charlieocho
-
Posts
572 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by charlieocho
-
Homecoming Part 2: Left, Right, Left
charlieocho commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Homecoming Part 2: Left, Right, Left
Fantastic! But I am emotionally drained after reading this rollercoaster ride of a chapter. Good job. (Hah! Just figured out what "wip" means.....duh.) Thank you for such an enjoyable read. -
Homecoming Part 1: That Kind of Thing
charlieocho commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Homecoming Part 1: That Kind of Thing
Oooo! Poor Pete, he seems to be so clueless. I cannot begin to imagine where this is headed. You have gotten a lot of us addicted to it! Good job. -
Superb. Almost too short, though!
-
Very impressive....how you tell so much story with relatively few words. Wow is right!
-
Yes, the dialogue is wonderful. Very smooth and believable. I am totally enjoying this story, also.
-
The Second Cut is the Deepest
charlieocho commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Second Cut is the Deepest
Glad you added another chapter. I am really enjoying this (what a long ways from "Nowhere Man") and hope you have lots more to come. Corbin's frustration level is so excruciatingly painful, barely relieved by Pete's unwitting (?) flirting with him. Dakota's presence has been a realistic addition to the equation. Onward! -
Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
charlieocho commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 No Rest for the Weary...
Too short, too short!! But oh so sweet! -
I am one of the guilty reviewless readers. Shame on me. Especially where such an opus is concerned. Such a masterpiece in so many ways. Hard to believe there are only five chapters to go. Love Bridget's character...such a monster. Thank you.
-
Chapter 2 The Act Begins...
charlieocho commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 The Act Begins...
This story is off to an intriguing start. It appears to be loaded with possible twists and turns. Highly entertaining. Please stretch it out! Looking forward to reading lots more of this. -
Epilogue – (10 Years Later)
charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Epilogue – (10 Years Later)
Yes!! -
The bitch got off too easy. Other than that....very well done, KC.
-
That's mean....KC. It will require a lot of self-control to put this out of my mind for a week. Hope you're proud of yourself! And I bet your other readers are none too pleased, either! You rascal.
-
Fast-moving, very smooth, and fun to read. Great job!
-
Liking this a lot. Just enough anxiousness without being brittle. Feels quite real.
-
Bravo! You are actually pulling this off....with great style, I might add. Looking forward to more.
-
Hmmmm. I think you are going to get yourself out of this! (But find another hiding spot, just in case).
-
Well, well, well!!! Let's see how you write yourself out of this one. You have (gleefully, it seems) stirred up quite a hornets' nest with the demise of Tanner. You know the old saying "You can run, but you can't hide."? I'd hate to have all these angry readers on my tail! (Especially Kim. You don't want to get her riled.)
-
Chapter 8 A Road Once Traveled...
charlieocho commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 8 A Road Once Traveled...
After a five month break (due to classes, work, family issues, etc.) I wondered what one of my all-time favorite writers was up to. To make a long story short, here I am, eight chapters later...where does the time go? Kim....what can I say?? You were born to write. Another fine, fine story. Bravo. (Hope there is lots more to come!) -
Great start. Where do we go from here? Please don't make us wait too long!
-
F*****g Dynamite. 'Nuff said. Hope to read more of your writing some time.
-
It's the end of the world as we know it...
charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in It's the end of the world as we know it...
Superb! I really hoped for a happy ending. And I wasn't sure it was going to happen. Can't wait for your next one. Thanks KC! -
Very well-written, KC. You describe so much with a minimum of words. It packs quite a punch.
-
Chapter 22...The Epilogue
charlieocho commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 22...The Epilogue
Kim, I know, I am repeating myself, here.....but I really think this song fits so well with your story.......Happy 2012! -
A great ending to a fine story. Thank you!
-
Chapter 14 – Give Me a Chance
charlieocho commented on EmDee's story chapter in Chapter 14 – Give Me a Chance
This chapter was nothing but plain old torture. You ought to be ashamed of yourself.
