CJ,
Me thinks thou doest protest too much!
In this topic where there are 57 posts, I count 20 of them are CJ's which is why he's managed to add more than 50 to his post count in 2 DAYS while he is sick with the flu!
I hereby out CJ as a rabid postaholic. No more lurker closet for YOU!
I proffered that title after reading the Prologue and 5 chapters. I suggested several but that is the one CJ jumped on. Only CJ has a clue where this story is headed
As an editor, I find the hardest part of the job is to 'hear' the voice of the author and follow what they are trying to say with a passage. I use the same trick of reading a passage out loud when I need to find the author's desired path through the story. Sometimes I'm right, sometimes I'm wrong - but it is always the author
At this point, I fell out of my chair from laughing so hard because I could see you standing there with the razor held to the side of your face saying, "Hello?"
Thanks for the laugh... I definitely needed that! ~E
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YES, I would since I don't MSN - I know, freak of nature that I am and considering I make my livelihood off MS, you'd think I'd be all over it but no, not so much...
As an editor, I try to catch all the normal typos and misused words but I would never write whole paragraphs. Instead, I would tell you what my impression of the troubling section is and where I felt the section went wrong. You may want that section to read that way and that is your choice. As an editor, my job is to help you present the best story you can, not to co-write it.
That's my 2