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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    I suppose it's only fair... Jack took a deep breath and squeezed Matt’s hand tight, “I’m going to break up with my girlfriend…” Matt smiled and rolled his eyes, “okay fine, me too. I guess that’s the right thing to do after you suck a dick…” They giggled.
  2. drsawzall

    Prologue

    I shudder to think what would be called the great white whale
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 28, 29

    I think Stoker just has to want/need the Aggregate of Matter for the orb to appear, and if they are both pushed, he will... He looked up at the woman standing at the foot of the bed, ethereal, unreal, like a ghost. She stood like she had in the trial for the Aggregate of Matter, balancing the small orb of light on the palm of her hand as she extended it to him. “Go away,” Stoker snarled, tightening his arms around Wojceich as he glared. “I dun want nutin’ t’do withs you.” The figure remained, standing with the offer. “Ain’t you lot dun enough?” Stoker stared her down. “Look at ‘im, what are y’gonna do about ‘im? Y’ did this, y’an’ yer stupid magic, I ain’t takin’ it, y’hear me, get lost!” It shimmered and vanished, as in a far mirror a young boy fiddled a silent tune, smiling wolfishly as he watched. Who is the young fiddler boy? Dottie needs to fall prey to one of the Marine robots or stalkers...
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    Prologue

    And to be honest, there's so much more to look at, touch, fondle, hold....
  5. There just sooo many ways this could go sideways, and like a slow motion car crash, I'm along for the ride...
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    Prologue

    I'm not sure I could have kept my foot on the brake,,,yowzer....oh and someone should tell Leon Allendes to take the cat off his head...
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    Chapter Ten

    Why does the movie Speed come to mind???
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 19

    It will be interesting to see how Killian gets out of this predicament; however, I want to know more about Finn and Marco...
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    Chapter 4

    If I fell for Hugo, I can't wait to meet Will....
  10. I'm wondering if there is to be a battle after all that just went on...I do wonder why Renalto simply doesn't end the vampire lord?
  11. Why am I not surprised?? I forget, how old is Rory and do his parents still have a responsibility to him? Loved the following and the usage... It was Matthew’s turn to grin. “That you weren’t telling porkies!”
  12. Things that make you go hummm.... “Psychological evaluations and money, sure.” Quen grunted. “I’d have the time and nerves, but definitely not the money. Especially since I…” He trailed off, chewing on his words, and finally pointed down. “So you want to have the surgery after all?” He half nodded, half shrugged. “I don’t want to spend the next thirty years as miserable as the last ones. I have to start somewhere to come to terms with myself. But I don’t have money for anything.” He still didn’t want to look at me, and by now his posture was tense.
  13. drsawzall

    Brave Enough

    Like others, I read this a while ago, and it still hasn't lost its punch.
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Loving this, but you left your readers with a major case of chapter interruptus....
  15. If I had to guess, I would have to say Danny's parents... “Oh, yes. That must have been my saving grace,” Danny said, grinning. “So, who told your parents about the guardian thing?” “Guess,” Vince said with a grin of his own.
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    Chapter Ten

    There will be a roadblock up ahead, left too many clues behind...
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    Chapter Nine

    And their woodland adventure is beginning, surprised there wasn't a helicopter up there with thermal imaging...but where is the fun in that... I had a friend who had plenty of cigarettes but no matches or a lighter at a party in the woods. He stripped the covering off one of those twist ties used to keep plastic bread bags closed. Had the wire touch both ends of a small battery and shortly had his cigarette lit...
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    Chapter 4

    Just a random thought, could Grant possibly walk the other side of the street?
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    Is Declan thinking a BJ is a BJ regardless of who is nibbling his nobbin???
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 14

    Ohh...the temps are rising ever so....and just who is our French man of mystery...Gordon certainly has the measure of him...
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    This chapter was a joy to read from beginning to end!@!
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    Jimmy's got some serious stones, walking up to Hugo like that...god bless 'em!!!
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 11

    Discretion is the better part of valor; the boys need to enforce a no-contact order while in the office!
  24. Well...with the killing of innocents, they've signed their own death warrants...truly despicable!
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