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  1. comicfan

    Chapter 6

    6 “Did you find out what was causing the noise upstairs?” Alice watched me carefully. I suddenly felt like a little kid again. I mean, do you really want to admit to ghosts? “I … I couldn’t find anything, which is why I called and begged you to come back,” Alice admitted, as she once again wrapped her arms around herself. “Alice, this is going to sound totally nuts.” I paused and looked at her, knowing there was no way to say this that wouldn’t sound like I had lost my mind. “I think it is t
  2. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Glad you liked it Valkyrie. Was getting a bit worried. Over four hundred reads but not a single comment.
  3. Are they taking volunteers?
  4. Unique take on the prompt. I enjoyed it a lot.
  5. Marna lives in a time when a computer matches everyone by genetic compatibility, but not by love. What happens when she decides to alter this system? Even worse, what happens when she finds two brothers who meet the very things she is looking for in a mate? Will she find her heart's desire?
  6. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Marna stood before the council and waited. She knew what she requested was unheard of, but because of her position as the daughter of one of the high council and the daughter of a cleric she wouldn’t be ignored. She stood proudly in the center of the chamber and waited for a decision to be made. When the time came it was Councilor Lorna who stood to address her. “Citizen Marna, we on the council have never faced such a request before. Always we have chosen our mates from those genetically mark
  7. comicfan

    Prompt 314

    So Beauty is actually a man. Nicely done. I enjoyed that and you had them kiss to break the spell. Interesting.
  8. True friendships will have ups and downs. Donna is just going to have to work to repair the trust she broke. Time will tell how they make out.
  9. I was super conscious of only referring to Pat as Pat. No pronouns or anything else. I also wanted a name that could be used for either a man or a woman. Pat worked. I was sure people would realize it long before the end, but it seems the story had the impact I was hoping for. Thanks for reading Cazpedroso.
  10. I never know when one of my prompts decides to raise its head and say it isn't done. I've learned to not say never.
  11. How often does life really go where it should? I just wanted to do something different with this. Everyone who wrote had a death of a person. I thought the death of a dress was a bit less, but the story grew. Glad you liked and commented.
  12. Yeah. I wanted something simple and sweet for the beginning of spring. Thanks for reading and commenting Ron.
  13. comicfan

    Halloween

    I might yet go back to this. Seems a few people really enjoyed it.
  14. comicfan

    Halloween

    I had fun when I wrote this and KC was helpful in making sure I had enough gore and all in it. Worked out well.
  15. comicfan

    Halloween

    Well Sam you might just get your wish.
  16. comicfan

    Halloween

    I've been working on a second chapter but wasn't sure if people wanted more.
  17. comicfan

    Halloween

    I'm glad you enjoyed it Gene. I had fun with it.
  18. The bright sunlight cut through the dimness of the bedroom like a knife. If it hadn’t been for the smell of coffee drifting through the apartment I probably would have tried to roll over and forget the events that were due to happen today. Of course, I really couldn’t push it out of my mind no matter how much I might wish I could. I stumbled out of the bedroom and into the bathroom to take care of the call of nature. I stood looking into the mirror knowing that it didn’t matter
  19. What would your life be like if you could always see the future? Would you do your best to alter everything or knowing you could only save a few would it affect you? Meet Tom Cleary, this is his life.
  20. “Are you sure there is nothing that can be done?” Donna looked hopefully at woman behind the counter. “I mean one more time to see if it will come out.” “Ma’am I’d like to say yes, but this is wine, grease, and I am not sure what else that is all over this dress. I will try my best one more time to get this out, but honestly,” the counter girl looked over shaking her head, “I wouldn’t count on it. I think this dress is headed for the garbage.” “Please, try to clean it again. I’m so dead if it
  21. I like doing slice of life stories and the prompts usually lend themselves to that for me Aditus. My crocus are all coming up now so my yard is full of the little purple and white flowers.
  22. Aww. Thank you Sly. I'm glad you liked it.
  23. I never know where a prompt will take me Valkyrie. Glad you liked it.
  24. Prompt stories for me usually are short GWood. Every once in a while I come back and expand on one. Who knows. Glad you liked it though.
  25. “Did you say the crocuses were blooming?” Ray looked up from his computer and faced his son. “Yeah. Finally some signs of spring.” “You always told me to look for the pussy willows to open and that was a true sign of spring.” “Oh, so finally paying attention to your old man are you?” Nick blushed and looked at his feet. “I listen … sometimes.” Ray laughed out loud and pushed himself away from his desk. “So what brought on the interest in spring? You finally find yourself someone to moon ove
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