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A marriage in name only but the problems are fixed. Sort of a depressing spot. Nicely done, Cole. Though i do feel it unfair that the wife has service, while poor Donnie is left with just his hand.

Great little story. I never know where these things will take the author and what they will come up with. I really enjoyed that and unlike some, I was confused through most of it trying to figure out why the boss's husband was hitting on him. Deftly handled. Hmm. The pen was the issue? Never would have guessed. You worked the words in flawlessly.

Hmm. Your story is in more intriguing than others I've read lately. A turkey all trussed up. I'm afraid to ask, but why is it I can imagine it so easily? Great story.

Thank you Sly.

Thanks for the review Aditus. With all that has been going on lately haven't gotten much out. Nice to know I can still connect.

Thank you Timothy. I usually do play it rather tame with my stories. At least until you read some of the rather more racey ones.

Thanks Valkyrie. Seems everyone enjoyed it so far. Glad to know I haven't lost my touch.

Glad you enjoyed it Avid. Just happy to finally have something out again.

Change of Pace It really wasn’t what I was expecting. Truthfully the whole thing was Raymond’s fault and I am going to keep telling that to anyone who will listen. It was his idea to make me go to the Bachelor Date Night Auction. It was something the Rainbow Club had dreamed up to help get some money together for the new building. It was to help after school GLBT teens that needed a safe place to be after school. They wanted to buy this building on Main Street but it was expensive and this was

Nice change of pace. Valentine's Day in November, who cares. I liked it, but really curious about Roman now. lol

Happy Birthday Lacey!

Happy Birthday Mark

Well I am glad the first lines are working for you. If you need to just look up the tag line and you should find all the first line prompts. See if any of the earlier ones fit for you. Good luck.

Jaro,Everyone deals with pain, and who is to say yours is less than mine. It is what you do with that pain that matters. As long as it encourages you to live and doesn't break you is all that the future can ask for. Thank you for reading and commenting. Wayne

Real life has become a bit hard. My father is in the hospital and things are rough. Don't want to go into detail. Just asking if you can spare a prayer or two for him and I it would be greatly appreciated.

Ron I am glad you enjoyed it and want more. At the moment I have a few other projects on the forefront but have learned to never say I won't get back to a project.

i like to think I am like most people. i am a social animal, someone who likes to talk, read, observe life. I try not to force my opinions on others, like to hear the good and the bad, the good to feel better, the bad so it is shared and made a little easier. From Facebook and real life I see enough anger and lashing out at others. I try never to do that. You'll find I post a lot of Peanuts, Garfield, and recipes. I make Happy Birthday comments, congrats on the good news, and offer condolences on the sad news. In real life I send birthday cards, Christmas cards, Halloween Cards, Easter Cards, Thanksgiving cards, and cards just to cheer people up. I think people forget, you don't have to tear others down to make yourself feel better. Sometimes just listening or saying hello can do wonders. A smile is free to give, and doesn't seeing a smiling face make you feel better than seeing someone yell and scream? With this month seeing breast cancer and bullying highlighted I just want people to take a moment to remember to be kinder, not only to others but to themselves. Every day you get out of bed and you have a choice to be happy or miserable. You might not have control over what others say or do, but you have control whether you want to repeat the gossip, add to someone else's misery or troubles, or try to just help someone even if it is just by opening the door for someone. Sometimes that small gesture helps not only them but you. Okay like I said just a few observations. Hope everyone is doing okay. Thanks for reading this.

All that is left is the final chapter and then it is complete. I really have to get it redone.

So glad you enjoyed it Mark.

Happy Birthday Elijah

Happy Birthday Chris. May all your wishes come true.

So with five votes the vampires win. Thank you all for your participation. I have some work to do to get this out in time. Thank you again.

Thank you for the kind review Jaro. It was a interesting to see what I could do with the idea of coming out of a disaster and getting your life back on track.

How much I missed, simply because I was afraid of missing it. - Paulo Coelho “It is not often that a man can make opportunities for himself. But he can put himself in such shape that when or if the opportunities come he is ready.” ― Theodore Roosevelt “The hottest places in hell are reserved for those who, in times of great moral crisis, maintain their neutrality.” ― John F. Kennedy

Glad you enjoyed it Timothy. Erik made some mistakes, but his future is up to him and lets just say he doesn't have much leeway to screw up. Thanks for reading and reviewing.