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  1. What we have here is a cliffie that could have been spotted several chapters previous...oh...wait a moment....
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    Chapter 2

    Intriguing to say the least, things are starting to take shape and become more curiouser...
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    Chapter 2

    Can't disagree with the comments above, with the plan to rest a couple of days, and as we know from the story description, there will be a search for a missing girl. Will all of this happen before the weather turns??
  4. Can you roast a tofu lamb>???? Thanks for this...now I shouldn't read your stories while eating supper, there's rice on my keyboard...
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    Drinks

    Continued use of Kilroy's phone is worrisome. Cell phones are tracked not only for usage, but also for your location throughout the day/night for marketing purposes. Even so, an in-person meeting scheduled over the phone is problematic as well. The meeting between Kilroy and Hansen proves to be another long night with happy endings for both. I am curious as to the cause of Kilroy's brother as well, and very interesting to learn a bit more about his family!
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    Chapter 9

    At least Renn has been possibly identified as a rat, and hopefully others will figure it out as well...it is a shame Krahh can't carry a message....
  7. A nice appetizer before lunch....
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    Chapter 1

    Well...that splains a lot!!!
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    Chapter Forty

    Methinks Scarlet the Terminally the Bald is getting nervous, now that the bond is set and I agree with the following... Ash yawned. “Or—and hear me out—we go to them first. Combined army’s doing well, right? Why wait for them to get their shit together and start the ritual? Why not hit Helmsfirth before they’re ready?”
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    Chapter 5

    Simply brilliant synopsys @Summerabbacat Given Adam’s lukewarm response to Steve buying this house, perhaps he had better Shop Around otherwise he may face many a Lonely Night. He well may have to Do That To Me One More Time to ensure Love Will Keep Us Together for Adam and himself. Then there's a ghost to boot!!! Asher's got some big testimonials.... Killian needs to have a convo with Judy ASAP!!!
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    Chapter 11

    Sometimes I think Nick is clueless...lost in his hormones....now if Noah could only catch whatever the starting QB has...Loved the following... Emery smirked. “I swear, if I read one more line like ‘he kissed me like he was swallowing my sadness,’ I’m going to set this book on fire.” “That’s a crime against the library, and you’d be hunted.” “I’d go down in flames with purpose.” I was hoping we'd see more of Jonah... What could possibly go wrong at Thanksgiving, hopefully, it's all good, bringing the boys closer....
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    Chapter 1

    This is an auspicious starting background...
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    Prologue

    A great beginning, I'm captivated!!! Or was that caught by the press gang...Impressed!!!
  14. Looks like there will be some talking between Gavin and Jason, how much remains to be seen... Curious about Matthew and Rory and if there is anything there, and how strong is Matthew's relationship with Irma....
  15. hummm Time to understand political tensions... "Any idea what they want all those weapons for?" "Who knows, they keep saying 'training' and 'to keep the United Earth Military strong' and blah blah blah." "And who believes that?" None responded. All burst out laughing. Then, they all froze for a moment, then a moment later they resumed their conversation with one saying, "The United Earth Military must stay strong for our safety," and the others nodded.
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    Tender and Sweet

    The more we see Frank, the more I think he's a man-child, with little control over his feelings... Sawyer is taking his crush slow with Dante. I liked the visit to the horse barn... Matthew...What does Mistress Alice see in him other than acquiring a farm to bring back to profitability?? He is doing a poor job of hiding where his sexual interests lie...
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    Chapter 55

    Hopefully, those with ruffled feathers come to see the light!!
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    Chapter 25

    Oh...to be young again....
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    Chapter 12

    A lovely chapter and what of the secrets of River Haven???
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    Chapter 15 S3

    Clint needs a boyfriend his own age ASAP!! The dinner, the game, and the dinner after all sound wonderful...and bad for my diet....
  21. Thank you for sharing this with us!!!
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    Prologue

    There's power in reflection my friend!!!
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    Loneliness

    I found this to be very powerful!
  24. Oh...My!!! Alarik leaned forward, pleasantly surprised. He cautiously touched Wolf’s warm forehead and caressed his blond hair in the way one would pet a cat. They remained silent, minutes passed by quietly. Suddenly, Wolf sat up. ‘We don’t always have to pass on everything,’ he said with a sly smile. ‘I agree,’ Alarik said.
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    Chapter 1

    Simply too funny, well done and very enjoyable!!
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