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  1. carringtonrj
    A great short story, which covers some important, troubling issues. Thanks for sharing.
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    Chapter 1

    carringtonrj commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A really thought-provoking exploration of issues that are there today, even if they don't manifest themselves in this way, yet. You create the potential for some really interesting debates. I hope and feel that things would not go quite so badly in a situation like this, but really you raise points that do need to be addressed, and there are always plenty of bigots around who will find ways of being hateful to people they do not understand. A very worthwhile and important story. Thanks for sharing.
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    A fun read for sure. Sounds like you enjoyed yourself with this. Thanks for sharing.
  4. carringtonrj
    An emotional and thoughtful response to grief and loss - thank you for sharing.
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    Chapter 1

    carringtonrj commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Dark, as usual! You build things up very well, cranking up the tension whilst filling in the back story. I have to admit, I did not see the ending coming, though it's signalled well enough earlier in the story. It's a shock ending nontheless. All very well handled and described. I took it that Noah was dead at the end, but the other reviews seem to be hopeful that he survived. Hope so. Thanks for sharing a really strong story.
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    Chapter 1

    carringtonrj commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Sounds like the beginning of a saga here, andy! you've imagined a terrifying, yet horribly believable future and made it seem all too real with your direct, precise style. I like how you immediately personalise the issues and bring home so many of the implications by focusing on the pregnancy and the choices the have to be faced there. Good stuff, enjoyed it - if that's the right word! I can see the movie being a massive summer blockbuster! well done!
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    Chapter 1

    carringtonrj commented on Mark92's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Spooky stuff - I like the way you mix imagination and reality, dealing with all kinds of feelings in a creative way. You certainly know how to lead a reader on and make us want to read more. Thanks for sharing this.
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    Chapter 1

    carringtonrj commented on Yettie One's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Lively and interesting story. I like the way you address the reader and draw us in. I guess playing up the camp side is one way of expressing a new found freedom in being out, a way of celebrating your difference and experimenting with it. But not all gay people want to be like that, I guess. So it's an interesting issue to look at, and you do it in a fun way, rather than being too heavy about it, though you make some serious points along the way. Good stuff.
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    It's a really good story: original, interesting, carefully developed. I like the way you shift between scenes. And it's great how you fill in the details of the creation of Ten E so economically, so easily, without slowing the story of having to have a long build up to the main relationship. You sow the seeds for the bonding revelation subtly and generally carry the reader along really well. I read on with real interest and enjoyment. Always love a happy ending too!
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    Very sweet story. The shoe laces was a very nice touch. It was fun to see it develop and feel sure that the narrator was going to get close to Brennan but doubt how it could happen. Expertly handled story, as we'd expect from you. So nice to read your work again. Welcome back! x
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    Chapter 1

    carringtonrj commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 1

    Lovely story. Really well handled. You're such an expert at conveying a scene and creating atmosphere. You do just enough with this story, pace it really well, draw us on but don't make us wait too long for the happy ending. A really subtle piece in some ways, even if the ending is always coming. As for the idea - really interesting: how a small decision can change your life completely, how the pressure to conform can make you abandon your true self and be unhappy as a result. Great story, KC.
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    hope you're ok, wayne. good to know that the health care folks are looking out for you. sounds like you need to try to find a way to relax a little, take the pressure off yourself.
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    Your year does sound grim - in the extreme. So sorry to hear that. Publishing sounds like an exciting move. But I'm glad you're going to be around here a bit more too. You were definitely missed. Welcome back!
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    Chapter 3

    carringtonrj commented on Yettie One's story chapter in Chapter 3

    This one may be the best poem, even if the others are more important in terms of their feelings and ideas. Here you work with words in a lively and original way. Which one is you in the picture?
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    Need of Pain

    carringtonrj commented on Yettie One's story chapter in Need of Pain

    Friendship is so important. I like that you are able to express yourself directly and simply. It takes skill.
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    The Rose

    carringtonrj commented on Yettie One's story chapter in The Rose

    very sweet and touching. nice to see you expressing yourself so directly and being unafraid to be a little sentimental about your friend.
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    love the song. interesting observations on the diner.
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    The main relaitonship is developing very sweetly. It's interesting to think of this time in history when there was so little open, public discussion of homosexuality. How did gay people define themselves or understand what it was that they were feeling? I guess the Wilde trial would have been in people's minds, but then only in a very negative and half-understood way. Anyhow, you write with care, precision and feeling and you mix the sweet romance with some good, solid, factual business that gives the story a vivid and clear context. An enjoyable read.
  19. carringtonrj
    You always write interestingly. This gives a neat little glimpse into the workings of someone's mind. Thanks for sharing.
  20. carringtonrj
    Good thoughts. It's great to appreciate things.
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    Glad to know you're keeping busy. Hope you'll start on a new GA full length story some time again.
  22. carringtonrj
    You show learning and understanding in dealing with the historical material. The depiction of the new gay feelings is lovely, sweet, sensitive. The disturbing implications of the other relationship are handled well too. You write really well.
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    Snappy reviews fellas! Interesting stories.
  24. carringtonrj
    Good thoughts. I can never quite understand why I look so old in all my recent photos - then I remember how old I am!
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    A sad day

    carringtonrj commented on Andy78's blog entry in Andy's Blog

    Very moving.
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