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Chapter 44: Capture the Flag
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 44: Capture the Flag
I enjoyed this chapter as well, my only concern is that Shawn may be becoming a bit too obvious... -
Done!!! Need to review, check for errors...ha...ha, mispellings..ha...ha and all sorts of fox paws...it was minus 1 this morning and the day did not get much better...great day to stasy inside!!
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Thanks for this and growing my reading list!!!!
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The sleeper who was awakened
drsawzall commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in The sleeper who was awakened
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Ok...so I don't have to fly out first class...business will do!!
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Frosted Hearts: The Overlook
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Overlook
So...with all the mentions of mines and cave-ins, are we to suspect...some foolishness??? -
Translated as buffalo chicken wings???
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A great start and I can see all sorts of possible uses for...
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I get ther feeling there's more to come regarding what happened to Cain.... Then there's this... "Can it be," Marc began slowly and softly after a pause, "that you are trying to symbolically wash all the dirt off yourself?"
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Chapter 43: The Breaking of the Fellowship?
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 43: The Breaking of the Fellowship?
The following has me pondering as to the true gist of the Professor's comment; much was inferred...it would seem that more than one person/professors/AI and gAI are more in the dark than they realize...how much of the 'history' the professor shared is/was actually true??? He looked at me like I'd just told him I was from another universe. "Look, I'm just faculty here, doing my best to educate young minds so the military can take them and destroy them in— never mind, it doesn't matter. But I care about you guys. If you won't tell me, you should talk with someone. At least walk for a little bit before coming back for Science. Go outside, get out of this auditorium." -
I could go with that as long as it was somewhere else...far...far...away!!!
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Pick one...any one...but please pick Watchers...I'm an old man....
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Does this mean we will get book 3 of your last offering...soon...?
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Jack... without a doubt...
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Just bought it on Amazon for my Kindle and there was no charge...bonus!!!
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And still not a clue as to where the Nimrud Panther may be, I have to wonder if it will turn up as a result of Tom's handyman skills...
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That we all learn the lessons offered....
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Chapter 17: Devil and the Deep Blue Sea
drsawzall commented on Jason D. Karl's story chapter in Chapter 17: Devil and the Deep Blue Sea
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Come on y'all...rasise your hands ifin you've been there!!!! As to Noah...meh.... Jonah’s heartbeat chose violence. His hand, traitorously sensible, stayed. Warm palm, anchor thumb. He didn’t look at Christian. He didn’t breathe too loudly. He concentrated on not exploding into grateful confetti.
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Pounding away, a slave to my keyboard, can't break away even with the excuse of the need to go shopping for prezzies...danmit Amazon... So I'll just file away the calluses on my fingertips and soldier on...
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Did you mean XXX-Specials???
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I'm aiming for the rough draft by tomorrow, review and edit by Wednesday!!
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Frosted Hearts: The Couch
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Couch
I've always lived by the golden rule of Mondays, that is to say...Don't let Monday ruin your Sunday.... -
Oh, girls, Sarah and Clair...what have you gone and done??? I am still not a fan of Anduin, regardless of his background... Cain, lying on the broken glass table top, does he have serious cuts on his back as well? Just how far did they go in emasculating him, superficially or with serious damage? What was Flavius doing/not doing??? I suspect official charges will be filed, making it difficult to brush under the rug...
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Frosted Hearts: The Couch
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Couch
In a way, I think Five and Bethany have crossed a line, no matter how well-intentioned they are...it's a bit duplicious and disingenuous... Then...huh????? “You definitely have my undivided attention right now,” Five replied as he looked at Five’s bulge. “I need to check the weather forecast, but I think we could either go skiing or snow machining tomorrow and not run into any weather,” Percy said absently as he pressed his forehead to Five’s as he continued to stimulate the boy. “Here, I’m quite comfortable here,” Five said breathlessly as his hands slipped under Trevor’s shirt.
