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Wow! Thanks for the compliment and kind words! It was also hard to write as I wrote about the abuse from the mindset that I WAS Joey telling my story to the Judge and a boy I found cute and kind. I won't lie, I actually had tears in my eyes as I wrote Joey's story.
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Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Thank you! Yup, that was a bang -
Chapter 23 Tender Loving Care
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 23 Tender Loving Care
Thank you very much. I do try to let everyone know who these characters are that are on the edge of the story, for they may become important in later chapters. Thanks for the review! -
Chapter 23 Tender Loving Care
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 23 Tender Loving Care
A country boy can survive Sorry, that song just came to mind. I hope they can too, but there's a method to my madness. Thanks for commenting. I appreciate it! -
Chapter 22 Plots and Tragedy
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 22 Plots and Tragedy
Hands you a tissue -
Chapter 23 Tender Loving Care
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 23 Tender Loving Care
I read your review in the blog. Thanks! -
Chapter 23 Tender Loving Care
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 23 Tender Loving Care
Thanks! Hopefully it won't be a long wait -
Chapter 23 Tender Loving Care Dad drove us to school this morning in a dense fog. When we left home, it was bright and it had all the makings of a beautiful day. In a matter of minutes, everything changed. At the time, I hadn't realized the weather wasn't the only thing that could change quickly. People's lives could drastically change in a matter of minutes as well. Dad let us out in front of the school and before we made it five feet, Mary met us, and with tears in her eyes, threw her ar
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It's awesome to have you back! I'm sure more than just me are glad to see you again, and writing. Sorry about the water filled eyes
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I hate that any child anywhere has to endure the type of treatment Joey experienced. There's NO excuse any parent can use to justify abuse. Joey was programed to answer to authoritative men in the position of power. Out of the programing and respect for the judge and his position, he told the truth as best as he could, although he did break down a time or two. Thank you for taking the time to write a review. I do listen to everyone that leaves one. I hope my explanation has led you to understand why Joey told his story the way he did.
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LOL yeah, I couldn't resist that line It was a huge step, but love can strengthen us beyond measure. Thanks!
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LOL yeah, I couldn't resist that line It was a huge step, but love can strengthen us beyond measure. Thanks!
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How in the world did I miss replying to your review. I most humbly apologize. Thank you for taking the time to review. I promise to never miss one of yours again!
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In a small town, small county, power can seemingly be enhanced. But everyone knowing you and your life history, a small community can also work against power. I'm glad Chasing Cars doesn't get over played here. Thanks for a thoughtful review... keep'em coming
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Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
I hope Andy doesn't come off as a drama queen. Sometimes one can see something unexpected that will shock one into making an uncharacteristic exclamation. Hopefully, that's the case here. Thanks! -
Joey does seem to be the all around package, good looks and heart. Andy is one lucky guy. Thanks, I try to make each character react as a person their age would to each given situation. Thanks for your review. It means a lot.
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I'm glad you like it. And thank you for your kind words. Let me know what you think of the coming chapters
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Thank you! Yes, the first few chapters has some errors like you pointed out. One day, maybe a really smart editor will take pity on me and help me fix those once the story is completed. Again, thanks for the awesome review!
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I think everyone has ups and downs, some more than others. clearly. I just try to push through each day by taking things one day at a time. I'm far from prefect, but I try to prefect my life, each day. What I mean is, I try and make each new day better than the last one. Sometimes I succeed, sometimes I don't, but the key word is, I try. I will never ever give up
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Thanks for commenting again on the story. JT's story so far, is like many of others, our parent's views being forced on us. How we react to that is what makes us different. Again, thank you!
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Chapter 10 When it Rains, it Pours
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 10 When it Rains, it Pours
You're moving right along in the story thus far. And if I told you everything in chapter one there wouldn't be any reason to read chapter two I'm glad you are liking the story and I hope it continues to give you a reason to read the next chapter Thanks for taking the time to leave a review, it truly means a lot to me. -
Chapter 22 Plots and Tragedy
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 22 Plots and Tragedy
Thanks Bleu! It was never my intentions nor will it be, in this story anyway, to preach my beliefs or those of anyone else. With that being said, the actions and beliefs of Andy and Joey are important to them and are a part of their character's make-up which makes them unique individuals, as we all are. Even Andy and Joey doesn't react exactly the same to events and circumstances. I'm glad you see the points I try to make through-out the story and the lessons that we can incorporate into our daily lives. Thanks for an awesome review and I hope I can continue to hold your interest through-out the coming chapters. -
Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Enoch commented on Enoch's story chapter in Chapter 4 Black Clouds on the Horizon
Thank you Prince. Even though your gut may have led you wrong, hopefully you'll continue to like the story Thanks for the review! -
The next couple of chapters will explain Joey's situation clearly. I promise that at some point the motive behind Timmy's reaction will be revealed. Again, thank you very much for leaving a review. It's the only reward my team and I receive.
