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  1. Chapter 6 – The Music Knew the End Charlie awoke before the first rosy fingers of dawn had spread across the dark sky. He woke feeling depressed and could not figure out why, for the life of him. Sitting up, he stretched but felt completely out of sorts so he forced himself out of bed. Charlie usually was graceful when he got up. This morning he stumbled into the bathroom, washed his face, and brushed his teeth. Then he took his time and carefully shaved his
  2. The rain without an umbrella. I almost had the car fall off the jack last time I changed a tire. Would you rather Spend the last moments with your loved one when they pass or Hear about the passing from someone else
  3. Why are you holding his pants?
  4. Yeah thought you needed to see how Charlie processes things. Don't worry. Working on the next chapter now. Things are about to get harder.
  5. Sorry but I was reading a story on here and one of the secondary characters said something that just tossed me for a loop. Now I am curious to see if what I thought is common or not. Do you feel there is an age when you should give up looking to find love because, well you are just too old. Or do you believe that love springs eternal and no matter what age you are love is always a possibility? My need to know is peaked here and figured I would ask.
  6. What were you caught doing?
  7. comicfan

    Turnaround

    I read all your chapters in one sitting. I've cried more than once. I am glad that Andy and Matt found their way back to one another. There are parts here that might haunt me. Some things struck a little close to home. But it was a beautiful story and I am glad you shared it.
  8. Why are your lips bruised?
  9. comicfan

    Epilogue

    I am so glad you gave us more. I like this much better and it gives it more of a closure. Congrats on writing such a beautiful piece.
  10. If I was to turn out my pockets I would be carrying at any given moment : my wallet, house keys, car keys, coins, my cell phone, and a small pad with a pen for notes and story ideas. I'd be naked if I had to go without pockets.
  11. I don't think life is ever clear cut. If it was we would know at birth who we were, who our partner was (if we had one), and what our lives would be. But being human and being who and what we are things never go smoothly and there are constantly hiccups all along the way.
  12. Don't worry, sometimes even with the answers you want to shut of and mope. Just makes realizing it isn't your fault easier and finding a way to put it behind you.
  13. I had a fantastic Beta read over my work for the Anthology. I would really however like to know what others think of it. Some I was a little too close to, to be honest with myself so I would appreciate other feedback. Thank you.
  14. I've watched C-SPAN and scared me badly.
  15. Why were you rubbing the figs?
  16. Listening to an old one.
  17. Okay, I read the whole thing in one sitting. Just sort of what I do. I see this has been left on the back burner for a while. May I please ask that you continue it. I want to know what is going to happen. I already see signs of Devin's past and from the little flashes perhaps his future. Not ready to just see Sunny leave and become one of those broken kids that Devin wants to see save. I hope you finish this tale.
  18. Oh I expect complications. I just want to know why. No one in life does something without a reason and I will be the first to admit, even when hurt badly by an ex I had to know why. Not always do you really like what you hear but for me it was a way to reach closure and be able to move. Otherwise it took much longer and hurt a hell of a lot more.
  19. Sorry like to many other men I need my pockets. I have of course dated a guy who had no problem with pants that had no pockets. Of course he was a tiny thing with a great asset and he made me carry all his stuff for him. Needless to say my jacket had to have pockets to carry his stuff. So yeah I like pockets in jeans and don't think I could do without them.
  20. Presently stuck on Adele's album 19. sigh.
  21. Maybe it simply reads "Hello again."
  22. Dear Evil Overlords a new list of important things has been minted. Please read so your part of the universe may be enslaved properly. It also helps to keep you alive.
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