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  1. Al Norris

    Chapter 11

    I finally remembered, Justin. Yes, this rewrite is much better than the original. The story flows much smoother than it did.
  2. Al Norris

    Chapter 8

    This was a great chapter, Justin. I like the way Greg handled the courtroom scene. Better yet, the way the Banks were handled. Shear joy!
  3. Al Norris

    Chapter 7

    I'm not at all sure what I would do in Greg's circumstances. It's a tough decision any way you look at it.
  4. Al Norris

    Chapter 6

    Hmm, why does this story seem familiar? At least bits and pieces of it are. Wish I could remember when and where I read a similar story. At any rate, I like what you have here, Justin.
  5. Al Norris

    Chapter 4

    On another subject, they all keep talking about their 'beast.' This makes me wonder if this transition makes them look somewhat like a werewolf. Perhaps in this universe, this is how the werewolf myth came about.
  6. Al Norris

    Chapter 1

    Hmm, kinda sounds like the Business is on hold for a bit. Along with telling Greg's friends what's up.
  7. Al Norris

    Chapter 12

    I for one am glad that the next book is written. I have to read how much different this vampire universe is from the more traditional universes
  8. Al Norris

    Chapter 11

    I have to binge read to catch up with everyone else!
  9. Al Norris

    Chapter 22

    Not ATC precisely, but you'd be mistaken if you think no satellites are tracking every plane in the sky—and not just the US military.
  10. Al Norris

    Chapter 7

    Because it is those views that shape the public conversation, be they progressive or conservative views.
  11. Al Norris

    Chapter 5

    No, no, no! A Burgandy with Chicken and an Alfredo Sauce? A decent Sauvignon Blanc or better yet, a nice Chardonnay. Other than that Faux Pas, it was a very well done chapter.
  12. Al Norris

    Chapter 4

    If Greg is to become a vampire, of course, he will have to die! Here I go again... Extrapolating from a limited amount of facts!
  13. Nowadays, most of the Catholic orders, except Jesuits, appear to be weeding out anyone they think may be queer.
  14. Al Norris

    Chapter 1

    Doesn't much matter if you are ganged up on. And that's what would likely happen. Yeah, West Virginia. A beautiful country with absolutely horrid people. Don't jump out of the mold, or you are an assured target. Nice start, Justin. Not at all like Lone Wolf Ranch.
  15. Despite any advancements to our rights, we think we may have made, there are still loads of straight people who think we will do these things to children. Just because we are gay.
  16. Al Norris

    Chapter 41 S1

    So, the next book is gonna take us through the rest of college... That's a hint that there might be a book three? At any rate, it was nice to see Mac's folks treat the boys for their last few days of the summer.
  17. Even if Grandpa pays a token amount for rent, that money could also be placed into Dominic's college fund. Calling hours and funeral is over. Now it's a waiting game for how it will all affect Dominic.
  18. Al Norris

    Chapter 8

    Stop and remember that Xavier and Company are used to fighting Dead Walkers and other assorted Undead. Should I mention they also fought Dragons? I would think that Agda and her friends would be right at home with Xavier's group.
  19. Al Norris

    Chapter 8

    Agda will likely recognize Syth's name as being one of legend. What she makes of that, I guess we'll see. Will Agda recognize an Orakin when faced with two of them (remember, Garnet is also in an Orakin skin)?
  20. Al Norris

    Chapter 50

    I can't believe I didn't comment on how much I enjoyed this story. This being the second time around for me, it has been just as enjoyable. Thanks @WolfM.
  21. Al Norris

    Chapter 21

    Interesting. While I'm more into Firearms law, I would have thought that they were NFA items.
  22. Al Norris

    Chapter 21

    I'm thinking LASERs. Pulsating LASERs, to deliver more power. They also have to be something like an Infra-red LASER, for heat. Pinpoint accuracy. Ruby LASERs may be old tech, but parts from something like a Radio Shack and a Jewelry store, a cobbled together breadboard...
  23. Al Norris

    Chapter 35

    "I brought you into this world and I will now take you out!" The only outcome I can see.
  24. Death sometimes brings out the worst in some people. My Dad died in a mine when a 5-ton section of the ceiling gave way. I had just turned 6. The funeral was an open casket affair in which I was forced to kiss him goodbye. It's not something a 6-year-old should ever have to experience. Experience does drive a lot of what we write about.
  25. Yes, memories of having to go through all of that, aren't the nicest memories. Whether it be for friends or family, it's never a good time. @Lee Wilson, you pretty much nailed it.
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