...the action unfolds so smoothly. You have a refreshingly unique style of writing. I want this to go on for quite a while, instead of ending soon. -
Good job! It's getting better all the time. How will we survive the wait until the next chapter? Too cruel!
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Yes, indeed! Bring on part 2 of this tasty morsel.
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It is difficult, if not impossible, to contribute more than the review from "Westie". There is one observation I have, however. The author's use of conversation reads so smoothly and naturally, you can almost hear it. A sequel would be nice!
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This Bridgemont series is very addictive. I enjoy all the seafaring references. I can almost feel the spray on my face. You have done a great job with all the historical research., too. I am relieved to see this work is not yet complete. When I finished this chapter this afternoon, I thought "Finis", only to discover there is more to come. Thanks.
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The new chapter was worth the wait. Quite the roller coaster ride! Let's see where this goes, with all this excitement. Will the two of them ever find peace?
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Chapter 50: Epilogue
charlieocho commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 50: Epilogue
What a satisfying read. I discovered your story two days ago, and greedily inhaled the whole thing. Perhaps I should have stretched it out and savored it a little more slowly, but once I was under the spell of your storytelling, I couldn't stop, except to sleep. The interaction you maintain with your readers is fascinating. "Thank you" seems like an inadequate response, so I will just say "Farewell."
