I think you've done alright. Remember the rules are fluid meant to offer guidance not hard and fast strictures. I would happily hang a print of this one my wall.
What can I say that hasn't already been said. Excellent chapter. Chipper is giving CJ strong competition as you develop him further. His connection with the Abramonovs and Ethan, Bryce and Zion in the friends and family section are hints of future developements.
As I was reading I had thoughts of @Parker Owens and his renowned maths poetry. Reading your end note explained why. Forgive me but it all drove me batty.
Actually, I can easily imagine this as a short graphic novella.
Hopefully when this arrest becomes public others will come forward. Keep in mind the timing and Harvey Weinstein. I wouldn't expect the same notoriety but there will be ramifications for a number people. I also think Adam the type of guy to throw his support behind one of his Team. We're not done with Nalbo.