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I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. Seeon has been kept from having any sort of normal life. His was a life in a gilded cage but it didn't prepare him for much. The world he is about to enter is vastly different. Stay tuned. More next Saturday.

“I think I killed him,” Sam said from the hallway. The group grew quiet as four heads turned and looked at the little boy. Sam gulped but didn’t move. “What do you mean you think you killed him?” Debbie asked, as she set down her soda and stared daggers at the little boy, Sam. Sam stood clutching his teddy bear, tears streaming down his face. His bare feet made no noise as he stepped into the living room and faced the teenagers gathered there. Tricia stood up and walked over to h

Chapter 3 – A Wedding Prepared For The next week was spent working furiously in crafting his dress. Batea came often to his room now and helped him finish it. It felt odd to be unable to wear pants but he knew that this was the final marks of a Ma’ Nee. After finally finishing the dress, Batea had sat down behind him and brushed his long hair, while she explained what little she had heard of the family he was marrying into. “Your brother is worried about them. He doesn’t know if they understan

Very nice wrap up to the whole story. It was nice to see all the reasons the judge handed down the sentence he did and the fact that it is finally over for the guys. It was a long time coming and it was nice to know you didn't just gloss over the on going problems but let everyone know just how after a year there is still fall out everyone is dealing with. Great job Andy. Enjoyed both stories greatly.

New chapter posts tomorrow Mark. Seeon has a few twists and turns get through.

Still plenty of twists and turns.

So we have a package now do we? Hmm. The games continue. Lay on KC, we wonder what you have up your sleeve.

Wow Nephy. you are plowing through it.

I have a book of famous quotes. I use to put one a day on the board for my students when I taught school. Here are some on life that I love. A man who dares to waste one hour of time has not discovered the value of life. - Charles Darwin All life is an experiment. The more experiments you make the better. - Ralph Waldo Emerson All the art of living lies in a fine mingling of letting go and holding on. - Henry Ellis Any idiot can face a crisis - it's day to day living that wears you out. - Anton Chekhov Believe that life is worth living and your belief will help create the fact. - William James Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment. - Buddha Don't go around saying the world owes you a living. The world owes you nothing. It was here first. - Mark Twain Every creature is better alive than dead, men and moose and pine trees, and he who understands it aright will rather preserve its life than destroy it. - Henry David Thoreau Every man dies. Not every man really lives. - William Wallace Everything has been figured out, except how to live. - Jean Paul Sartre He who has a why to live can bear almost any how. - Nietzsche Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you're alive, it isn't. - Richard Bach I arise in the morning torn between a desire to improve the world and a desire to enjoy the world. This makes it hard to plan the day. - E.B. White I do not regret one moment of my life. - Lillie Langtry I have a simple philosophy: Fill what's empty. Empty what's full. Scratch where it itches. - Allice Roosevelt Longworth I love life because what more is there. - Anthony Hopkins I still find each day too short for all the thoughts I want to think, all the walks I want to take, all the books I want to read, and all the friends I want to see. - John Burroughs

Okay, so we sit a week before Thanksgiving. I'm sort of confused but I think at this time of the year it is is normal. I work full time in retail. That means I am supposed to get no less than 32 hours a week. In fact the latest thing to come down is all full timers will have 36 hours a week. Well they keep scheduling me 30 hours and I have to find ways to add the two hours in so I stay full time or I lose my health benefits. Well next week is Black Friday. i work in one of those wonderful companies that now think it is a great idea to make it easier on the consumer so we are opening now at midnight. That means for a large number of us, our Thanksgiving has to end by five pm, because we need some sort of sleep before we go in for ten pm and begin working our ten to fourteen hour work day. I know for that week I am already scheduled 46 hours. Joy. I guess it could be worse. Some are opening now at 9pm on Thanksgiving eve, and others are presently talking about staying open all day. Yes, one of the only three days a year that we close is going goodbye so people can shop it. I know giving up my family, my day off, and sleep is nothing against the almighty dollar but whatever happened to being thankful for a good year, and having time to spend with your family. Oh, that's right, family died in the face of the almighty dollar. Silly me. This is supposed to kick off the holiday season. i don't know about anyone else who works in retail, but what was once my favorite season is now just one more time of the year to get through. The only things I truly look forward to are spending Christmas in bed sleeping, opening my presents from my friends and family (which means my father and my possibly my brother & sister-in-law if they remember in time), and eating a cold buffet meal cause it is one holiday I refuse to cook for. The other is hiding out from an event in December that has been horrible since I was fourteen years old. Sorry to depress anyone reading this. i was trying hard to get into the holiday mood. Hell I just watched A Miser Brother's Christmas and was preparing to write out my Christmas cards, but I can't seem to find the spirit to do it. I wish you better luck. Happy Holidays.

The story gets wilder and James keeps getting darker. Poor Beth. I am not sure what happens in the slave sheds but doubt it is going to be an improvement.

I promise not once does Seeon pass out. You will find that Seeon has a lot to deal with and I have a few twists and turns in this tale yet.

I promise not once does Seeon pass out. You will find that Seeon has a lot to deal with and I have a few twists and turns in this tale yet.

Thank you Nephy. Now I feel better.

Well the Thanksgiving cards are out. I bought my Christmas cards. For me that is a major step this year. I have my father's birthday card and gifts. Still trying to figure out what to do about Christmas for him. I forgot my sister-in-laws birthday. I wonder if that makes me a bad person? Anyway I ordered off Amazon, and sent her card out. All I can say is Oops, I'm human. I posted Seeon yesterday, partially because I was having a bad day and partially cause I know the site will be down on Saturday most of the day. I'm amazed that a story of mine can have over four hundred views between the first two chapters and just six reviews. I don't know if that is a good thing or a bad thing. Mainly because if I read someone's work and can't find something nice to say, I just don't comment. Makes me wonder what people really think of my writing. If my mood had been better yesterday AH would be done. Instead 30 sits half complete. i did finish Chapter 8 on Jonas. After I go over it tonight I will send that over to Andy. I still have two chapters of a Day in the Life of Seer I need to type up for FSO yet. I feel like am way behind. Then there nanowrimo. Well, the way this month is going I got about 10,000 words and haven't had two minutes to get back to it. The month is only going to get worse considering I work retail and we are rapidly getting towards Black Friday. Today is Veteran's Day. I wish to thank all those who have served to make our country safe. Whether you love it or hate, those people put their lives on the line to defend us. For that, I offer my heart felt thank you. Anyway, have a good day all.

Thanks guys and gals. It was just a case of the comment coming at the wrong time. Turned what was a good moment in a bad day, to a horrible one all the way around. Just needed to vent before it poisoned my day further.

Thank You Catristory. I am always happy to know someone is reading and enjoying my work.

I'm glad you are enjoying it. Was worried no one liked it due to the lack of comments. Other than my betas and editor. Hang on, Seeon has a lot more coming in his future chapters.

Aww. We are early yet in the story. Wait till the fun begins.

Yeah well, it was just one of those days to begin with and it sort of stopped me cold. Wasn't what I was expecting at all, and, well it hurt more than I should have let it.

KC, Seeon doesn't have much choice in what happens in his life. It is something that will become more and more apparent as the story goes on.

Chapter 2 – A Ma’ Nee is Made “You will become Ma’ Nee.” Seeon froze on the floor. I have to have misheard him. For a moment it felt as if his heart stopped and the floor he lay on tilted. Panic seized Seeon, and if he hadn’t already been on the floor he would have collapsed. Instead his mind brought forth all the stories he had read in the histories. It was the one problem of having no one to spend time with; books became your best friend. Unfortunately, Seeon knew exactly wha

I got out of bed today and wasn't feeling so great. I went to my weight watcher's meeting and stopped at Kohl's to pick up a new shirt. While I was shopping, I seen two young guys stop and lean in and kiss one another. I paused and smiled. It was the highlight of my day. Two young people in love. However, I guess I was wrong and don't deserve the chance to smile for someone else's happiness. As I started to walk away, feeling really good for the first time today,I heard the one turn to the other and comment. "Great. Can't even kiss without some fat old bastard looking on." Guess I should just put a bag over my head and stay home. Sorry, just really sort of made what had been a bad day that much worse.

Happy Birthday KC For a Dear Friend, I wish you all the best on your special day. May all the dreams you have come true, Now and always. Don't let the age scare you. It gets better.

Hmmm. So Percy is getting caught up in Max and those three little words have shown up. Nothing to make or break a relationship than that. What else do you have up your sleeve KC?