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I write song lyrics mostly, but I've dabbled a little bit on the piano too. If I ever get around to recording I'll definitely put something up here.
Another great chapter, but now I have to wait for a new one! So worth it though. I was surprise by the closing the defense made. It was crazy obviously, but more reasoned then I was expecting from the questions that had been brought up during the rest of the trial.
The trial reads really well, and I think the way it's written is very captivating. I didn't think I'd be able to follow the court case so easily, and the end of the chapter made me desperate to read the next one
Ah, I really like this: Dan's deference still amazed Martin. It was like a switch, turning him from angry advocated to ass kissing sycophant. I just love the way it's phrased, and it gave me a really clear view of Dan as a person.
Great start It seems like tensions are awfully high and I'm in for reading lots of court room drama. This opening totally makes me want to read a story about opposing counsel who fall for each other. hehe could I somehow convince you to write something like that?
It's like you read my mind, I was just thinking about this last night Soo...
because I just saw it, Thor: "This mortal form grows weak! I require sustenance!"
from Good Will Hunting: "Maybe we could go out for coffee sometime?" "Great, or maybe we could go somewhere and just eat a bunch of caramels."
Oceans 11: "You suicidal?" "Only in the morning."
hehe and: "Does he make you laugh?" "He doesn't make me cry."
and I like basically any quotes from Meet Joe Black
Hm, you bring up some decent points. I guess I'd have to say that Lucca's father is busy and he's already scolding Lucca about calling Matt and coming home late so that seemed like enough? About the phone call- I guess maybe I should change the time closer to ten, but Lucca and Matt are neighbors and they grew up together so they call all hours. I might just be biased because that's how my house is. Glad you're liking the story.
Thanks for reading What will happen to Sam when Lucca finds out about Matt...hmm... good question lol. I'm sure it will be fun when all the characters feelings are more clear. Ah- and about Jeremy meeting Sam, they're cousins so they've already met. Glad you like the story! I'm aiming to update again mid next week.
Haha, maybe just a little evil? While things are getting harder/ more complicated for Lucca in some ways I also think they're getting better. He's finally dealing with things he had been putting off. He'll just have to go through a few more things before it's over with.
This post made me laugh- that's not what I was expecting from 'hope.' But still, those ketchup packets look neat. I haven't seen any of them around in real life yet.
At first all he could do was stare blankly back at her, then he turned looking into the shop. ‘What did she just say? She didn’t… no, she couldn’t possibly…’
Because if Addie had known he was gay, why hadn’t she ever brought it up? Maybe during one of the conversations they had growing up talking about who they liked, where Lucca was forced to stumble over answering before awkwardly changing the subject. She might have thought to mention it during a late night study session, or one of their
Now is the only time there is. It's nice to plan for the future but what if you get stuck in this job? If you can do something you like better now then I say go for it.
I'd say the first probably fits me better. Although, I always find male relationships more satisfying. Even though I'm attracted to both sexes I don't feel like I'm missing anything necessarily when I'm with either gender.
Hey Normally I don't have such a tough time getting everything done, but lately there has been a lot of things going on. Does anyone have some time management tips? I feel like I'm always rushing to get things done last minute and I hate it.