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  1. comicfan

    Chapter 13

    A lot of things in Jonas's life are blue. It should be sort of common to you as a reader by now. Office, favorite bakery, the stone in Fire's pommel, and more to come all seem to be blue. As for Opie, hang in there because a lot is still to be revealed. Thanks as always for reading and commenting Sly.
  2. comicfan

    Chapter 12

    Jonas never has it easy. Fire is going to be heating things up for Jonas. Have no fear.
  3. A wedding. What could be better? Personally my life isn't going too swell, but I am determined to keep problems at bay till after Saturday. Saturday is the wedding of my best friend, my daughter, the one person I've counted on when my own world fell apart. From Wednesday on I will do whatever I can, move mountains, bury bodies, hide problems to make sure her wedding comes off without any more stress piling on her. I have yet to be to the "perfect wedding". I've been to the ones where the bride is carried into the church in a garbage bag because it is raining so hard that five inches of rain an hour have happened, her makeup is running down her face, and her hair now looks like a rats nest. I've been to the one where groom thinks the bride chickened out and has gotten so plastered that now that the bride has arrived, her limo broke down and it took an hour to get a new one out to her, the groom can barely stand. I've seen the groom not show up, or show up late with lipstick in places it shouldn't be and not from the bride to be either. Seen two grooms get into a fight over their vows in front of both their families and friends, where one hits the other one so hard the wedding ends with a trip to the hospital. You can bet your butt I am going to be doing my damnedest to make sure none of these wonderful events occur at HER wedding. From wedding dress issues (her dress won't even be ready for the final fitting till Wednesday), to bridal party issues (her female best friend wants to drop out because it is too expensive and told her today), to anything else that might blow up, I will be doing my best to help her out. I head up to be at her side from Wednesday to her wedding day on Saturday. Wish me luck.
  4. The ride back from lunch was pretty quiet. Food at the Deli Slice is always filling, and I found myself nearly falling asleep on the quick ride back. What was funny was, both Dan and Chris were almost silent until we were pulling back up in front of Krogers. “So, Jonas, what sort of weird stuff did you end up with in that pile?” Dan asked quietly, while watching me from the front seat. “Yeah, I mean I’ve seen some of the stuff people buy at the store. What more could people really want?” Chris
  5. Just so people don't think I abandoned Jonas. My editor has the chapter now. Hopefully before Monday it will be out. Sorry, things have been a bit rough on my end lately. Trying hard to play catch up.
  6. Happy Birthday Adam. Hope your day is a great one.
  7. Congrats Cole. Expect to keep seeing great stuff from you.
  8. Just wishing you a Happy Birthday Myr.
  9. Glad you liked it Ron. I never know where the prompts will take me.
  10. lol. Actually I based it off a bet a couple of friends had. The damn shorts look like a tux with little tails in the back and a tie on the crotch. Was funny as hell to see the loser in, but wouldn't have wanted to be in the bet they had either.
  11. I do as well. Cheesecake is food nirvana.
  12. “Here is to a nice meal.” Will lifted his glass in a toast to the other guests and to Ed, the host. “Here, here,” came the assorted voices from around the small table. Ed stood smiling as he waved his guests to sit. “It is just a small meal. I’ve made chicken la orange, a mixed green salad with watermelon and blueberries, cuscus, and fresh bread.” Lisa was busy taking some of the salad out of the bowl and turned to Ed. “Please, tell me you made your cheesecake for dessert.” Rick and Will nod
  13. It is a case of Dr. Barron being a little gun shy. He was already part of a major scandal due to his ex. Of course, Travis isn't his student and is making his intentions known now.
  14. comicfan

    Chapter 20

    The best laid plans of men often go astray - especially if a squirrel is involved. Very cute story.
  15. Your characters grow more interesting as we see them. Nicely done.
  16. Stepping out of the closet is scary as hell and doing it with someone you have a crush on doesn't make it any easier. Nicely handled.
  17. I think we all long for someone who knows us and is willing to put up with our quirks and habits. Some are deeply ingrained, but the love of the right person can make everything better. Or so I believe. Thanks for reading and commenting Percy.
  18. I'm glad you liked it. I just know from my master's level classes the massive change you see in the guys from freshman to going into these courses.
  19. “Can I talk to you?” I looked up to find Tina standing in my office doorway. “Sure. What’s up?” Tina entered and closed the door behind her. She had always been a very conscience student and was due to graduate in less than a week. I knew she had big plans for her future and was already accepted for her master’s degree. “Dr. Barron, um, this isn’t really my place to say it, but someone has to do something.” I sat wondering exactly what Tina could possibly be worried about. I watched as she
  20. Happy Birthday Graeme! Hope your day is a great one. Enjoy!
  21. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Prime was the first life of the cat. The others were various incarnations of seven. The old lady didn't want the kitten and tried to kill it. Hope that helps.
  22. Happy Birthday Mark. Enjoy your special day.
  23. comicfan

    Prompt 323

    That was really sweet and I enjoyed it.
  24. Thanks Arazon. It is all up to Erik and what he does with his life. Sort of like all of us.
  25. Thanks for reading Kitt.
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