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Good chapter. I think it hit all the right notes.
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Big chapter with so much happening. Ally, of course, is too emotional to really be able to engage with Jackson. Jackson rightly doesn't know how to deal with her emotions, and not chasing her down is a good thing. As unfair as Ally's misunderstanding of Jackson's feelings is, it is extremely difficult to get people to see otherwise once they have made a decision about someone's sexuality and their intentions and behaviors. It really sucks for Jackson to have overall been behaving well and being a good guy and there for his friends and yet rewarded with more problems. Looking forward to the next one, but having an inkling of worry about Jackson's own Mom.
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Great chapter!
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Great chapter! I really enjoyed the realism of it.
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It's just tough when things happen to your partner and there isn't really anything you can do but 'be there'. But what does that entail?
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Thanks A.C.!
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Patience is not known to be one of my virtues, alas, but I am doing okay. Thanks for reading.
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It's the anxiety that gets to me too. Thanks for reading Lit!
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When the hours draw long And the calls begin to come in When the changes start to come fast And are too much to bear How can I be with you? How can I hold you up? I want to comfort your weary soul Provide aid, release and distraction But I don’t know how to get inside your head To read your needs before you even know they are there I may be your lover, faithful and true But there is no star-crossed magic in my talents
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Great way to end their story! Yay!
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Mine! Part Two Chapter Thirty-two
Lux Apollo commented on Cia's story chapter in Mine! Part Two Chapter Thirty-two
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Very clever flow.
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Yay! Some good, if brief, movement forward.
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This was definitely a lot of yikes.
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Trickster-riddly feel. Nice.
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Some tough issues in this chapter. Glad Louis had his memories of his grandmother to help him sort through the aftermath, even more than Rena.
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(Well done...)
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Well done. Definitely feel a small ache of the suspension-tension while reading.
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Sweet chapter.
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Love it! Wow!
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The Cowardly Lion Part 2
Lux Apollo commented on Drew Espinosa's story chapter in The Cowardly Lion Part 2
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