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    Turnaround

    This chapter was so powerfully written I immediately re-read it. Beautiful.
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    Beached

    This has been such a great story so far. This last chapter has been so hard to read. I have this overwhelming sense of dread that Andy is doomed. Well, there's many more chapters to go so perhaps I am wrong, I hope so.
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    Chapter 22

    I've loved the story so far but this latest development of antisemitism I don't care for. I wonder if there were some other way to advance the storyline.
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    Just his luck

    Interesting story. So far I'm not sure what alternate universe it is set in. Needs a lot of editing.
  5. My favorites so far: 1. The Secret Life of Billy Chase 2. New Kid in School 3. A Class by Himself I haven't read the sci-fi and vampire stories.Yet.
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    Chapter 19

    I love this story. I have high hopes for Chris. He WILL redeem himself, I know it.
  7. Somehow I stumbled onto this website a few weeks ago and I am soooooo glad I did! First I read The Ordinary Us. I liked it so much I immediately started The Long Way, which I liked even better. Then I found it's sequel, In the Fishbowl, which was even better. The characters Travis and Dennis are so nuanced I fell in love with both of them. I just finished the partially completed With Trust. I can't wait to see how it unfolds! These stories are better written than most "professionally published" novels out there. Dom is so talented as a storyteller, I hope to see much more from him in the future.
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