Al Norris
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There were so many snarky comments in this chapter. Sure you don't have another one, somewhere in the lineup? Hmm?
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There is always a cost.
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I understand they have to be somewhat circumspect with Cruella... However, I'm still with Devin. A couple or three gansta wannabees vs. 4 Shapeshifters? Pardon, pas de concourse. Next chapter we see how it's done!
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That and he just might pick up some intel on who Jessica's family is and where they sit on the tree.
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Oh, this was so delicious! Sooo many good lines in this chapter!
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I can see, were the guys 15 or even 16, being away from their boy or girlfriends, that they would hop on just about anything available. But this is their senior year. 17 going on 18... Jonathon has a lot of balls! Of course, he may not know that Guy and Tim are true mates. So that much is forgiven. Let's see what happens next before I decide to see how sharp my K-Bar is!
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Just a nice easy chapter. We need these once in a while. I liked the bantering between Adam, Kai, and Ian.
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That was the happiest moment in this story. Liam has been hoisted by his own petard!
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Not quite what I envisioned. Altogether sweet, nonetheless! I wonder what Jessica will do now?
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Pool Party and A Bit of Trouble
Al Norris commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Pool Party and A Bit of Trouble
While I don't totally detest CPS, it is without a doubt that most, if not all, jurisdictions have a specific mandate not to tolerate worker/client interactions outside of official meetings. Exactly. Language or actions.- 49 comments
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@Xfighter1984, your story keeps getting better and better. So, Levi has collected water, fire, and earth. He still needs light, air, and (shudder) dark. I can see that Levi is taking Sage with him to retrieve light. I suspect that it will be Zephyr who helps Levi collect air. I don't see how Levi can turn Urien to his side to collect Dark.
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As @Flip-Flop has said, engaging your readers is the best way to get others to read your story(ies?). I know that when I placed my first story on GA, I tried to respond as much as I could. It not only helped me to learn about my readers, but it also helped with how others viewed my story. I became a member of GA back in 2011, I think. But I never bothered to respond to the authors until fairly recently. I'm generally a social zombie!... It comes from being in the closet all my life! Don't be me!!!
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Pool Party and A Bit of Trouble
Al Norris commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Pool Party and A Bit of Trouble
Skylar should never have asked Brendan out. Not even for coffee. Not until he has gotten this particular case transferred to another case worker. Let's hope that nothing happens to Skylar. Losing his job would be the least of things to happen to him. I suspect that Steve is going to hear a bunch of homophobic slurs, possibly even outright accusations, from Lanny at school. No telling what Mommy Dearest will have told Lanny.- 49 comments
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I don't think that is correct. Different foster humans, I suspect.
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From the dramatic shift in Jin, I suspect that Levi has found the Shield of Fire...
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Oh Lordy! You just had to remind me, didn't you!!! 🤬
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I can hardly wait to read your further comments, my friend!
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Bastion and Sage destroyed the runes, I hope...
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Such a redemption almost always costs your life. Such are the ancient themes.
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Go back and reread those first couple of paragraphs of Chapter 1.
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Makes me wonder if the King's and Queen's weapons were forged by Mordred. The weapon used by Gillian was Mordred's. Morgana inherited Mordred's weapon and gave it to Gillian. Since all were forged at the same time and enchanted by Mordred, it stands to reason they would react if used against each other.
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LOL! Doesn't have to be. We are all controlled(?) by sexual scents.
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The play is set. All that remains is to place the players upon the stage.
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Pheromones, hmm? 🤮🤢🤮🤢
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Dylan, you stupid SOB! You go over there and you will be raped... Oh, wait! You can't rape the willing!!! Like it or not, Dylan still has feels! I think I'm gonna puke.
