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  1. Al Norris

    Chapter 3

    Al Norris commented on Connectwriter's story chapter in Chapter 3

    It looks like Lukas has struck pay-dirt, so to speak! Now let's hope that Severin Wagner is still alive and well.
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    Chapter 14

    Al Norris commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 14

    Happy and sad, all at the same time. High School romances are seldom smooth sailing.
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    Chapter 9

    Al Norris commented on Xfighter1984's story chapter in Chapter 9

    I'm a bit late to the party, but what the heck! Jin is acting more as if he is a True Mate to Levi. Sune is also acting as if drawn to Levi but not so much as a Mate.
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    Would that be a meme or a trope? 🤣
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    @Summerabbacat, message sent.
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    Take Me Chapter 2

    Al Norris commented on quokka's story chapter in Take Me Chapter 2

    Late to the party! But now the comments under the first chapter make more sense! LOL!!!
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    sigh... Abortion is not a Constitutional right. SCOTUS got this one correct when they overturned Roe v Wade. The Court in Dobbs v Jackson said it is up to the 50 individual States to decide how they want to handle the matter. The decision does not ban abortion as the Far Left wants people to think. I know that politics should not be discussed, here. You brought it up and I merely provided the correct legal interpretation. 'Nuff Said.
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    Chapter 25 - Adam

    Al Norris commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 25 - Adam

    I can get behind Rock & Roll. Country & Western. New Wave. Even Classical! Can we not just bury disco and leave it alone???
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    Chapter Thirteen

    Al Norris commented on Avogadro1001's story chapter in Chapter Thirteen

    Confused about Jake? Yeah, I can see that. About Liam? The only confusion there is which person will Dylan see next? Dr. Jykel or Mr. Hyde? Emma may still love her son. But she has to understand with all he did to Dylan, there can be no forgiveness. Liam turned on his best friend for fame, prestige, recognition, women, and power. Liam did this for 3 years. Now he turns on a dime and wants to make lovey-dovey? What happens to Liam when he turns on his dime and again wants those things? Sorry. In my worldview, any trust that may have one time been there has been shattered beyond any reparations.
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    More like Colonel Klink... Utterly Clueless!
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    Chapter 13

    Al Norris commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 13

    Thanks, @Mark Ponyboy Peters. I didn't want to get more explicit (for those who haven't read more) than I had to.
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    Chapter Twelve

    Al Norris commented on Avogadro1001's story chapter in Chapter Twelve

    It has been so long that I had to reread everything in order not to be in the confusion this chapter left me in. I'm hoping we don't have to wait so long for the next chapter! Anyway... Not as dangerous as Shanice appears to be! I wonder if she would talk with Jessica, about Dylan's family matters... That would be interesting, at least. Yes, I'm speculating that Dylan should jump into that pond with both feet. Of course, that's assuming that Dylan wants a relationship with Jake, more than a fake relationship with Liam.
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    So, I'm still holding on to my theory that Jill was prostituted out.
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    Chapter 13

    Al Norris commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 13

    Hmm... The long-awaited part 2?
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    From the way Jill's deposition went (Jenny asked a lot of questions. She wouldn't find out until later; she didn't ask all the right ones), there is much more that Jill didn't say. Hmm... Greg has taken the retaining package and broke up with Brendan. I knew he was a throwaway character! Still, it is hard on Brendan. At least we will get to have another chapter... On Monday??? Can we wait that long?
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    In a story I wrote here, he is Peter's Uncle. I'm working on the second book. I believe it was chapter 4 that Uncle George gave the bees and the bees talk to two of my characters.
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    Chapter 13

    Al Norris commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 13

    Two Weeks! That's almost an eternity at that age. At their stage of love? It is an eternity. So much more for Ben and Samantha. I bet that if Sam can't go home to see Ben, he will go north to see her!
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    Chapter 2

    Al Norris commented on Connectwriter's story chapter in Chapter 2

    @CincyKris, no. Hans did not: 😢
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    Chapter 2

    Al Norris commented on Connectwriter's story chapter in Chapter 2

    A gut-wrenching tale. Two boys, embracing and one wanting to kiss the other good-bye, in public, no less... Something that was never done. Especially in that dark time. It could have led to the immediate death of both. Now, it is understood how Hans could accept Lukas and even be proud of his declaration to the family.
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    Chapter 22

    Al Norris commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Chapter 22

    I had been awake for 19 hours and the notice came in that this last chapter had been dropped. I debated whether or not to read it and then head to bed or sleep first and read it with a fresh mind and perspective. I'm glad I waited. This had to be a very hard story to write. Just knowing some of your past (from reading your prior stories), allowed me to appreciate what this story may have meant for you. After reading Chapter 21, there was no real clue how this would end up. Am I thrilled that Andy and Matt got together to find happiness? I am. Had the other ending happened, I would have been just as happy. Well, as long as Matt found what he was looking for. Thank you, Tim, for sharing your talented writing with us.
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    From some of the previous comments by @Lee Wilson, I've had the impression that Greg is just a temp character. So whatever happens is likely to be incidental to the story.
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    Hmm... Let me call Uncle George. Should I tell him to bring his brown paper bag of goodies?
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    Things Move Fast

    Al Norris commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Things Move Fast

    And it was all said before I got here. Hmm... Now where did I put my set of stocks and my thumbscrews?
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    Like several of the other commenters, I suspect sexual abuse. I would even go as far as Jill being prostituted. Because of the severity of Steve's stuttering, I also suspect sexual abuse... At a very young age. Quite common with male abuse victims. Regardless, I happen to know of some very "nice" interrogation techniques. Compliments of the USMC E&E school, circa 1968.
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    I started reading Chapter 1 about 5 times and kept getting interrupted. Now I've read it, finally, and moved up to this chapter. Ya hooked me!
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