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  1. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    Thank you Jo Ann! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. And yes you're right, somehow it wasn't important anymore. Thank you for your review!
  2. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    Now you ask for the letter! Well, I wrote a very long paragraph about the letter and then I deleted it because I felt it wasn't important anymore and just distracted from Sam's healing process. Ah yes, the blue-green eyed friend...there's always hope. Thank you for the review and the speedy help.
  3. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    Thank you Ozymandias! My stories live through their characters which is why I'm very happy Sam and Mark worked for you. I deleted all the histrionics. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and thank you so much for the review.
  4. Aditus

    Dual Edged Hope

    How could we not focus on hope with all the evil? We would jump into the empty box and close the lid behind us without hope. After the educational part, which I liked very much including the creative approach to an old theme, I especially loved that Perry's first set up didn't work. It usually isn't THAT easy. I loved it, Thank you!
  5. Aditus

    Story: Part 2

    Keith and Aidan reacted to a traumatic situation by not talking with words, but by tending to basic needs, which in this case means getting away, getting something to eat, healing wounds. Words are clumsy sometimes. It might not happen in real life, I think only a very few would be able not to talk, but it showed how we sometimes feel instinctive close to people with similar experiences. Thank you!
  6. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    What a nightmare! Living there would kill me, wolves like dens. I had the feeling Ryan was a bit lost, although everything was exciting and new he didn't really belong there. So, if he goes away after his month is over, there is the chance he takes Adam with him, which would be a nice addition to the money he got. Right? And that could always be a recipe for disaster, I'm just saying. Thank you!
  7. I think he is holding a remote shutter release or however these things are called in his hand, so is this a self-portrait?
  8. When Sam comes home from a business trip and finds the house half-empty, he is forced to face the truth he ignored for too long.
  9. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    The Wardrobe Sam dragged his suitcase over the threshold, turned the hall light on, and kicked the door shut behind him. He reached out to drop his keys into the blue glass bowl on top of the chest of drawers as always, but then stopped mid-motion. Where the chest had been was only a dark smudge on the wall. The matching mirror Mark and he had bought in Venice was also gone . While he stared at the delicate piece of blue Murano glass art standing on the floor, his fingers holding the keys opene
  10. Apparently zombies have keen eyesight. Maybe this one is someone Red_A and Zombie find interesting.
  11. Welcome Carlotta! Let's make people cringe together.
  12. I totally did the wrong research...
  13. Dog person with a cat twist. Same Q.
  14. Yeah me too, so where would be the fun in just blurting the name out, right? I'll sit back and watch the thread then.
  15. I wholeheartedly agree. All my dogs were/are from the animal shelter and all of them were/are from the a-little-bit-of-everything variety. They are the best.
  16. Did you see the news lately?
  17. Essen, NRW
  18. Does anybody have a 'Molten Lava Cake' recipe that's any good?
  19. Happy birthday! Enjoy your special day.
  20. My home town soccer team, they're so bad you gotta love them. Same Q.
  21. I second that and wolves aren't dogs. I also apologize for .
  22. So sorry to disappoint... Those aren't lederhosen. You tell me.
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