DeroiBlandDavis

I have my ups and downs with this story. I REALLY love the premise of it and I get that its an AU genre; there are things that in this particular story that would still align with RL. Over all I really enjoyed this chapter! My favorite so far, even though there was a bumb for me during the middle and the whole set up for the love making 'scene'. But i wonder how long this story will be? will this be a multipart story or just one super long one? anywhoo keep up the good work, R

Anyone ELSE you could have used other than Cooper? I find that man repugnant. Don Lemon; ANYONE else would have imo...

Beyond the fact that I love historical based stories, this is honestly good! I love the perspective and easy flow of the narrative. I am not sure how many chapters you plan to have but I could see this story ending on a somewhat happy/content note! At least for me it will, lol.

YAY! I waited for what seemed like years to have an ending to this story... and it had a bit of an unforeseen twist, but I really enjoyed it! Wish it could continue on, but I shall be happy with what i was given! Great work!

YAY!!! This has been a long time coming and Im glad im the first post! I cant wait for more!

OMG YES!!! I NEEDED THAT AFTER MY DAY!!! THIS MAKES EVERYTHING BETTER!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOU HARD WORK!!!

This was a really good story but is it bad that I am still holding hope for Jonah and Ren?

I would like to go on the record of saying that... I would like to hump your leg in appreciation for this story! that is all...

Lovely ending! I loved the whole thing actually... I cannot wait for a new story to pop from that brain of yours!

This was a wonderful read! I enjoyed every bit of it!

MORE!! I sound so demanding This was a really good chapter. I enjoyed it, but as any good author, you always leave your reader wanting MORE! Things are picking up speed, thank god, It has been slow in the begining... now it seems some action and some 'actions' will be played out Raven

I really like this... Totally unexpected plot change and I like it!

This started off really good and then ended a little on the weak side. Just rushed thats all. Still gets my vote though

Wonderful! Nuff said!

Wow... You have a new fan... And damn you for leaving it like that... this is the type of story I could just sit with a bag of chips and a cold drink and read until I finish or pass out. either or is fine, lol