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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 41

    I thought their sojourn in San Fran was all expenses paid... They paid their bill—a quick transaction that left them exchanging polite smiles with the receptionist. Then there is the cursed brandy. Do I sense trouble ahead?
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    I'm sorry...Marvin just doesn't do it for me...so much baggage....
  3. Uh....so aren't a whole hellva humans...he fits right in... In all seriousness, though, Sakis is not a bad guy. He's just perpetually horny, and bad at being a human.
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    That he was, just don't mess with his porch glider!!
  5. drsawzall

    Chapter 14

    Or does Jake have what the key unlocks?
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 14

  7. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Thanks for your thoughts, they are deeply appreciated!!
  8. These deep dives seem like the energizer bunny, they just keep going, and going...with some fantastic stories!!
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 14

    You mean...from this to this? mm
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 14

    Let us not forget the ubiquitous speedos either...I was gonna post but got...distracted...yea...distracted...
  11. Or a golden shower.... Dylan...it looks like the door to his closet is difficult to open, as he simmers like a pressure cooker...
  12. What will this all lead to???
  13. Oh my.... The guy opened his mouth and asked: "Hey, uh, this is gonna sound weird. But, do – did – you have a great uncle who just died?"
  14. Ok yall...raise your hands ifin you've been there... “Believe it or not, I’m becoming quite fond of him. Also,” Logan paused thoughtfully, “that kid is one hell of a cocksucker.” Poor Loop...wonder what triggered him??
  15. This time, hopefully no more run-ins with the Jr Assholes....
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 14

    Killian needs to better understand how to use and work with his ability... Good on Chris...complete honesty is not only necessary, but needed!! Who was the mysterious tenant that vacated the apartment below Paul's? Could he be a red herring of ill intentions?
  17. Another fantastic chapter, I had to look up Carl Giles and Vera, and was stunned with what I found, again my thanks for opening my eyes, his work, while different, reminded me of Walt Kelley's Pogo... Carl Giles: Britain’s Greatest social cartoonist
  18. The sooner Mason reconciles himself to the world around him, the better off he will be!
  19. An interesting peek into a painful background. I would try to rehome the books!!
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    A great story for the season!!
  21. Some foreshadowing and an imp who just can't behave...
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 20

    A reading lesson for Joel... Invictus By William Ernest Henley Out of the night that covers me, Black as the pit from pole to pole, I thank whatever gods may be For my unconquerable soul. In the fell clutch of circumstance I have not winced nor cried aloud. Under the bludgeonings of chance My head is bloody, but unbowed. Beyond this place of wrath and tears Looms but the Horror of the shade, And yet the menace of the years Finds and shall find me unafraid. It matters not how strait the gate, How charged with punishments the scroll, I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul.
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 38

    I thought this chapter was forced....and it did not work for me...
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Thank you ever so much for your wonderful comment. It is greatly appreciated!!!
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