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I finally remembered, Justin. Yes, this rewrite is much better than the original. The story flows much smoother than it did.
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This was a great chapter, Justin. I like the way Greg handled the courtroom scene. Better yet, the way the Banks were handled. Shear joy!
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I'm not at all sure what I would do in Greg's circumstances. It's a tough decision any way you look at it.
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Hmm, why does this story seem familiar? At least bits and pieces of it are. Wish I could remember when and where I read a similar story. At any rate, I like what you have here, Justin.
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On another subject, they all keep talking about their 'beast.' This makes me wonder if this transition makes them look somewhat like a werewolf. Perhaps in this universe, this is how the werewolf myth came about.
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Hmm, kinda sounds like the Business is on hold for a bit. Along with telling Greg's friends what's up.
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I for one am glad that the next book is written. I have to read how much different this vampire universe is from the more traditional universes
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I have to binge read to catch up with everyone else!
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Not ATC precisely, but you'd be mistaken if you think no satellites are tracking every plane in the sky—and not just the US military.
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Because it is those views that shape the public conversation, be they progressive or conservative views.
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No, no, no! A Burgandy with Chicken and an Alfredo Sauce? A decent Sauvignon Blanc or better yet, a nice Chardonnay. Other than that Faux Pas, it was a very well done chapter.
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If Greg is to become a vampire, of course, he will have to die! Here I go again... Extrapolating from a limited amount of facts!
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The Funeral and Dominic Adjusting
Al Norris commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Funeral and Dominic Adjusting
Nowadays, most of the Catholic orders, except Jesuits, appear to be weeding out anyone they think may be queer. -
Doesn't much matter if you are ganged up on. And that's what would likely happen. Yeah, West Virginia. A beautiful country with absolutely horrid people. Don't jump out of the mold, or you are an assured target. Nice start, Justin. Not at all like Lone Wolf Ranch.
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The Funeral and Dominic Adjusting
Al Norris commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Funeral and Dominic Adjusting
Despite any advancements to our rights, we think we may have made, there are still loads of straight people who think we will do these things to children. Just because we are gay. -
So, the next book is gonna take us through the rest of college... That's a hint that there might be a book three? At any rate, it was nice to see Mac's folks treat the boys for their last few days of the summer.
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The Funeral and Dominic Adjusting
Al Norris commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Funeral and Dominic Adjusting
Even if Grandpa pays a token amount for rent, that money could also be placed into Dominic's college fund. Calling hours and funeral is over. Now it's a waiting game for how it will all affect Dominic.- 29 comments
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Stop and remember that Xavier and Company are used to fighting Dead Walkers and other assorted Undead. Should I mention they also fought Dragons? I would think that Agda and her friends would be right at home with Xavier's group.
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Agda will likely recognize Syth's name as being one of legend. What she makes of that, I guess we'll see. Will Agda recognize an Orakin when faced with two of them (remember, Garnet is also in an Orakin skin)?
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I can't believe I didn't comment on how much I enjoyed this story. This being the second time around for me, it has been just as enjoyable. Thanks @WolfM.
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Interesting. While I'm more into Firearms law, I would have thought that they were NFA items.
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I'm thinking LASERs. Pulsating LASERs, to deliver more power. They also have to be something like an Infra-red LASER, for heat. Pinpoint accuracy. Ruby LASERs may be old tech, but parts from something like a Radio Shack and a Jewelry store, a cobbled together breadboard...
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"I brought you into this world and I will now take you out!" The only outcome I can see.
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Funeral Preparations and Legal Matters
Al Norris commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Funeral Preparations and Legal Matters
Death sometimes brings out the worst in some people. My Dad died in a mine when a 5-ton section of the ceiling gave way. I had just turned 6. The funeral was an open casket affair in which I was forced to kiss him goodbye. It's not something a 6-year-old should ever have to experience. Experience does drive a lot of what we write about. -
Funeral Preparations and Legal Matters
Al Norris commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Funeral Preparations and Legal Matters
Yes, memories of having to go through all of that, aren't the nicest memories. Whether it be for friends or family, it's never a good time. @Lee Wilson, you pretty much nailed it.
